Pokemon Adventure: The Pokeball Chronicals

Don't try to rush your chapters, it will only make them seem like they are of poor quality. Take all the time you need to write them, since sometimes it helps to release them slow. If you release them slow, the readers keep wondering what will happen and it guarantees you a dedicated fanbase. Just look everything over a few times before posting, adding detail where it seems a bit lacking, and sprucing up the dialog a little bit. I look forward to your next chapter.
 
Thank you for you're advice Jeffback, I'll try not to rush these chapters. Well here is the next chapter. Enjoy!

Chapter 11: A Loss And A Lesson

As Treecko and Mightyena stared off aginst each other, as they were the only two who remained in the battle, Crystal commanded first.

"Alright Treeko, use absorb!" Crystal cried as she showed a grin and pointed to Mightyena. Treecko then leaped into the air above Mightyena and began to glow a leaf green color. Then the glow became brighter and thicker as Treecko abosorbed some of his foe's energy. Treecko then fell back down in front of Crystal, waiting for his next comand.

"Mightyena, you use Bite!" Mike commanded next with a serious look in his eyes. As Mightyena grew weaker and weaker, he had to think fast to turn the battle around. As commanded, Mightyena then rushed at Treecko then unleashed a strong Bite. The attack seemed to take extra damage as well. Mightyena had scored a critical hit on Treecko.

"Alright Treecko, lets finish Mightyena off with pound!" Crystal then commanded with a confident look this time. By the looks of Mightyena's condition, being weak and showing signs of it, Crystal could win the current battle all with just one lucky hit.

"Mightyena, dodge the attack, then use Bite again!" Max cried out after Crystal had given her command. Just as Treecko ran over to Mightyena, he jumped aside and dodged Treecko's attack. And without question, Mightyena then quickly attacked. Using Bite once more on his foe. Then within a matter of seconds of the attack, Treecko could take no more, and fell to the ground apon the powerfull Bite.

"Yeah we won, Mightyena! we won!" Max cried as he showed a happy look and smiled. Max was trulely happy for this tight victory.

"Good Job, Treecko. You did great!" Crystal smiled and held her Pokeball facing Treecko, and returning it.

"Well, here you go, Max. Heres you're prize money!" Crystal said while smiling and handing Max his prize.

"Thank-You Crystal! great battle!" Max replied with a smile as well as he collected his reward. As the setting sun slowly began to fade into night, Alex Crystal and Jake waved goodbye to their new friends and adventured off. Soon however, they set up camp nearby. Before preparing for bed Alex and Crystal both folded out their sleeping bags and their tent as Jake did the same.

"Hey Crystal, I'm just wondering, but back at the battle with you and Max, arn't you a little disapointed that you lost? I know I would be if that was me." Alex questioned as he turned to Crysttal while folding out his sleeping bag.

"Well, I was kinda expecting that I would loose anyway. After Seedot's Bide attack, it all went downhill like I predicted. But I still tried to do my best and even if I lost, I did make it pretty far in that battle, more than I expected anyway." Crystal replied as she finished unfolding her bag. Alex sood as he listened to what Crystal had said and began to think about it. Ever since Alex was a little boy he had always hated losing. But he never thought about what Crystal had told him. The next morning Alex, Jake, and Crystal packed up and headed of quickly. Crossing over many hills, grassy plains, and small woods.

After several hours of walking across the vast land of Route 104, the three soon see many houses and buildings up ahead. The buildings and cities was none other than: RustboroCity!

"Guys look! thats gotta be RustboroCity up ahead! we've finnally made it!" Jake cried out in excitement.

"Finnally! lets go, quick! we are only a few yards away from our first gym badge you guys!" Alex said as he began to rush towards the last small forest that was standing inbetween the Route and RustboroCity.

"I'm telling you, this path is blocked kid!" said a voice.

The three turned around to see James in front of two people. One of them was a man the other was a woman. They both had on a blue short-sleeved shirt and had blue skull-printed cloths on their heads.

"No it isn't. you guys just got here and their is no reason for this path to be blocked. I'm not taking the main path either!" James replied in a sharp tone. James then looked at their hands to see that the two people had pokeballs.

"How about a battle, if I win you let me through, if I lookse then I'll take the other longer path." Jake said with a confident grin as he looked back up to the two people.

"Ha! you and what army?" Said the woman as she pulled out her pokeball.

"This army!" Alex shouted as he ran to the side of James.

"Alex? what are you doing here?" Jake question as he turned around to Alex with a surprised look.

"I'm here to help you out!" Alex replied still looking up at the two people.

"Well get ready, because were gonna teach you a big lesson in this battle!" said the man as he showed a grin and prepared to toss his pokeball.

Now its all down to another double battle. But this double battle, may be harder than the one with Max and Ruby..

To Be Continued...
 
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Here is the next chapter. Enjoy!

Chapter 12: Heroes Of Double Battles

Both seeming like grunts from a mysterious team, both the man and the woman grunt threw down their pokeball. For the man: Poochena, and for the woman: Mightyena.

"Go Zigzagoon!" James cried as he tossed his pokeball high into the sky, blocking the sun's light a little. Then with a bright flash of white light, his Pokemon, Zigzagoon was then sent out.

"Mudkip lets go!" Alex then tossed his Pokeball forward slightly, then with another white flash, Mudkip his only Pokemon was sent out.

"Mudkip!" Mudkip shouted as he returned back onto the solid ground of the earth. Mudkip then stood tall and strong ready for the battle that was about to start.

"Alright lets get this over with! Poochena, use bite!" Said the man. He pointed to Mudkip, showing his Pokemon his target. His Poochena then rushed over to Mudkip, then unleashing a power bite Mukip then tumbled back from the attack, but quickly got back up and returned to Alex's side.

"Alright, Mightyena use Swagger on Mudkip!" Said the woman as she also pointed to Mudkip with a serious look. Then Mightyena began to Taunt his foe making Mudkip angry, so angry that Mudkip's attack rose by a large ammount. However, after Mightyena's attack, Mudkip became confused.

"Zigzagoon, use Headbutt! on Poochyena!" James commanded with a grin and a confident look in his eyes. Zigzagoon began to run towards Poochyena faster and faster and lowered his head down slightly and then leaped forward and slammed inot his foe.

"I know Mudkip is confused, but I can't return him since I don't have anymore Pokemon left..I'll have to take a chance at this!" "Alright Mudkip, use water gun on Poochyena!" Alex then commanded and showed an unsure look he knew that Mudkip could get hurt but he also had no other choice at this point. Mudkip thankfully did not get hurt..This time. As commanded, Mudkip then unleashed a strong beam of water that crashed into Poochyena on contact, and prooved a critical hit as well!

"Poochyena use Sand attack on Zigzagoon!" said the man as he showed a sly grin. Poochyena then began to kick sand and dirt into Zigzagoon's face. With dust and sand blowing into his face, Zigzagoon's Accuracy was then lowered, making him more likely to miss attacks.

"Mightyena, use Howl!" Said the woman with a grin as well. She seemed as if she wasn't at all nervous and became more calm on every turn as if she already had a battle plan planned out. Mightyena the began to lift his head upwards and unleashed a loud cry. Doing so raised his attack a little and mightyena apeared stronger than before.

"Mudkip, use tackle on Mightyena!" Alex shouted as he showed the same unsure look. However this time Mukip hurt himself in his confusion as expected.

"Zigzagoon, use Headbutt again on Poochyena!" James commanded with a shard, solid look. Even though his Pokemon's Accuracy was cut, he still had confidence. Zigzagoon then rushed quickly over to Poochyena and rammed into his foe hard with his own head. Hitting Poochyena without a miss too.

"Poochyena use Bite on Mudkip!" said the man grunt with a now more serious look.

"Mudkip, dodge it then use water gun!" Alex cried just after the grunt's command. Just as Poochyena was about to use his attack, Mudkip leadped high into the air dodging the attack from his foe. To make things even better, Mudkip quickly shook his head back and forth as he snapped out of his confusion. Then landing on the ground in front of Poochyena, Mudkip unleashed another blast of water that hit Poochyena with great force. Poochyena then was knocked back far and tumbled backwards through the grassy ground. Poochyena was not moving either and had fainted after the attack of Mudkip's second water gun.

"I know you could have done better Poochyena.." The man then returned his Pokemon as he showed a disapointed look. It was now two aginst one and Alex and James then gained the upper hand.

"Mightyena, use Bite on Mudkip!" The woman grunt then showed a look that quickly switched from a confident look, to a more noerous and serious look this time. Mightyena followed the command and ran to Mudkip, and chomped down. Mudkip then let out a short yelp of pain as he was bit.

"Mudkip use Tackle on mightyena!" Alex said as he pointed to Mightyena with a determend look in his eyes.

"Zigzagoon, use Headbutt again!" James added his commanded right after Alex with a confident look. Mudkip then Rushed at high speed and rammed into Mightyena, While Zigzagoon attack without a miss again and rammed into the same foe with his head adding more damage.

"Alright, lets finish this! Mightyena use tackle on Mudkip!" the woman commanded with a solid look, and a shardcommanding voice this time.

"Mudkip dodge the attack!" Alex cried as Mightyena began his move. In mid rush of Mightyena's attack Mudkip leaped up and landed behind his foe.

"Now use watergun!" alex added with a grin and turned to James and nodded his head. James did the same. Mudkip wasted no time and shot Mightyena forward with a blast of water. Mightyena was sent flying across the ground at great speed from the push of the water gun attack.

"Now Zigzagoon, use tackle!" James commanded with a grin as well and pointed to Mightyena. Then Zigzagoon leaped a few yards in front of Mightyena and began to rush forward and with the impact from the tackle, mightyena was sent flying through the air and landed hard on the ground. With a blank look and no movement, it was clear that Mightyena had fainted apon the attack.

"..I knew you wern't strong enough for this Mightyena.." Said the woman as she returned her mighyena through its Pokeball.

"Here, heres you're prize money..You better enjoy it." She added still having the disapointed look from her Pokemon, then giving both James and Alex their prize money.

"Fine kid you can pass through here, but next time you won't win aginst Team Aqua! With that, the man and woman grunt left the feild.

"James, who were those people?" Alex questioned as he turned to James with a confuesed look.

"I think their Team Aqua..I've heard about them. But I haven't heard much about them."

"Team Aqua?" a voice said from behind. Alex and James then quickly turned around to see Jake and Crystal walking up.

"I've heard of them too. There are nothing but trouble you know." Jake said as he walked to Alex and James pulling up his backpack.

"Well there gone for now. So I gues I'll go through." James said turning over to the trail that was once blocked by the Team Aqua grunts.

"Hey James, wait! why did you want to go through here anyway?" Alex asked as he ran up to his friend.

"Well this way I've heard is a shortcut to RustboroCity. You didn't think I'd go the long route did you?" James grined from the thought of going longer ways.

"Well I better get going, I've planed for getting to RustboroCity before the day ends again." James added as he continued to walk through the trail.

"Well good luck in the Gym." Alex replied watching James as he walked by.

"Thanks, Alex! and thanks for the help back there too!" James replied turned back and smiling.

"No problem!" Alex replied back with a grin.

With the pathway opened and RustboroCity just ahead, Alex and the gang are just a few hours away from their first Gym Badge!

To Be Continued...
 
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I'm sorry again for not posting up a new chapter, I've been a little busy lately and I've had barely any time to make this chapter. Well if there are any mistakes or ajustments that I need to make, please let me know. Enjoy the story!

Chapter 13: Enter: Rustboro City

Alex, Jake, and Crystal walked through a trail that curved past the small forest dividing Route 104 to Rustboro City. With hundreds of green trees and the sun peeking through into the small forest, the small woods began to light up with the sun's bright light. It seemed to be a great day with only few clouds in the bright sky. To make things even better, Alex and his friends were only a mile away from Rustboro City and their first Gym Badge!

"Wow, who knew this trail could be this long.." Jake said quietly to himself, while looking down to the hard ground of the trail. Jake continued to walk with the group as he began to scan the trees of the forest, looking back and forth along the sight of the trees they moved from a small breeze.

"Well, mabe we should have taken that short-cut that James took afterall." Alex confessed as he beggan to slow down and begining to put his hands into his pockets.

"Well we can't turn back now, Alex we've been walking here for more than ten minutes now. We have to be near the exit by now." Crystal replied turning her head over to Alex.

"Well.." Jake didn't finish what he was about to say he then pulled out his map at took a close look at it.

"It doesn't look like there is a short cut on this map.. I guess it wasn't marked on this map." Jake continued lowering his map a little and showing a slight confused look.

"However it does have the road that we are on listed here!" Jake added showing a grin.

"Well what does it say Jake? are we almost out of here?" Crystal asked as she looked back at Jake.

"Well lets see... Hmmm.. Well I can't say were we currently are, but I I can say that the trail isn't very long on this map. I'd say we only have a few minutes of walking left!" Jake answered with a growing smile.

"Wow, thats great!" Crystal said with a smile. Alex began to show a smile too as he heard the good news.

"Huh? hey wait a minute, whats that?" Alex's smile dropped as he quickly tilted a lttle trying to peek around a turn ahead. Alex then ran up to the turn in the trail to see the forest's exit!

"Yes! we are finnally out at last!" Alex said with joy as he smiled and ran forward through a long grassy feild. Crystal and Jake then came out too, both running and showing excited looks.

"And look! I think I can see Rustboro City!" Jake said with a smile as he pointed ahead. There was a small city that stood inbetween a group of trees. The three then rushed forward to Rustboro City. within only a few seconds of runing, the three friends had finally reached: Rustboro City! As the three walked through, they looked all around at the large city.

Bustboro City had dozens of homes and buildings and a long road that covered every corner of the city.

"Hey look! its James!" Alex said in surprise as he turned around and noticed James who was entering a Pokemon Center up ahead. Alex then rushed up to James just before he entered the Pokemon Center.

"Hey James!" Alex said slowing down as he got closer to his friend.

"Oh hey, Alex! what took you so long?" Jake said with a grin as he turned around.

"Well we decided to take the loger route through the forest, I guess that short-cut really was short if you've already arrived and beat the gym here." Alex answeredwith his eyes a little big at the though of James already beating the Gym Leader.

"What? Gym Leader? oh no, I haven't challenged the Gym here yet. I'm just coming here to make sure that my Pokemon are perfectly healed before I have a Gym Battle." James replied as hebegan to pull out his Pokeball.

"Oh! I thought you did since you were coming into this Pokemon Center and all." Alex said as he looked up at the Pokemon Center then looking back at James.

"Well after I make sure that my Pokemon are healed up, I'm going to challenge the Gym Leader. You know, you all should have a few battles here. I hear that the trainers here are pretty hard to beat since most of them have already battled the Gym Leader here. You could train you're Pokemon here before getting you're Gym Badge. The Gym Leader here is really strong I hear." James said as he slowly began to turn back and enter the Pokemon Center. Jake and Crystal then walked up after a quick look around the City.

"Well, I guess we could have a few battles before we go on.." Alex said to himself and thinking.

"So are we going to the Gym or what?" Jake said with a grin showing.

"You know, James suggested that we could have some battles before we go to the Gym here.. Mabe we should have a few battles!" Alex repliedturning around to his friends.

"Good thinking, Alex! thats what I would suggest as well!" Crystal said as she agreed with Alex and James's suggestion.

Now finnally reaching Rustboro City, our heroes are now ready to Challenge trainers from the city, and soon to battle the Rustboro City Gym!

To Be Continued...
 
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