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Hikari <3

KANON!!! <3 From Candyland!
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    I didn't cry on the outside but I literallly broke down on the inside ;_;. Like that was such a major plot twist I thought they would get together but I see Kara was two faced. Poor Kris please tell me someone walks in...no wait don't tell me.
    Your like some kinda genius
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    Just got one so I shall read it right away after this VM, Hopefully its not enough to make me cry :^: but I'm excited to read it :D. With that said -goes to read chapter 4-
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    Stop making me anxious xD I'm wanna have my predictions and I bet I could be right...maybe wrong :[. Oh and no your not a bother at all. I'm glad to know someone with such a creative mind n_n.
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    I feel like I'm getting somewhere :D. I have a feeling the mom might change for the better...keeping my fingers crossed here. The whole phone and Richard scene were REALLY lifelike and you did an excellent job portraying that so well.

    On a sidenote there were three errors I spotted. One was in the first paragraph as you used they instead of the, you spelt I think you spelt filfthy worng if I recall, and there was something else but I forgot ._.
    Gabri
    Cha-ching! You guessed it right. But edit that VM and remove it please. It's just that I don't want people seeing it and adding me randomly.
    Gabri
    Nah, I don't have and I've never had. I 'm not a fan of those things.

    The answer to the last question is: I know how to read :D
    Gabri
    Well sorry but I don't have the faintest idea of who you might be :\ What was your old account called?

    EDIT: Wowowowowow, wait a second... Abby? :O
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    Haha considering you joined two days ago, I don't, :P Well not this account, what was your old one? Or can you remember?
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    Yeah that is true :I kinda like every artist has there way of doing things. Oh well its like 11pmish so I'm heading to bed :). Night Hikari-chan n_n.
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    Do you follow that whole "process of writing" sequence. Brainstorm, roughdraft, revise and edit, final draft, proofread...I think that's it
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    Yesh that is so true. Usually when I read over my own stuff I don't find as many errors as someone else who read my stuff, if they can considering I have horrible handwriting xD
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    Oh yeah that's pretty natural that's why proofreading was invented xD. I can tell that English is one of your favorite subject...am I right :D?
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    Please do as you are surely going to get rich off this book hopefully you split some money with your favorite wolfy and your welcome as I'm a bit of a grammer nazi xD
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    Aww cliffhanger D: maybe I should have asked for whole chapters xD. I noticed on mistake and that was you used he instead of she at the the beggining of the dream part as you were referencing to Kara in the dream but yeah amazing and goldfish crackers are delicious...wish I had some :o
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    I currently live in Georgia =_= and it sucks down here. I can't wait to I'm in Pennslyvania it looks so awesome up there :D. What part of pennslyvania do you live in?

    *goes off to read chapter 3*
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