Since you left before I could tell you I just wanted to let you know that there may be a few things wrong with the dialogue, like referring to things improperly, because I don't know the entire story of the game I could only refer to what I could remember about the plot XD
Anyways with the next batch of dialogue could you also send a plot summary, I don't need it to be very detailed just stuff like: "You go to XXX City and talk to XXX about the XXX", and stuff like that...
Hope you like the work I did though. : D