I have some constructive criticism for you. The Synthetics are constantly combing the Eterna Forest for True Borns, so eating dinner in the forest would be strongly discouraged and disallowed by Xavier, due to the potential of being discovered and giving away the location of the Chateau. The Chateau of itself can't have a battling arena, since it's just a house. Sorry. And you'll want to be careful with battles like that. You finished it far too quickly. Though it is plausible for a Dark move on a Psychic to be a OHKO in the games, this isn't the games, and there's more than
Odessa used FAINT ATTACK! It was super-effective! The foe KADABRA fainted! _____ exp. earned!
I'm not trying to sound cruel, just offering suggestions. If you need an example of RPing battle sequences against a NPC I could offer one.