Yes, it is hard to find good fan fics about Pokéspe... if there's one thing that really annoys me, it's bad grammar. You'd think people would check their stories before uploading, but no. English is only my third language, and still a lot of people who do come from the US write with more sloppy than I do.
You're also right about the reviews. Less than 3% of the people who read my stories, review; I think it's the same with other authors. Quite frustrating. Isn't the story good? Are are they just lazy? Probably the last. Well, since I don't get that much reviews, I'm also happy if I get one, no matter how short it is ;) But indeed, ususally it isn't very deep or constructive, haha. I myself try always to leave a review if I read a story, whether I liked it or not; it's just polite, I think.
I hope you'll like Embrace just liked you liked Beach Day! It's a bit more serious, but I was in a mood for that ;-)
Ohh, I see you've written quite a couple of stories! I'll check them out :D By the way, what is Mossshipping? (In your profile, you state that you fangirl about it XD)
See you in the club then! It's quite hard to catch up sometimes, haha; they're so many members, so if you don't pay attention they're suddenly five new pages xD;