Seen May 19th, 2019
Posted April 30th, 2019
4 posts
204 Days
Miguel is a very good Cyndaquil who deserves love.

When this was posted, I can say where were some doubts whether the story fits here or not. On my end I do not see why not and I can say that one of the big points the story has going for it is that it goes for brevity and for leaving the reader to build up the imagery for this as one would a children's tale. Sometimes, really, you don't need to put more.

Also good work referencing Pokémon and their tastes.

Short, sweet (like the berry), a simple and good work.
Thank you for the reply! For a while I was worried no one liked it enough to comment.