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One of my poems.

Tater Tot

I used to be popular here~
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    • Seen Jan 15, 2017
    I came up with this one day, and after I edited it, it came out well. None of this is true about my family, but a friend of mine told me to post it here. So here goes,

    My Dad's a triple large
    My Mom's an XXL
    My Brother's just as big
    And my size isn't well.

    It could have been potato chips
    Cakes and doughnuts too
    Although they taste quite good
    They're not quite good for you

    So keep this poem in mind
    When you sit down to chow
    Eat many fruits a vegetables
    And you won't be a cow!

    Yes, it's short, sarcastic, and sort of rude, but it's a fictional poem, it's not true at all. XD
    Except for the part about eating fruits and vegetables, of course. Everyone needs to do that. XD So tell me what you think, feel free to say as many mean, bad, things as needed. You earned it! XD
     
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  • It's awesome. XD
    Very short and sweet. I like how the first and third lines don't rhyme but the second and forth lines do.
     

    Sydian

    fake your death.
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  • Heh. I should read that to my sister. She eats like a hog! xD

    Anyway, I like this. You should post poems more often! :D
     
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