zapdos926
I'm secretly a typhlosion, shh
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My God!!!!!! That was a really long post. Well, I made this thread in hope to get comments like that (I don't get alot on deviantart...). well now,
where you said Latias wrighs forty kilos, and that i should be realistic, yea 2 things.
1. she weighs 88pounds
2.it is realistic. if you read the rest of the story than you will find out why.
ok, about the plot: the part about the legendaries being attacked, it was a surprise attack and its winter, meaning: cold, meaning: dragons are weaker (and dragons have to eat during winter too, thats why they were out), the ice-types were hiding and attacked fom behind the bushes, Latias was instantly frozen, and Latios had no idea where the attack had come from. About the boy helping, who wouldnt? And it is winter, those two Lati's live in that area, and with winter comes snow, and with snow comes ice-type pokemon, thats why they are in the same area.
i will now post the prolugue and ch.1 of Dragns Spring.
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Dragons Spring
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Prologue
Legend says that a powerful being will rise and defeat a great evil with the blade "Cunamio", meaning tidal eave, a blade that possesses the power to drown an enemy from the slightest scratch. After the evil is defeated, a greater more powerful evil will awaken and control the mind and body of the first. This can only travel in pure darkness and shadows. It can get dark pokemon to do its bidding at a thought. No one knows what this evil looks like or what it is, but this evil cannot be defeated only by blade but by the power of light. It cowers in fear of light and lives in the deepest bowels of the earth. It is said that it can all but put out the darkness, and as the days get longer and spring grows near it becomes weaker. This beast can never truly be killed, at least not yet, but it has been defeated before by a man who went by the name of Eni. Eni and his friend a Lucario were able to defeat the evil, but only by sacrificing themselves. After its master died, the blade, "Cunamio" disappeared until needed again when the evil once more becomes whole. The blade hides in the deepest crevice of the ocean, by the pits of lava where it was forged. When the evil arises once more the blade seeks a new master and floats off. . The carrier of the blade faces many dangers, betrayals and friendships; many are killed before they know that they have been chosen by the sword to defeat the evil. Shadows have always been dangerous places, anything could lurk in the darkness, lives have been lost in them, but they are especially dangerous for the one who carries the blade and the carriers friends, for the evil always searches for the perfect time to strike from the darkness…
Now as winter ends and spring begins, the evil awakes, ready to enshroud the planet in darkness before summer arrives.
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Ch1
Andrew sat on the beach staring at the waves as they crashed against the shore. A dragon with a body that was top half white and bottom half red, and had a blue triangle on its chest and had golden eyes and a pentagon on her head lay on the boys lap. Behind him a dragon similar to the red one but blue and with red eyes and an oval on its head and a red triangle on its chest lay sleeping on the sand. A large pokemon lay next to the boy, it was white with blue spikes on its back, and tail, and around its eyes were blue diamonds.
The breeze whipped Andrew's dirty blonde hair around his face.
The red dragon, latias, sighed. "I wish we could stay here forever" she thought to Andrew. The blue dragon, latios, stirred.
"It is nice here", he sighed contently.
<I can stay here forever> the large white pokemon, a Lugia called Luni said. Andrew glared at her. <I didn't mean to brag,> she said.
"I could stay here forever if I wished too, but I wont." The boy said as latios floated next to him. Andrew began to rub the blue pokemons neck.
"Why not?" latias asked. Andrew unsheathed his sword, 'Cunamio'
"This sword is why; I learned the legend when I was very young."
Andrew informed them. "It states that the bearer of the sword must fight the evil, that it chooses its bearer." he continued, "that Mightyena we saw last month, it was sent by the evil."
"How do you know this, it might have just been scavenging." Latios said.
<It wasn't just scavenging, I could smell its fear of something, darker and greater than it> a voice said. Andrew turned around to face the forest.
"Typhlosion!" Andrew greeted the tan and blue pokemon. "Did you find any food?" he asked.
<you'd be surprised at how many Swablu and Altaria live here, I got a lot of eggs." The pokemon said.
<Eggs are good.> Luni said, <but I'm going to need, I don't know, 3 Altaria, not just some eggs.> she said as Typhlosion laid the eggs on a large rock. Andrew gently pushed latias off his lap, sheathed Cunamio, and started to gather fire wood. After he had made a good sized pile, he called Typhlosion over.
"Let's have some heat, shall we?" the boy said. Typhlosion let a jet of flame from its mouth and the wood instantly began to burn. "Thank you." Andrew said and got a small pan out from his bag and cracked some eggs over it. All the pokemon looked at it disgustingly.
"I know all of you would rather have meat, so I'll be right back." Andrew said and a small quiver appeared on his back, and he was suddenly holding a bow. He wandered into the woods.
<Be back before dark!> Luni called after him, < I get very hungry very quickly.> after he was gone she whispered <Umbreon, go with him, make sure he isn't late.> a black doglike pokemon with yellow rings around its body materialized from her shadow.
<Yes my lady.> it said sarcastically and wandered into the shadows of the trees where it once again disappeared.
<I'm going to go swimming.> latios said and dove into the ocean.
<Wait for me!> latias said and dove in after her older brother.
<I'm guessing you're going to jump in now?>Typhlosion asked Luni.
<no, my foot still hurts and when I crashed, I landed on my wing funny, so it hurts to fly and even more to swim.> she replied. <how about… wait, sorry stupid question, you're a->
<a fire type, yes I know.> Typhlosion finished. <If I didn't die from just being completely submerged, I would drown, I can't swim and I don't plan to learn.>
<So how did you meet Andrew?> Luni asked to change the subject.
<He saved me from a Feraligatr when I was just a little Cyndaquil, I made the bad choice of wandering to close to the river, and it decided to jump out at me.> Typhlosion said.
Luni nodded her head thoughtfully, and they just sat there watching the sunset and latios and latias chase each other through the waves. Latios then seemed to disappear. Luni was laying really close to the shore and she was suddenly hit in the face with salty spray. She loked at where the water had come from but nothing was there. Then there was a shimmer and latios was there, a childish grin on his face.
<I'm going to get you for that!> Luni laughed and splashed latios with her good wing from a small tide pool that she was close to.
<If there are going to be water wars, I'm going to just walk away.> Typhlosion said and backed off a few feet. <I can drink it I just can't be hit by it>
Latias then appeared behind latios and splashed him in the face, for a moment he just stared stupidly then realized what had happened and began to chase her again. Andrew then walked out of the woods, a Stantler and two Altaria flung over his shoulder.
"Dinner time!" he called out and all the pokemon came to him, except for Luni who tried to getup but wobbled on her injured foot and collapsed.
"Its ok, I'll bring the food to you, the Stantler is all yours." He said and laid the deer like pokemon in front of her. That night they all feasted, but two more pairs of eyes watched them hungrily. They would be their meals soon enough, but now they melted into the shadows and ran off, they had business to do.
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ok, i know there are probabl spelling, grammar and capitalization issues, but am jus copying and pasting this from a word file. i do edit some partsf it thogh, so enjoy.
where you said Latias wrighs forty kilos, and that i should be realistic, yea 2 things.
1. she weighs 88pounds
2.it is realistic. if you read the rest of the story than you will find out why.
ok, about the plot: the part about the legendaries being attacked, it was a surprise attack and its winter, meaning: cold, meaning: dragons are weaker (and dragons have to eat during winter too, thats why they were out), the ice-types were hiding and attacked fom behind the bushes, Latias was instantly frozen, and Latios had no idea where the attack had come from. About the boy helping, who wouldnt? And it is winter, those two Lati's live in that area, and with winter comes snow, and with snow comes ice-type pokemon, thats why they are in the same area.
i will now post the prolugue and ch.1 of Dragns Spring.
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Dragons Spring
-------------
Prologue
Legend says that a powerful being will rise and defeat a great evil with the blade "Cunamio", meaning tidal eave, a blade that possesses the power to drown an enemy from the slightest scratch. After the evil is defeated, a greater more powerful evil will awaken and control the mind and body of the first. This can only travel in pure darkness and shadows. It can get dark pokemon to do its bidding at a thought. No one knows what this evil looks like or what it is, but this evil cannot be defeated only by blade but by the power of light. It cowers in fear of light and lives in the deepest bowels of the earth. It is said that it can all but put out the darkness, and as the days get longer and spring grows near it becomes weaker. This beast can never truly be killed, at least not yet, but it has been defeated before by a man who went by the name of Eni. Eni and his friend a Lucario were able to defeat the evil, but only by sacrificing themselves. After its master died, the blade, "Cunamio" disappeared until needed again when the evil once more becomes whole. The blade hides in the deepest crevice of the ocean, by the pits of lava where it was forged. When the evil arises once more the blade seeks a new master and floats off. . The carrier of the blade faces many dangers, betrayals and friendships; many are killed before they know that they have been chosen by the sword to defeat the evil. Shadows have always been dangerous places, anything could lurk in the darkness, lives have been lost in them, but they are especially dangerous for the one who carries the blade and the carriers friends, for the evil always searches for the perfect time to strike from the darkness…
Now as winter ends and spring begins, the evil awakes, ready to enshroud the planet in darkness before summer arrives.
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Ch1
Andrew sat on the beach staring at the waves as they crashed against the shore. A dragon with a body that was top half white and bottom half red, and had a blue triangle on its chest and had golden eyes and a pentagon on her head lay on the boys lap. Behind him a dragon similar to the red one but blue and with red eyes and an oval on its head and a red triangle on its chest lay sleeping on the sand. A large pokemon lay next to the boy, it was white with blue spikes on its back, and tail, and around its eyes were blue diamonds.
The breeze whipped Andrew's dirty blonde hair around his face.
The red dragon, latias, sighed. "I wish we could stay here forever" she thought to Andrew. The blue dragon, latios, stirred.
"It is nice here", he sighed contently.
<I can stay here forever> the large white pokemon, a Lugia called Luni said. Andrew glared at her. <I didn't mean to brag,> she said.
"I could stay here forever if I wished too, but I wont." The boy said as latios floated next to him. Andrew began to rub the blue pokemons neck.
"Why not?" latias asked. Andrew unsheathed his sword, 'Cunamio'
"This sword is why; I learned the legend when I was very young."
Andrew informed them. "It states that the bearer of the sword must fight the evil, that it chooses its bearer." he continued, "that Mightyena we saw last month, it was sent by the evil."
"How do you know this, it might have just been scavenging." Latios said.
<It wasn't just scavenging, I could smell its fear of something, darker and greater than it> a voice said. Andrew turned around to face the forest.
"Typhlosion!" Andrew greeted the tan and blue pokemon. "Did you find any food?" he asked.
<you'd be surprised at how many Swablu and Altaria live here, I got a lot of eggs." The pokemon said.
<Eggs are good.> Luni said, <but I'm going to need, I don't know, 3 Altaria, not just some eggs.> she said as Typhlosion laid the eggs on a large rock. Andrew gently pushed latias off his lap, sheathed Cunamio, and started to gather fire wood. After he had made a good sized pile, he called Typhlosion over.
"Let's have some heat, shall we?" the boy said. Typhlosion let a jet of flame from its mouth and the wood instantly began to burn. "Thank you." Andrew said and got a small pan out from his bag and cracked some eggs over it. All the pokemon looked at it disgustingly.
"I know all of you would rather have meat, so I'll be right back." Andrew said and a small quiver appeared on his back, and he was suddenly holding a bow. He wandered into the woods.
<Be back before dark!> Luni called after him, < I get very hungry very quickly.> after he was gone she whispered <Umbreon, go with him, make sure he isn't late.> a black doglike pokemon with yellow rings around its body materialized from her shadow.
<Yes my lady.> it said sarcastically and wandered into the shadows of the trees where it once again disappeared.
<I'm going to go swimming.> latios said and dove into the ocean.
<Wait for me!> latias said and dove in after her older brother.
<I'm guessing you're going to jump in now?>Typhlosion asked Luni.
<no, my foot still hurts and when I crashed, I landed on my wing funny, so it hurts to fly and even more to swim.> she replied. <how about… wait, sorry stupid question, you're a->
<a fire type, yes I know.> Typhlosion finished. <If I didn't die from just being completely submerged, I would drown, I can't swim and I don't plan to learn.>
<So how did you meet Andrew?> Luni asked to change the subject.
<He saved me from a Feraligatr when I was just a little Cyndaquil, I made the bad choice of wandering to close to the river, and it decided to jump out at me.> Typhlosion said.
Luni nodded her head thoughtfully, and they just sat there watching the sunset and latios and latias chase each other through the waves. Latios then seemed to disappear. Luni was laying really close to the shore and she was suddenly hit in the face with salty spray. She loked at where the water had come from but nothing was there. Then there was a shimmer and latios was there, a childish grin on his face.
<I'm going to get you for that!> Luni laughed and splashed latios with her good wing from a small tide pool that she was close to.
<If there are going to be water wars, I'm going to just walk away.> Typhlosion said and backed off a few feet. <I can drink it I just can't be hit by it>
Latias then appeared behind latios and splashed him in the face, for a moment he just stared stupidly then realized what had happened and began to chase her again. Andrew then walked out of the woods, a Stantler and two Altaria flung over his shoulder.
"Dinner time!" he called out and all the pokemon came to him, except for Luni who tried to getup but wobbled on her injured foot and collapsed.
"Its ok, I'll bring the food to you, the Stantler is all yours." He said and laid the deer like pokemon in front of her. That night they all feasted, but two more pairs of eyes watched them hungrily. They would be their meals soon enough, but now they melted into the shadows and ran off, they had business to do.
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ok, i know there are probabl spelling, grammar and capitalization issues, but am jus copying and pasting this from a word file. i do edit some partsf it thogh, so enjoy.
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