Recent content by Negrek

Err, well. Nina and I haven't even really talked about the art part of it at all, so I don't think there's anything to turn in in that regard...

No worries, good to hear it got through okay!

You got mine, right? Just asking since I didn't get a confirmation.

Thanks, I'll get to it! And sorry about the delay.

Any chance of an extension on this? A week would be nice.

Sure, why not? I'll take an absol.

Ooh, dang, I have absolutely no ideas for that theme, but I'm sure I'll be able to think of something. I'm in!

Thanks a ton! You're a lifesaver.

Hi, are you free to trade?

Awesome. I'll be online for the next few hours; will edit this post with possible times tomorrow if I don't catch you. I'll be around tomorrow evening-night; how about sometime between 4:30 and 6:00 EST? FC 3325-2431-3050

Hi, would you be interested in a Love Ball Smoochum? I'd be interested in trading for a HA Bulbasaur if so.

A lot more sensory detail in this chapter than there was in the old version! The emphasis on cold and Arceus, in various forms, also ties it in well with the previous chapter. At the beginning, though, there were points where I wasn't entirely sure whether the POV character was Annie or Kyurem...

...ad hominem? Really? How intelligent you make your pokemon definitely depends on the needs of your particular story, just like you have all kinds of fiction showing real-world animals at all different levels of intelligence. There are stories that attempt to show animals at an actual...

tbh given the kinds of evil team plots that get thrown around in canon, I don't think it would come across totally unreasonable for TR to come up with a way to capture and control Arceus, Dialga, etc. I mean, they already were able to capture/restraing Mewtwo, for example, the Arceus has Arceus...

Yeah, can't say I agree that opening with dialogue is a problem, nor that starting in the middle of a conversation means that you're going to have to slow things down later to catch readers up to what's going on. You can simply build the context as the scene/conversation unfolds, same as you...