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A very strong start!
The narration is very interesting and the characterization is really good. I always loved reading more about Elite Four members. They are so unique and competent, but they rarely have any screen time.
I'm fond of your Team Skull, who seem to be a bit more bloodthirsty in...
Okay, I will look forward to the trade when you have returned! If no one else expresses interest in them, I will happily take all three, otherwise I'll still be ecstatic to get even 1 6IV Feebas. :)
Thanks, Soapy. I tried to send you some of my better stuff, although it wouldn't let me judge the IVs while trading. I tried to give you a 4IV-5IV Vulpix. Hopefully it was one of the right ones.
Soappy: If you're offering I'll graciously accept, then. But once I get the HA Hyper Voice Eevee I'll breed some and send you one with a good nature. :)
You have something potentially very interesting here. I like that you take us step-by-step through your journey and explain your thought process. It's coherent and I understand the main points that you're drawing.
Now, there are some areas where you can improve. Specifically, grammar...
Soappy: I would not want to take advantage of your generosity. I'll be searching for HA Eevee later, though, although it won't have Hyper Voice. If you are fine with regular HA let me know and I'll trade it to you when I get it from some balls. :)
Ah, sorry, Soappy. I'm looking for HA Eevee with Hyper Voice. Sorry for the confusion. If you're interested in either the HA Vulpix, HA Mareanie, or HA Dratini let me know.
Hi!
I'm interested in your 5-6IV Feebas if it's still available. (Gender/ Nature doesn't matter).
The afternoon is a good time for trading for me.
Um, I'm not sure what I could give you. I have HA Dratini and HA Vulpix, oh and HA Mareanie.