It was 11:02 PM here on the West Coast where I live. You're probably further out east than I am. Getting through all of that in 3-4 days is impressive-that's around two hundred thousand words of reading. I'm realizing now, though, that a lot of those words are just clutter, so I'm going to make the rewrite a bit tighter than the original. By doing this, I think the story will be a lot easier to follow. And I haven't heard of Dr. Mack Foxx. But I'll look into it, now that you bring him up.