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thanks again,I`ll read through the next chapter at least 5 times. lol

it`s been a long time since i udated. I have been competing with my horse and just havn`t felt like udating,but here`s a new chapter Ash looked out the window and noticed something had changed. The fog had gotten weaker. From where he sat, Ash could see the dark figure of a tower. The...

thanks!! That really helped me out. I`ll work on this for a while, then post the next chapter.

Once outside, Ash and Pikachu ran at full speed towards the light, but quickly stopped when they saw a shadow behind the small weak light. Pikachu growled and small sparks came out from its read cheeks. The shadow came closer and closer. Ash held his breath; he heart was beating faster and...

thanks! at least I have two readers I know about.

please leave feedback if you are a member of this forum and reading my story. I need to know if more people are reading this or not.

part 2 After ten minutes, Dawn felt a shiver. She looked around and noticed something very strange. The sunlight got weaker, as if something was blocking it, something invisible to the man eye. Dawn laid her sight on a huge tower not far from where they where sitting. She could not believe...

Thanks for giving me advice! I improved my story so tell me what you think.

More!more! more! please?! it is really good

Save me! (new title and improved story) THis is my first fanfic about pokémon. This fanfic is kinda based of the new movie "Dialga vs Palkia vs Darkrai" This fanfic is NOT like the movie.It`s simply my own idea,but it contains some of the pokémon from the movie and some characters as well. But...

Woe,this is aweosme!!! new reader here.lol I read all of it sp far it took me like 4 hours.lol Please,please,please post more soon!!!!

this was a long first chapter. I like it,more please!!!:)