TJgamer

i know but i can't do anything about it... :(

i know but still they won't allow me... even if i ask...

yeah but it will still encorge us to go on bad sites

i don't know i'll ask...

apperaltly we would go on more dung things and we would get more and more virus, acorrding to my big sister

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the problem is that i'm not allowed to install java...

I know :D:D:D

I would love to live in japan with all of their cool tecnology :D

Thanks for taking it so well. I was just a bit worried about how MeerFall would react. I know she's not too confident as it is, so... yeah.

Good luck, by the way. If you need any help or advice about getting your reviews to be a bit more constructive, feel free to ask. b)'')b

OMG japanese too! maybe chinese too! :D

I hope you don't mind a bit of concrit (and I hope you don't take this the wrong way or anything), but I'm a bit worried about the way you worded that review to MeerFall (and the way you word reviews like it). You know how you say that a structure/rhyme scheme/grammar/insert something else here aren't too good, but you don't really expand upon it? That can actually be taken as an insult by sensitive writers. To avoid that, it'd be best to point out specific parts of the poem (lines, for example) that you felt could be improved or at least describe in detail what you mean. (For example, if you want to say that a rhyme scheme isn't too good, describe what is a good rhyme scheme and what the difference is between what they're doing and what you think they should do.)

Don't tell an author that what they're doing isn't too good, especially if you're not going to elaborate much. You can say that there's room for improvement or that they might need to polish things a bit, but saying that something "isn't too good" or "has a few errors" (especially without saying what you mean) tends to make them think they're not good at poetry, period, you know? I know MeerFall and you are good enough friends that she'll know you don't mean she's a terrible writer or anything, but a newbie might not take that quite as well.

(I also know that you've been reviewing this way for awhile, but even so, it's risking stirring a fuss. That and pointing out specifics will help a person figure out what they should do to improve. Just saying "the rhyming isn't too well done" could mean a lot of different things, so it doesn't really help too much, at the risk of putting things a bit too bluntly.)

i just added that it was based on the final fantasy series for people like me that don't know what it is...

how are you doing?

did you PM me it?

go on to my threads and its at the bottem

wait it accepted hurry!

yeah i'm great but i was bored yesterday :(

i don't know if its accepted yet but i told the moduator of the pokemon roleplays... she must be really buzy...

Hmmm... i'll try :D

:O i like fields and stuff :D i would be outside more :D there's nothing cool to do outside here either D:

yo Pokemon Poet!
apples? :laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh:

it stinks here :/ i mean its not that bad but i live in a small town :/ and theres nothing to do :/