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Trainer Name: Lukas Aleph Age: 22 Gender: Take a wild guess... Appearance: Black hair that spikes backward, tanned skin and coffee brown eyes that bear a lazy look. Wears a green and black accented sweater and blue denim trousers. Sneakers match his sweater. Region You Hail From: Johto...

I'll have to side with Gymnotide on a couple of issues: 1,for the sixth gym, there are an awful low number of gym trainers. And if the gym is modelled after the FRLG Saffron Gym, I'd expect at least 7 junior trainers. 2. Your gym roster is a bit extensive for a gym leader. True, Leaders have...

OK, really busy right now, so i'm gonna ask for nidoran male right now and hopefully get some time to write a profile later. That OK?

Well... to comment on the new add-on, a couple of suggestions come to mind: 1. A scene change (***) should have been effected before starting. 2. No matter how much Dragonair pwn, i'd still keep an eye on the giant rock-plated rhino stampede heading my way. 3. Even if I didn't, i'd make it...

TCQ ch26~2 *continued from last post* *** Two days after their battle for the Inferno Badge, during which Ace, Lavender, Crimson and Arcana had been put on bed rest, Sapph and Haley left the Pokémon Center to continue their journey due north, Sapph with a shiny new Inferno badge to join the...

TCQ 26 It's been a while, hasn't it? Let's go! Chapter Twenty Six: Can You Take the Heat? Five minutes to midday found Sapph Manson sat in the locker room which adjoined the large gym building alone. Sapph, who’d dispensed with his vibrant red hoodie for now, leaving on his white round neck...

Finally reviewing! Well, there's not too much difference between the rewritten prologue and the original, and as only three parts hit me as odd, they'll be all I comment on. What was held down below where? Why would one step down the stairs? This was an intro that left a lot to be desired...

The Quest continues... My apologies for neglecting the fic in recent weeks. I ca do nothing but say I'm sorry to whoever still reads. And so, without further ado... Chapter Twenty Five of The Corei Quest... Chapter Twenty Five: King of the Volcano “Finally! Appleburn City!” Haley Kent...

TCQ ch 24 This chapter is rated PG-13 for violence and possible swearing. Chapter Twenty Four: Paying His Dunes Grand Corei Desert The sandy wind rushed through his hair which was of a reddish blond hue, albeit more red than blond. His grey eyes were fixed on the shifting, hazy horizon as...

Ouch, sorry, Raph! Better luck next girl. LOL Eevee being pushed onto Josephine could have been fleshed out more imho, but it was a well done chapter. And aren't there laws against using pokemon attacks on human beings? I'm thinking Arthur got off a little too easily there. Ah, well, 'twas a...

SEASON TWO BEGINS! Ah, well, Tiggs... I rile a lot of fans the wrong way with this fic. Hitmonchan fans... Pikachu fans... the list goes on. Well... with no questions to make a new Starstruck special (I prefer to make them exclusive to each forum board I post on), we'll have to skip the...

Well, to not beat a dead horse, let me not repeat what the others so far have said. It's a much richer start than before and now you add intrigue to the fact thatt four trainers are going several ways, with them you increase the number of adventures to revealin all of their lives. The one...

TCQ ch22~2 *continued* Without further ado, Ricon threw down his last challenge to the forefront of the gym’s defense, where it cracked open, releasing a spurt of bright white light which spilled onto the field and took form: two webbed, three-digit feet which held up a dumpy, yet lightweight...

TCQ Season 1 Finale! There were a few cut scenes here (Lavender's POV was editted out for reasons later explained) and the Anuvi vs. Farfetch'd battle was rather abridged. Anyways, with out further ado, I present the season one FINALE of TCQ... with good tidings to all authors and reviewers of...

I guess it's about time i threw my hat into this review ring... First, the prologue. It was very impressive and most things were explained really well. Aside the Pippa thing and the crossing oceans thing that bobandbill iterated on, there were no real problems. Great job. chapter One? Ah. Now...