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Old August 23rd, 2011 (11:45 PM).
Missingyep Missingyep is offline
     
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    This looks real nice. I'll have to download it and play it sometime.

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    Originally Posted by NarutoActor View Post
    I need a grammar/spelling fixer. Any one up to the task? Also just to re-cap Light is always looking for eager spriters and asm hackers.
    Would that task entail anything specific? I don't have much to do (though that may change in a week), so perhaps I may have enough time to help out.

    Also, some more fixes:
    Spoiler:
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by NarutoActor View Post

    *She's a scientist, and the Gym Leader ...
    [Apostrophe for possessive "she". Also, "a" implies that there are multiple Gym Leaders for that city. I'm assuming that there's only one.]


    * Crap! I wasn't supposed to be seen by civilians!
    [A comma or period could also work in place of that first exclamation mark.]


    * It appears to be a switch.


    * ["]DIALGA, the legendary Pokemon of time."
    [The caps are to maintain consistency with "PALKIA", below. In XSE, a bracketed quotation mark will become an opening quotation mark, whereas an unbracketed one is a closing mark.]


    * ["]PALKIA, the legendary Pokemon of space."