Thank you kindly for your review.
I always wonder when people review works if they actually take the time to read the stories that authors labor over. Thankfully, when you comment, your feedback is intelligent and rewarding to encounter. I'm glad you enjoyed the first two chapters, and as I toil over the third, I keep in mind what you mentioned about my descriptions, and the unfortunate presence of run-on sentences. Because of the level of description within the story, sometimes I end up going a little excessive between periods, and don't even notice it at all.
So to sum up, thanks a bunch, and feel free to comment anytime as the tale progresses!
EDIT: You didn't have to make my fic a must-read! I just started... *embarrassed blush* But I appreciate the gesture.