Recent content by lucysaur

I'm not sure i like your Professor Oak character in this fic, he seems really cold and harsh! Professor Oak is supposed to be nice! Plus making those two pokemon fight till they faint doesn't seem like him. just my thoughts.

Chapter 8 Chapter 8 Repercussions and hard work! Elle talked with her Mum as soon as she got home and her Mum agreed that the best thing to go would be to go into school early on Monday and speak to Mr Michaels. So Elle spent all of Sunday getting to know her new Bulbasaur, and letting...

For me it wouldbe Jack for a boy and Anna for a girl. "Original" names are really overrated!

Chapter 7 Chapter 7 The lost Bulbasaur The next week at school was even harder! Because Squirtle had got to level 7 it spent its morning species lessons practicing its bubble attack. It was hard at first to produce even a few bubbles, but by Wednesday Squirtle had Bubble attack down and...

Chapter 6 Your wish is my command... Chapter 6 Battle Saturday. Saturday morning came and it was Elle’s brother that woke her up by jumping on her and Squirt. “Don’t forget today’s the day of our battle! You’re gonna get creamed! Breakfast is on the table!” Elle groaned and managed to...

Edited :) I meant Inspired as in clever, from inspiration etc. so the sentence works.

Hya :) I like your avatar.

Thanks for the detailed review, i double checked my capital letters and full stops so hopefully this chapter will be a little better :) I've tried to break up long paragraphs but some of them are as short as they can be. i hope its not impossible to read. Chapter 5 New experiences and a fierce...

I liked that you wrote a whole chapter with just the kids hanging around, it made it seem realistic. Life isn't all action after all! Plus it helped set the team dynamc.

chapter 4 Ok sorry for any mistakes these havent been proofread yet but I wanted to get a new chapter out. Chapter 4 Impressive/humbling “I choose you Chameleon” “I choose you Venusaur” “This should be interesting” Elle whispered to Squirt “although Chameleon has a type advantage over...

Generally i liked the story! i want to here more about mike's adventures, is there more?

NOTE: I do actually have the sketch Elle draws in this chapter but couldn't work out how to add it. Feel free to pm me if you want to see it (it makes things a little clearer) or if you know how to add it to the story. Chapter 3 First Class After lunch it was time for their Ella and Squirt’s...

I'm really sorry I couldn't work out how to change the font size after that fact and having different sizes was an accident. I just re posted chapter 1 in size 3 which is the size i use in word. hope thats ok.

my order of preference is: Squirtle Bulbasaur (hence the name) Midkip Totodile Charmander Piplup Cyndaquil Chikorita Chimchar Treeko Turtwig For some completely illogical reason I love squirtles. I'm not usually a grass pokemon fan but theres something about bulbasaur, i like the concept of...

Chapter 2 Chapter 2 The next day Elle actually slept well that night, probably because she’d worked hard with professor oak, dreaming about what her life might be like with her new Squirtle. Her Mum woke her up at 8am, and she eventually got the bus to her new school at 8.40. She got on the...