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As the team stepped up and Team Aero appeared Knockout quickly released Kinu. "Ok since those are flying types... Kinu use Rapid Spin!" Kinu just stood there with a scared look on his face as three other pokemon took out the zubat. "Kinu, next time we get'm no excuses" He then followed the rest...

Name: Jackson "Knockout" Vance Age: 17 Gender: Male History: Knockout was born in Texas, and even when he was young his family knew he was destined for great things. As he grew up he was always the largest kid around. Due to this he was always getting into fights with older kids that kept...

As they ran toward the river it really hit Rallen just how little there was left. The river was grey with ash and remains. "Oh god", he whispered. Rallen thought of everyone that lived because of this river, and he just fell to his knees and cried. "Get ahold of yourself", he said as he slapped...

"Wake up you lazy waste of space". Those were Rallen heard. "Why"? "Someone needs to talk to you". "Ok send them in". He knew that anyone without a name coming to see him couldn't be good. An intimidating man walked in, and told him to get his things togeather. Rallen silently packed his...

I've edited my SU. Any suggestions, or tips to make it better I would gladly take.

Name: Rallen Vargus Age: 19 Gender: Male Appearance: Rallen is slightly overweight. He is about 5'8" and 170 pounds. He as shoulder length brown hair, and brown eyes. He is missing his right ring finger after an attack on his first camp. He wears earth tone clothing, and high boots. He has...

Name: Rallen Vargus Age: 19 Gender: Male Appearance: Rallen is slightly overweight. He is about 5'8" and 170 pounds. He as shoulder length brown hair, and brown eyes. He is missing his right ring finger after an attack on his first camp. He wears earth tone clothing, and high boots...

Name: Jackson "Knockout" Vance Age: 17 Gender: Male History: Knockout was born in Texas, and even when he was young his family knew he was destined for great things. As he grew up he was always the largest kid around. Due to this he was always getting into fights with older kids that kept...

Ok I edited my SU. Anything else I need done please tell me, and I would be happy to accomodate.

Name: Simon Quien Age: Sixteen Gender: Male Personality: Simon is a reserved, usually nervous kid. Once he gets to know someone he is a very lovable, and caring guy. He has a soft spot for girls, and is super chivalrous. Once he decides someone is his friend he is forever loyal, even if...