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I'm secretly a typhlosion, shh
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this story was writen by Drag0nl0ver (me) on Deviant Art. Enjoy!
EDIT: i re-wrote this chapter, and i will soon re-write the rest. I'll keep the original for comparisons... top- rewrite, bottom- original
A freezing wind blew across the forest. Ice hung from the branches of trees, threatening to fall off with the next wind and impale something. A group of pidgey huddled in their nest, some of the few still left. Most others had either died from the cold, frozen bodies could often be found on the ground, or flown to a warmer place.
A frosslass had been preying upon two dragons, with her partner, a Glalie. The two pokemon had followed the dragons, One was red with a white upper half, and a red pentagon on top of her head. The other was quite similar, but he was blue and had a blue circle on top of his head, rather than a pentagon.
The two pokemon were extremely weak because of the cold, and because they were dragons it was only worse, clouding all their senses, making it very hard, if not impossible to hunt and defend them selves. Ice cycles hung from the tips of their wings, and noses too, creating a direct source of cold.
The Frosslass shot an ice beam at the red one, who just had enough time to lift her head as the attack hit her. She was instantly frozen in a large block of ice. The Glalie was about to fire its own attack at the blue dragon, when a jet of fire blasted through the forest, nearly hitting the pokemon square in the face. The two ice types quickly fled.
A boy walked out of the trees, followed by a Quilava, whose back and head were still flaming. The boy had a long sword strapped to his back, and had longish dirty blonde hair. His strange yellow eyes glowed faintly. He had taken pity on the few dragons left during this fridged winter, and did his best to protect them.
The blue dragon didn't notice him for two reasons: one, his senses were too clouded up to realize that his attackers had left; and two he was to absorbed in helping the red dragon to do anything else.
The boy walked over to the blue dragon and tapped his wing. The pokemon turned around startled.
"What? Who- who are you?" a voice in the boys head answered the tap.
"I am Andrew." The boy answered. "Quilava!" Andrew called. The little pokemon nodded and started to breathe a constant jet of fire on the frozen red dragon, melting away the ice.
"Okay then, Andrew, why are you helping? This is no concern of yours!"
"Fine, if you don't want me to help you, that's your option." Andrew shrugged. "Quilava, we're leaving." The fire type stopped his jet of flame, and scampered up to the boys shoulder.
"Wait, please, don't let my sister die." the blue pokemon called into Andrews' mind after a moment. The boy turned around.
"Well then, Quilava lets not let his sister die. That would be sad." The blue dragon looked appalled at Andrews' sarcasm, but after a second of thinking, found that the boy was being sincere.
Quilava had finished melting the snow around the red dragon, and gave one more puff of fire to help heat her up.
"Thank you." The blue pokemon said. "I am Latios, that's Latias."
"Glad to have met you." answered the boy. He looked at the one called Latias. "She's severely wounded. I can take you to my cabin its not far, and you can rest, and Latias can heal." Andrew offered.
"Yes, thank you." Latios replied. Andrew picked up Latias, she was quite heavy compared to the boy, but he still picked her up with ease. He called Quilava, who crawled onto his shoulder, and began to walk along a small, natural path between the trees. Latios, as he flew along, wondered how the boy could survive. Nothing could actually thrive in the freezing cold alone. Even ice types, who loved it, needed some amount of heat to survive. And any normal human would need multiple layers in this kind of cold, yet Andrew seemed only to wear on coat.
Andrew looked down for a moment when he felt a slight movement in his arms. He felt Quilava looked down too. Latias had begun to move a little. She opened her eyes for a moment, and then closed them again. In that second her eyes were open, Andrew saw a beautiful luminescent gold that looked like it could light the darkest of caves. The boy looked up just in time to see a low hanging branch and ducked.
"Is that your house?" Latios asked as they entered a clearing with a wood cabin standing in the center.
"Yes, come along." Andrew entered the house, with Latios close behind.
(original)
EDIT: i re-wrote this chapter, and i will soon re-write the rest. I'll keep the original for comparisons... top- rewrite, bottom- original
DRAGONS WINTER
CH.1
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A freezing wind blew across the forest. Ice hung from the branches of trees, threatening to fall off with the next wind and impale something. A group of pidgey huddled in their nest, some of the few still left. Most others had either died from the cold, frozen bodies could often be found on the ground, or flown to a warmer place.
A frosslass had been preying upon two dragons, with her partner, a Glalie. The two pokemon had followed the dragons, One was red with a white upper half, and a red pentagon on top of her head. The other was quite similar, but he was blue and had a blue circle on top of his head, rather than a pentagon.
The two pokemon were extremely weak because of the cold, and because they were dragons it was only worse, clouding all their senses, making it very hard, if not impossible to hunt and defend them selves. Ice cycles hung from the tips of their wings, and noses too, creating a direct source of cold.
The Frosslass shot an ice beam at the red one, who just had enough time to lift her head as the attack hit her. She was instantly frozen in a large block of ice. The Glalie was about to fire its own attack at the blue dragon, when a jet of fire blasted through the forest, nearly hitting the pokemon square in the face. The two ice types quickly fled.
A boy walked out of the trees, followed by a Quilava, whose back and head were still flaming. The boy had a long sword strapped to his back, and had longish dirty blonde hair. His strange yellow eyes glowed faintly. He had taken pity on the few dragons left during this fridged winter, and did his best to protect them.
The blue dragon didn't notice him for two reasons: one, his senses were too clouded up to realize that his attackers had left; and two he was to absorbed in helping the red dragon to do anything else.
The boy walked over to the blue dragon and tapped his wing. The pokemon turned around startled.
"What? Who- who are you?" a voice in the boys head answered the tap.
"I am Andrew." The boy answered. "Quilava!" Andrew called. The little pokemon nodded and started to breathe a constant jet of fire on the frozen red dragon, melting away the ice.
"Okay then, Andrew, why are you helping? This is no concern of yours!"
"Fine, if you don't want me to help you, that's your option." Andrew shrugged. "Quilava, we're leaving." The fire type stopped his jet of flame, and scampered up to the boys shoulder.
"Wait, please, don't let my sister die." the blue pokemon called into Andrews' mind after a moment. The boy turned around.
"Well then, Quilava lets not let his sister die. That would be sad." The blue dragon looked appalled at Andrews' sarcasm, but after a second of thinking, found that the boy was being sincere.
Quilava had finished melting the snow around the red dragon, and gave one more puff of fire to help heat her up.
"Thank you." The blue pokemon said. "I am Latios, that's Latias."
"Glad to have met you." answered the boy. He looked at the one called Latias. "She's severely wounded. I can take you to my cabin its not far, and you can rest, and Latias can heal." Andrew offered.
"Yes, thank you." Latios replied. Andrew picked up Latias, she was quite heavy compared to the boy, but he still picked her up with ease. He called Quilava, who crawled onto his shoulder, and began to walk along a small, natural path between the trees. Latios, as he flew along, wondered how the boy could survive. Nothing could actually thrive in the freezing cold alone. Even ice types, who loved it, needed some amount of heat to survive. And any normal human would need multiple layers in this kind of cold, yet Andrew seemed only to wear on coat.
Andrew looked down for a moment when he felt a slight movement in his arms. He felt Quilava looked down too. Latias had begun to move a little. She opened her eyes for a moment, and then closed them again. In that second her eyes were open, Andrew saw a beautiful luminescent gold that looked like it could light the darkest of caves. The boy looked up just in time to see a low hanging branch and ducked.
"Is that your house?" Latios asked as they entered a clearing with a wood cabin standing in the center.
"Yes, come along." Andrew entered the house, with Latios close behind.
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(original)
It was a cold mid-winters afternoon as the Frosslass and her partner, a Glalie entered the edge of a clearing where two dragons looked for food. One of the dragons, slightly smaller than the other was red and white while the other was blue and white. Glalie fired its ice beam and the red dragon took a hit. She was almost instantly knocked out.
Right before frosslass could fire her attack a blast of flame shot at her from the other end of the clearing and right behind it came a Typhlosion. There was a flash of light and in the pokemons' place was a boy who looked about 13. He was carrying a long sword strapped to his back.
The frosslass knew that he was trying to protect the two dragons. He had been protecting all dragons that the frosslass and her partner could find which was few in the winter. The frosslass told her partner it was time to go and they left. The boy walked closer to the two dragons he noticed that one was encased in a block of ice.
"Quilava!" he shouted and a small blue and tan pokemon came bounding out of the woods.
The boy suddenly heard a voice in his head. "What are you doing here" said the voice.
The boy didn't seem to be very surprised. "I'm trying to help you" he said. "Quilava can you melt this ice with your ember?" the little pokemon nodded its head and went
over to the red dragons frozen form. Out of its mouth came a large flame that gradually got smaller as more ice melted so as not to hurt the dragon.
over to the red dragons frozen form. Out of its mouth came a large flame that gradually got smaller as more ice melted so as not to hurt the dragon.
"Why are you doing this?" the voice asked. The boy replied "why wouldn't I?" "Because you're human" said the voice which the boy suspected came from the blue one since he was still conscious.
"You'd be surprised at that answer" the boy said. Up to that point he had been staring at the blue dragon but now he looked at the red one which was now thawed.
"She's seriously injured, I live in a cabin not to far from here it will be warm and safe there." The boy said.
She was quite large and heavy compared to the boy but he still picked her up and carried her with ease.
"Thank you" said the voice "I'm latios by the way."
"No problem, my name is Andrew, nice to meet you" answered the boy.
"Quilava!" Andrew shouted and the little pokemon came scurrying up to him and climbed to his shoulder. Despite the weight of the dragon in his arms Andrew ran swiftly between the trees. He slowed down when he felt a slight movement in his arms he looked down and saw that she had opened her eyes slightly. From what he saw he could see a sliver of a beautiful luminescent gold that made him slow a bit more and almost crash into a tree. After a few minutes of walking, they reached the cabin
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