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The Trainers Four

The Wave

Something to believe in....
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    • Seen Aug 25, 2016
    Well, the story has indeed, like Feathing said, improved very well from the first one. And I did enjoyed it, though I want to see more from the Paul and Rachel part.
     

    Shiny Mightyena

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    • Seen Oct 19, 2013
    Ouch, sorry, Raph! Better luck next girl. LOL

    Eevee being pushed onto Josephine could have been fleshed out more imho, but it was a well done chapter. And aren't there laws against using pokemon attacks on human beings? I'm thinking Arthur got off a little too easily there.

    Ah, well, 'twas a great pst to be sure, and hopng to see more like it soon.

    apologies for the late reply. the net sucked a few weeks ago. it's a lot better now.

    L@er!
     
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