Recent content by yaysunshine

Mm, I never really thought of him as young—maybe I should make it clearer that he's somewhere in his early twenties. He also looks like he hasn't slept in a couple months, which could technically read as "resident." I'm glad the POV shifts work for you—I like to get what all the characters are...

Hey, this looks interesting! I like the premise and the main character (wonderfully jaded and snarky), as well as the thought it looks like you put into how most people's pokémon training experience generally pans out. I'm interested as to where this story's going—what kind of challenges will...

Ah, I meant to post this a bit ago, but I got swamped with schoolwork >.< Anyway, here's chapter 4, hooray! --------------------------- Chapter Four Lemon could deal with a lot of things. She hadn't gotten that worked up when it took her three tries to earn the Mineralbadge. She'd been...

@ delongbi: I'll keep that under consideration in the future, re: spending time with the characters. The next few chapters are already pre-written, but for chapter six and onward that's going in my "things to remember" bin. I'm glad you're liking the way things are going, though! @ Pokemon...

@ Aether_: I'm glad you enjoyed the story! As to your grammatical questions—well, "wossname" is a bit of a Britishism that's slipped into my vocabulary, but it does mean what you thought it meant, so at least the point got across. As for the commas, I had them in mainly to denote the way...

Uh, hi! I'm pretty new in these parts, but I've been posting my fanfic to other sites, so I thought I might try putting it up here and seeing what kind of feedback I get. I really appreciate any comments or criticism you have to offer, so let me know what you like and/or dislike about the...

Hey! I've been a pokémon fan since the early years, and I thought it would be fun to join a community of fans. I'm a bit behind on the games (I've only played up through Gen II!) but I've been a fan ever since I saw my first episode of the anime on TV nearly ten years ago. I think my favorite...