Well, the thread seems to be getting mixed up, i admit. You don't have to edit the first parts, but could you please edit the part where she starts to come in to the lab? The egg hatching is fine, it's just not how everything is happening. Ok, let's say that you came in but the fight was already done. Let's also pretend that Cooker's character never existed to make things easier.
What you should do is just come in to see about 8 people chatting. Some looking confused, some not. Then you are talked to by a young boy, about 16 years old who introduces himself as Jack Nebulon (That's me) because i already introduced myself in the post before yours.