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Nice use of sprites Connor... But yeah... the plot needs more work.
Some artistic pointers from a fellow friend?
1) When you start a story, always have a background! The story needs a foundation to build off of. With out that. It's screwed.
2) PLOT HOLES!! A big boo-boo for story writing. If...