Recent content by Twiggeus

Describing Pokemon that doesn't need describing. Example: A Magikarp appeared. It looked liked a scaly red fish with a whisker on each side. Anyone reading a Pokemon fic should be expected to know what most if not all Pokemon look like. There are exceptions of course such as special features...

Gameplay should be first in everyone's list. If you can't enjoy the gameplay, then there's no point replay value, let alone all the other things. You buy a game to play a game, not to watch a beautiful animated movie. The right genre is also an important factor. I'm not a fan of shooters...

Think of the ending. How do you want it to end? Does the boy's personality change? Does he stay the same? Does something change his life? Stuff like that.

I've read up to chapter 8, and I think it's great. =D One thing that I thought was odd is how the kids don't know much about Pokemon Types. You'd think they would have figured it out by now. Edit: 1.1 Errors Michael began to laugh, unable to help himself. Henry closed his eyes and lay down...

Claiming Grotle Torterra Turtwig =P

I've only read Chapter One, and I thought it was great. Just two little nitpicks: Once upon a time in a not far off place lived a boy in Canalave. You're vaguely describing the place, then you say it's in Canalave. Awkward, don't you thing? “For arceus' sake, Capitalize Arceus.

Everyone knows what I would pick HINT!: LUVDISC Turtle Pokemon are <3.

Mario Kart Mask of Miracle Proffesor Layton vs Ace Attorney Kid Icarus

The Regis had epic battle music, cool design, and spelled out HOT with their symbols on their heads. =D

Yeah, I'm planning on writing one-shots soon. =D Another Turtwig fan? xD *high fives* Thanks for the welcomes everyone!

Sup. Well, I'm into 5th gen competitive battling. I also like writing, but I never really finish most of my work because I'm pretty lazy. =P So...i herd u liek mudkipz? hi.