Yoko~
I like this one more compared to the Kamina one, I really just think you have to work on making it a little less cluttered, working with the colors, and the lighting. The flow is fine, and the render placement is good too.
Sinnoh
I don't really know what you were going for here. The render takes up pretty much all the tag, and I don't really see anything else other then text. :l
Critique please?
I like this one more compared to the Kamina one, I really just think you have to work on making it a little less cluttered, working with the colors, and the lighting. The flow is fine, and the render placement is good too.
Sinnoh
I don't really know what you were going for here. The render takes up pretty much all the tag, and I don't really see anything else other then text. :l
Critique please?