The Trainers Four

Well, the story has indeed, like Feathing said, improved very well from the first one. And I did enjoyed it, though I want to see more from the Paul and Rachel part.
 
Ouch, sorry, Raph! Better luck next girl. LOL

Eevee being pushed onto Josephine could have been fleshed out more imho, but it was a well done chapter. And aren't there laws against using pokemon attacks on human beings? I'm thinking Arthur got off a little too easily there.

Ah, well, 'twas a great pst to be sure, and hopng to see more like it soon.

apologies for the late reply. the net sucked a few weeks ago. it's a lot better now.

L@er!
 
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