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    Layout design

    The layout looks nice so far, but it looks a little small. Are you planning to leave it that way, or make it able to expand?
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    Naruto fanfic: The Desert Fox (pg-13 for violence)

    Yeah, This is my first fic here, so if I miss anything help me out alright? Fic is rated pg-13 for violence, but basically if you watch the naruto series than you should be alright with this level of action. Title the desert fox It was currently ten at night and anko was returning home from...
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    Kiba Inuzaka fan fic!

    It seems like an interesting Idea, but it is a little short. Try to add more descriptive detail and other stuff not directly pertaining to the plot; that way we'll get to see more of the world you're building and generally get to enjoy more story. Hope to see another chapter soon
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