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Reading online is never as good as reading a manga in real life, imo. Though I don't have an exact reason why that's the case. The feeling's totally different for me, haha XD;

StevenXFlannery? I don't believe they've ever met in the manga, right? o.o; though they do sound like an interesting and shippable couple.

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Ah yes, I actually bought the manga because I liked the games :3

And great <3 we support almost all the same ships, haha. I'm not sure who to pair Flannery with, haven't really deciding actually.

Yes, you can't dislike the fanservice <3 What other ships do you support? :3

By that, do you mean person wouldn't like the R/S Arc alone, or just wouldn't like the whole manga and all its arcs? o.o

I agree, didn't really like Emerald (but I did like the ending of the arc XD ) And yes about the RS Arc <3 The whole cast of supporting characters behind Ruby and Sapphire were one of the best casts imo. Marge/Courtney, Steven, Wallace, etc. Oh, I enjoyed the arc mainly because of them (and the Franticshipping, you can't say no to the Franticshipping <3)

I agree, I agree. The manga is really old, I can't really remember what happened in the RBG/Yellow Arc, haha. My favourite arc was definitely the RS one <3 I read FRLG, but skipped a good deal of the Emerald Arc (didn't really find it that interesting :x )

Ah, that must be pretty tough, I'm struggling with my second language as it is, haha ^^;

Oh, and I failed to mention the frostbite! I think that was a good idea too, I liked Lorelei's ice dolls in the manga, cute but deadly! But personally I preferred her old design to the new FR/LG one. The Yellow Arc-Lorelei looked prettier, haha.

Okay, I've gotten the answer! And I think I was the one who actually made the mistake, haha >< ;; The original sentence was "Lorelei, beautifully unsympathetic and expressionless, would make a fine mind ruffian, wrenching spirits as she passed by and never picking up the pieces they'd leave." Right?

Well, last time in english class, I was taught that one can't attach more than one participle phrase to a main clause. But in this case, I don't think you are. You included an 'and' between 'wrenching' and 'picking' so I believe that that's correct. Buuutt.. the sentence still looks a bit weird to me, probably because its long, but that could be just me ^^;

Oh, and you're welcome about that review, it's no problem. I enjoyed the story!

Thank you! Yeah, I figured a summer theme would be nice, with the current hot weather ;)

Well, I'll see you around in one the clubs, haha XD

Okay, you have to become my friend, haha. You are in the same clubs as I am! O.o (Oldrival, Death Note, and especially Pokespecial). Well, good taste, I guess! ;D