Kiba Inuzaka fan fic!

Jeremy_The_Blaziken_Master!

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    So, I was bored when I got the greatest idea ever:I'm
    starting A fan fic about my favorite Naruto charecter Kiba Inuzaka and his sidekick Akamaru the Dog!Warning:This fan fic is rated PG-10 for some cartoon
    violence and Mild language!

    One day in the land of Konhagakure The hidden Leaf village, A boy around 13 wakes up.He stretches and yawns and, suddenly he hears A klinky metal sound he looks up and isn't surprised to see his Dog and best friend Akamaru walking to lick him awake.The boy walks out of the room and then the house and begins walking through the village with Akamaru beside him.He walks proudly and he accidently bumps into A boy.The boy turns around and and the boy with the dog realizes he has bumped into Sasuke Uchiha.The boy grunts as he remembers Sasuke to be the top student in school.The boy says "Sorry, I didn't mean to bump into you" Sasuke just continues and the other boy follows behind.The boys keep walking until they stop in front of A huge building.Suddenly, A bunch of people run out and scream "It's him, It's Orochimaru!" and the boys grunt in fear."Come on Kiba lets get out of here" says Sasuke but, the kid named Kiba just sits there paralyzed in fear.All of A sudden, A huge snake comes and and attempts to grab Kiba with its mouth!Suddenly, A huge sound that can be heard miles away and everything goes dark.
    To be continued...
     
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    CHAPTER TWO:The Great Escape!

    Suddenly, A loud noise is heard through all of The Leaf Village and everyone turns around to see what happened.Everyone finds out that Sasuke Uchiha has just set the Huge Snake on fire with his Flaming Jutsus!Sasuke turns to see Orochimaru giggling and everyone is confused.Orochimaru summons yet another Snake and the Snake grabs Sasuke with its mouth!"Tell me where the boy known as Naruto Uzumaki is or I'll feed the boy to the Snake" Orochimaru says.

    Meanwhile the boy known as Naruto Uzumaki is on A important mission!He is fighting against A kid in A green shirt who has bandages on his hands."I Rock Lee will not lose" says the boy and he jumps after Naruto and grabs his foot and slams him to the floor!But suddenly, they hear loud screams comming from the Village and the boys, without A word begin running towards the Village.

    Lee, who is much faster than Naruto, gets there quickly and is stunned at what he is seeing.Eventually Naruto gets there and is all out of breath but, Orochimaru spots him."Release him" Naruto and Lee say at the same time and the other boy known as Kiba suddenly snaps to attention and is angry!"Leave the Snake to me" he says and he throws A pill into his dogs mouth!The pill is Red and the Dog suddenly becomes bigger and turns Red!The Dog jumps into the air and bites the Snake who releases its grip on Sasuke who lands on the ground and begins running.Suddenly the other three boys begin running and the Dog as well.The Snake, who is dead, just sits there and Orochimaru flees after them but is to late as they are way ahead of them.Everyone from the Village just sit there and get back to what they were doing before.
    To Be Continued...
     
    It seems like an interesting Idea, but it is a little short. Try to add more descriptive detail and other stuff not directly pertaining to the plot; that way we'll get to see more of the world you're building and generally get to enjoy more story.

    Hope to see another chapter soon
     
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