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[Pokémon] He who is Merely a Rumour

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Perhaps I should have elaborated. 'Most boring' works fine, is fine, and sounds fine. It's like saying that my little sister is the most annoying person in the world. And she is.
 

Oblivion Reaper 2.0

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pLEASE write some more before we all have riot
this should be like manga...
You should get someone to draw your charcters so that way we can se them...
 

Citrinin

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It's good to see you back in this thread, Oblivion Reaper. :D Thanks for the compliment. ^_^ Do you have any thoughts on our "most boring" vs. "lamest" problem?

Heh, I'd like very much for a good illustrator to draw my characters - I hadn't thought about it before. I'd be willing to accept submissions if anyone has the time or the patience. XD;
 

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Lol do you accept stick figures? XD *is not a good draw-person thing*

I'd love to have my zombie oneshot to have graphic pics of blood but I know that is too much. XD
 

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I'll accept all kinds of concept art. XD I'd just need a place to put it... I've seen some people make websites for their fics. Perhaps I should try that? ^_^
 

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If you're serious enough about it I guess. I'd sooner publish my work though, but then they wouldn't be fanfics, and I'd hopefully be more learned XD
 

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I was considering making a website for Shattered. I think if I finish it, I will. I can't really help you out on the characters. Some of my art is in my profile album, but I think it's pretty crappy. And I'm no good at drawing a specific character; I have to just make it up as I go along.

This utterly useless and inane post was brought to you by Wal-Mart.
 

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Chapter Eight: The Stench of Death

CHAPTER EIGHT: THE STENCH OF DEATH
It was a dark plane, seemingly without time or space. Augury and Rex stood facing each other.

"Is this a dream?"

"Of course it is," said Augury. "Sit down."

At that moment, Rex fell to the ground. Even in this dream, Augury controlled all. Despite the fact that this was all happening in Rex's subconscious, he was totally at the mercy of this man hundreds of miles away. This was the scope of Augury's power.

"I saw what you did." Augury was infuriated, and this struck genuine terror into Rex. For Augury felt no mild emotions, only extremes. He had three modes: ecstatic, distant, and hopelessly enraged. "Why, Rex, why? Not like I don't already know."

The entire day flicked past Rex in the space of a second. He hated when Augury did that. There was no pain, but it was terrifying. As it happened, you felt insane.

"The torture of Bevan Emerit was not what I sent you there for. You are his guardian, not his boss."

"He doesn't deserve free will," said Rex through gritted teeth. "You have to earn it."

"Your definition of deserving anything is being of a higher social status than yourself, you arrogant bastard. One derives power from their subordinates, not their superiors!"

Rex simply stared at Augury, arrogant scepticism in his eyes.

"But of course, Rex. You don't learn. You're determined to make the lives of those in your power miserable. It's insecure and it's pathetic. There will be no more torturing either Emerit or Appleby."

"Yes, my Lord. I apologise."

"Not sincerely," said Augury scathingly. "But, nevertheless, there is a new development." He inhaled deeply, and his voice became calmer. "Charlotte Appleby is hiding something. Something dangerous. Chances are it's a secret of one of her old trainer's friends, but it hits me close to home. Somehow."

"I'll dispose of her at once, my Lord."

"You lack perception. Killing her will not kill the source – she only bears a vague secret. Appleby is terrified of you while she has something to lose. If you take her, she will not talk. You must be subtle, Rex. No open torture."

"Yes, Lord Augury."

"One more thing, Rex. Should you ever commit as grave an error as the one you just did… the Moonlight Squad will slice you in two."

*​

"Sir – I think you should see this."

Sitting at a desk was a lanky man with auburn hair. The room was lavish and exotic, with many scientific mysteries and experiments on display. Behind him, his qualifications covered the wall. Readjusting his glasses, he asked, "What is it?" As always, Simon Gordon's voice had an air of superiority to it.

"Dr. Brown is… dead."

The Brain stood up. "What? Take me to him." His voice seemed to tremble a little bit, despite the fact that he was giving orders.

The security officer strode through a few corridors, Simon briskly following. Eventually, they came to an open utility closet with two police officers and several orange cones surrounding it.

Horrified, Simon mouthed a few things to himself. There was his childhood friend, his throat sliced violently, lying in front of him.

"Mr. Gordon." One of the police-officers approached him, wearing the standard black, padded uniform. He handed him an envelope, addressed to the Brain of the Oligarchy.

"Ah, Simon. Was the death of your sister not enough? The blood that must be shed to protect your secret is terrible, wouldn't you agree? Perhaps you'd like to tell me the secrets of He who is Merely a Rumour?

"If not, more of your friends will die. And then, out of fear, you will flee, like you always do when a problem becomes too great. And, at that point, Augury will send his Moonlight Squad to execute you. I hope you don't mind the thought of dying alone due to the stroke of a pen by the one that you have sworn absolute dedication to.

"Sincerely,
Dagger"

Simon pocketed it. "Sir, we'll need to use that as evidence."

The Brain turned to the police officer, sneering viciously. "No you don't. This was a Dagger attack. He doesn't leave fingerprints on the letters. The sooner you hand this over to the Cloaks, the quicker this will be solved."

It wasn't because the letter would cast suspicion upon him – the fact that this was a Dagger attack would be discovered soon, anyway. The Oligarchs all knew about the resurfacing rumour of Lord Augury. So far, it was confined to these six individuals, but Simon knew that it would spread. Just like last time. He simply wanted this taunt to be private, unlike the last letter, which was circulated around his peers.

"Do you have reason to hide that letter? Guilt, perhaps?" Samantha Lincoln, escorted by two Cloaks, was standing behind him.

"Oh, what a surprise. There's death and a vulture arrives. Have you come to pick at the flesh?"

"Hand me the letter, Simon," said Samantha, a look of shock and hurt on her face. She kept up her caring façade, even toward other Oligarchs.

"You know perfectly well what it is. Your thirst for information is trumped by my friend's right to dignity in death."

"No, Simon." She lowered her voice. "This is precisely what he wants, and why I came here. If we start keeping secrets from one another, Dagger wins. Harmony loses. It's hard, I know, dear, but we're dealing with the stability of our country, here."

Gordon reached into his pocket and reluctantly handed the letter over. Not because he wanted to, but because he wanted to avoid the other Oligarchs forcing him to hand it over. "It's disgusting what some people will do over a rumour," said Samantha distantly.

Simon looked away. He had considered himself independent a week ago, someone who needed nobody. But with these murders, he was beginning to realise just how fragile he was. Even he needed people.

"We'll find him, you know," said Samantha, feigning empathy skillfully. "What can one man do?"

"I heard a tale, once," said Simon, turning away coldly. "I don't know whether or not it's true. Apparently one of Susan Adams's advisors asked the same question. The next week, he didn't show up to their meeting. She remarked, 'As you know, the empty seat was occupied by someone who asked what one man can do. He found out yesterday.'"

*​

"Lord Augury, you wished to see me?"

It was the middle of the night, and a repulsively corpulent, sweaty man stood in a dark room before Lord Augury. He was a petty and contemptible man, and, above all, a bureaucrat. Most notably, he was the Nose of the Oligarchy, in charge of the military and open police.

"The stench of death runs rampant in the air, doesn't it?"

"Y-yes, Lord Augury."

"As you will have been notified of, another Dagger attack happened, this time on the friend of the Brain."

"What shall we do, my Lord?" His voice was frantic, almost hysterical. "It's only a while until he'll discover that I'm the one you employ."

"I suspect he already knows."

"Then why?"

"Because even Dagger can smell your fear, probably."

"I- I don't understand."

"You fear the death of your family and friends. You are visibly terrified. Even in public. You are no longer of any use to me."

"M-My Lord… I'm a bit shaken, b-but, I'm still an Oligarch! It won't be easy to regain that p-power."

"That's where you're wrong. You Oligarchs, for all your arrogance, can't even see what's right in front of you. Every single Oligarch is under my control."

"Y-you're b-bluffing…"

"No, Francis. I'm not. The entire Oligarchy is merely an illusion: the word itself means rule by the few. This is not rule by the few. This is rule by the one. By me. Wake up, Francis. This is an autocracy."

"Y-you're going t-to kill me, aren't you?"

"Yes. Don't forget, I have the power of telepathy. I know when someone is on the verge of cracking. And I'd rather it be your spine that cracks than your words."

Francis reached for a Pokéball at his belt, but Augury just laughed. "You're no match for me; you only have those Pokémon for show. Put up a fight, and I'll execute you more brutally than the Moonlight Squad would."

"M-my Lord… please, I can change-"

His begging words were cut short by the sound of his head turning three-hundred and sixty degrees. "Come out from the shadows, Gareth."

A very white faced, but bulky man stepped forward into the light of the crackling fire. "S-so much… power…"

"Yes, Gareth. And, as you just saw, my political and psychic powers are intertwined and inseparable."

"So… you'll make me the new Nose, if I agree to work for you?"

"Of course. And you'll be in a unique position: you'll be the only Oligarch who knows that I'm controlling the others. It was this secrecy that allowed me to rise to power amidst all this arrogance and self-importance. And now, ironically, it is this secrecy that is tearing my reign apart.

"As the Oligarchs expire, their uses ending, I will replace them with people like you, who know my true political nature. And then, I will restructure Torcra, so that I am not He who is Merely a Rumour. I will rule. The autocrat."

Gareth simply stared at this man, astonished at his thirst for power and ability to attain it.

"Now, you have two choices. The first is to walk out of here alive, as my loyal employee. And the secret succession file will be opened, which will indicate you as the successor. The other is to die."

"O-of course, the former."

"Good. You will address me as 'Lord Augury', or simply 'my Lord'. You will not discuss me to anyone, unless I have sent them. You'll know who to trust after a while, but until then, if someone claims to be working for me, the seal will tell you."

Lord Augury opened his hand, and a small, black plate with an elaborate, twisting pattern embossed on it flew from the corpse's pocket. Augury twisted it in his hand, it glowing an eerie purple, fading slightly, and then glowing again.

Handing it to Gareth, he continued. "Ask if they work for Lord Augury. If they do, they'll reveal my seal. The seal will glow like you just saw, if held by anyone who the seal was not intended for."

"A glow? Why not put something dangerous in it, my Lord?"

"Because it is very difficult to instill that kind of power in objects, even for someone with my power. In any case, it will act as a warning to you. Please sit down, Gareth. I'd like you to tell me about yourself. Fully. Your past, your embarrassing moments, your dreams, your deepest fears."

"Why, my Lord?"

"The best way for me to be able to protect someone is to have formed a strong connection with them. The easiest way to form a strong connection is a heart-to-heart conversation. Anyone can tell you that." The words heart-to-heart conversation seemed very out of place for Lord Augury. Especially in his terrifying, inhuman voice.

At that moment, two people in black cloaks and white, flat masks, strode into the room silently. Had it not been for the opening door causing light to escape into this dark room, Gareth might not have noticed. They walked to the corpse, and without acknowledging either Gareth or Augury, took the body away.

"And, my Lord, should I ever become... obsolete?"

Augury, already taking a seat, chuckled quietly to himself. "You'll retire comfortably into obscurity."

Looking at the body of his former boss being carried out by these silent, faceless people, he wondered whether that would really be the case.
 

Misheard Whisper

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Oooh . . . creepy. But I still don't get how I'm psychic. I can't actually find anything to nag you about, so for now I'm just going to say I'm really enjoying the tone you're setting here. It's very effective.
 

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I don't know if it is my tired mind, but I can't specifically point it out. I think there might be a couple grammatical mistakes in the few sentences of the beginning.

Otherwise, it is indeed creepy. Poor Bevan though, I bet he is not gonna wake up as a happy camper XD
 

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Oh, good. It had the intended effect, then. ^^

Bevan will wake up a confused camper. :P As to his camping happiness later on, that may be different... XD

I'll let you have a good night's sleep so you can see whether there were any grammatical errors (I just had a cursory glance, and I can't see any. :P)
 

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Chapter Nine: Almost

Chapter Nine: Almost
It had been a strange day for Charlotte. In the morning, Rex had mumbled a reluctant apology to Bevan. Probably because he's scared that Bevan will run to Emerit, she had thought. Rex almost totally shifted his focus to Charlotte, baiting her and watching her all day. No twitch was left unnoticed, no shifty glance left unquestioned.

They had spent the morning dodging all kinds of mechanised traps, some particularly difficult ones. One such trap had released a perpetual stream of electricity, and the only way to beat it down was to jump on top of the source of the dangerous energy's release.

Their strategy was visually spectacular. Venonat, clinging on to the back of Growlithe, had deflected the powerful thunderbolts with its use of Confusion. Growlithe had sped skillfully, dodging the reckless, yellow beams, while Venonat built up a psychic shield like it had never done before. Closer and closer, Growlithe had approached the machine, and had courageously leapt upon it, pushing it back down into the ground, removing the shock waves.

Coming to a sudden clump of thick trees, Bevan turned to Charlotte. "What's next?"

"Another forest," said Charlotte. "But unlike the first one, this is gnarly. There are all kinds of dangerous Pokémon here, it's very dark, and there are underground tunnels. But look on the bright side."

Bevan turned quizzically to Charlotte. "I didn't hear a bright side in there."

"We're nearly at the Academy. And it's been less than a week."

"Miss Appleby, you seem to know quite a bit about this area, and you speak with such flair about it."

"U-uh, yes, sir, when I was a trainer, I, well, came here illegally to battle. The Cloaks know about my involvement."

Rex frowned with disgust. She had broken a rule set by those who lead a far superior life than her, and yet she experienced a benefit from it. His hand unconsciously twitched toward his Pokéball, but he controlled himself. How amicable, thought a pervasive psychic in the distance sarcastically.

Bevan quickly cut the silence, not wanting a repeat of yesterday. "Let's go, Charlotte."

The pair, and their uninvited escort, stepped into the woods. Bevan could tell that this place was dangerous just by looking around. It was eerily dark. Gnarled roots twisted in agony beneath his feet. In the distance, the cry of a loud, angry Pokémon could be heard. To say he was apprehensive was an understatement.

Charlotte, being a natural trainer, didn't share Bevan's worry. A smile was on her face; she was ready to face this dangerous jungle.

*​

A man dressed completely in black, only his eyes revealed, sat in a leather chair. He was known only by the alias Dagger. Across from him sat a man with grey, electrified hair and a scruffy beard.

"So, Cicero," started Dagger. "You've found me. I bet Augury wished he had managed to kill you all those years ago."

"Y-yes," the man named Cicero said. He was possibly one of the most brilliant minds Torcra had ever seen, but years of being on the run and in isolation had left him slightly crazy. "This was… my only option. You seemed to be my only refuge. I can tell from your attacks that you're seeking Augury."

"Naturally. And you think you can help me? Do you know who Augury is?"

"No. But I have suspicions."

"And these lead you to believe…?"

"That Augury is a man named Manfred von Stauffenberg. A leader of a cult named The Family."

Dagger shifted uncomfortably. He'd always suspected something about that cult. It was different. Dangerous. "G-go on…"

"Stauffenberg is reclusive, but I managed to implant some spying technology. And, I saw something… amazing." He paused for dramatic effect. "He possesses psychic powers. He has the ability to control things with his mind."

Dagger sat forward. "Augury has taught a few people to use telekinesis. It is possible he is simply one of Augury's officers. The key test is: can he alter minds? Can he induce emotions?"

"Yes. Telekinesis and telepathy. Premonition, too."

"Then," started Dagger, "I believe we've found Augury. Who would've thought? He was the man controlling that whack job cult that believes the Event was caused by some trans-dimensional creature named Giratina.

"Cicero, you may very well have solved our problem. We could use your brain on so many more issues, as well. How familiar are you with psychic powers?"

"They can be used obviously to great effect on humans, less so on unwilling Pokémon, but more so on willing ones."

"Willing ones?"

"A psychic trainer can help his Pokémon to overcome psychological deficits."

"Like the four-move limit?" Dagger leaned forward.

"No – that's a neurological condition. It's rather interesting: every Pokémon has in their brain what is known as the technical cortex. This controls what Pokémon can and can't learn as moves. The restriction of four moves simultaneously is common to all Pokémon, and explains why an Alakazam, despite being able to remember a series of thousands of shapes without effort, will fail miserably in an attempt to know five moves."

"What about how Pokémon refuse to obey you if they're in a party of seven or more? Surely that's psychological?"

"That, too, is neurological. As a survival mechanism, a chemical is released into the brain if a Pokémon is kept in captivity under unnatural circumstances with six or more Pokémon. This chemical essentially transforms their entire function at that time to flee the scene. We still don't know why they have this function in their brain, but psychic powers will be unable to alter it."

Dagger leaned back. "So what can they do?"

"Emotions. You make a Pokémon so angry that it becomes vicious, and in most cases, deadly. Any emotional attachment which a Pokémon may feel for his adversary can be completely eliminated. Effectively, Pokémon under the influence of its psychic trainers can be up to twenty percent more powerful than they usually are."

"So," said Dagger. "We need to be awfully cunning, don't we?"

Cicero smiled grimly. "Indeed."

*​

"Is that… a Gligar?"

They had just emerged from a small underground path that Charlotte had suggested as a shortcut, to find a purple scorpion with small wings licking sap from a tree.

"That's right," said Charlotte. "Do you want to catch it?"

He pulled out a Pokéball from his belt and clicked the central button to maximise it. "Sure do."

"Larvitar!"

Materialising from the red light, Larvitar sprung from its ball. Gligar stopped eating and turned around, noticing that it was being challenged. It opened its claws in front of its body and launched.

"Iron Defense!"

His body hardening into an organic metal, Larvitar completely resisted the Poison Sting of his opponent. Gligar recoiled, rubbing its claws with its head, clearly in pain.

"Bite!"

Larvitar leapt at Gligar, his teeth opened wide. Gligar glided up into the air, avoiding the attack, and swooped down at his attacker.

Bevan waited for the Gligar to get into close range, before yelling "Sandstorm him down!"

Larvitar stepped back, opened its mouth, and released a large cyclone of sand and wind, while tilting its head downwards so Gligar was forced back to ground level. I'm getting the hang of this battling thing.

Gligar started to pull itself up, but before it could do so, Bevan had already ordered another Bite attack. The crunching sound of Jurassic teeth against Gligar's scorpionic shell indicated that it was time to throw a Pokéball, before it fainted.

Once again, Bevan's terrible aim made it look like the ball was going to miss completely, but it curved midair and landed on its target, absorbing it. It shook feebly, before the ping sound indicated that Bevan had caught his third Pokémon.

Bevan knelt down, picked up the ball, and then began to use his applier rod to feed the Gligar an Oran Berry while it was still inside.

"Great job, Bevan." Charlotte was smiling. Bevan turned around to see Rex's reaction. Not to anyone's surprise, he was glaring at the two of them.

*​

Evan Emerit tossed in his sleep. He was having an awful dream. He was standing before Lord Augury, on a timeless, dark plane. It stretched forever, featureless, but still terrifying. There was no sky to speak of: the entire "place", if it could even be called that, was empty, apart from Evan and Augury.

"Evan."

"Augury." Evan nodded curtly.

Augury gestured forward. "Well, it seems we have quite a problem. Bevan is…"

Terrified, Evan looked around, and approached the masked man. "Just how powerful are you? Is this a dream? Or is this you?"

"It's hard to distinguish, now, isn't it? You created me, Emerit. And now you have the pleasure of watching me grow. Watching my grip tighten."

"I never wanted this. As far as creations go, I prefer Bevan."

Augury chuckled derisively. "Bevan is the problem, Evan."

"Stop calling me that!" Evan stepped forward, enraged.

"What? Would you prefer father?"

"You know perfectly well that's not true. And you know what you are."

"And yet, you can't bring yourself to admit it. You hate what I've become, and I'm not quite what you wanted."

"This… this isn't right," Evan despaired. "Why is it going this far?"

Augury stepped forward, and whispered in Evan's ear. "It's gone this far because you thought you could control me. But you couldn't, Evan. I wonder whether Bevan will take the same route I did? You tried to control him, as well. Good job, dad.

"I am no longer what I used to be, Evan. Perhaps you won't see this side of me for months, but I will mutate. I will return, just like I am now. Maybe I'll fade away again. Maybe I won't. But some day, Evan. Someday, you won't be able to stop me."

Augury stepped back, and removed his mask.

Breathing heavily, covered in cold night sweat, Evan sat up. He panted, his eyes darting around the room. He looked down at his own hands, and felt terror. Lord Augury was out of control. He was growing.
 
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:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo Surprises abound. I wonder if Bevan is some kind of clone to Lord Augury?

And interesting take in the 4 moves 6 pokemon thing ;)
 

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I felt I needed to explain it. Usually most people get around it by saying it's a legal restriction, but, that wasn't really usable here. D:

Thanks for the comment. ^^

Would you like me to answer yes or no to your question? Or would you like something more obscure? XD
 

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No that's okay no answer is fine XD

Myself, when it comes to moves etc, I like the approach where the Pokemon would either be taught it, or naturally know all moves. But like a Charmander could never properly use Fire Blast, until it was a well trained Charizard.
 

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I'm taking an approach relatively close to the anime, in that they learn moves as they progress, but they don't have some screen that pops up and makes them choose between moves. XD;
 

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I am very much liking this so far... Is is true that Lord Augury actually is two midgets standing on top of each other, Bevan was conceived by Giratina's will, and Evan Emerit is really Giratina?
It would be great to know.
 

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Thanks. ^^ Did Sparkles send you the joke spoilers? XDD

Two midgets standing on top of each other definitely explains the stereo-sound voice, and, with all this secrecy, who knows? :D Guess you'll just have to wait. XD

Bevan wouldn't have been conceived by Giratina's will, because Giratina's son would be far more manly and awesome.

Unfortunately, if Evan Emerit was really Giratina, while it would be a nice plot twist, people would probably get suspicious that one of their leaders is a massive flying centipede. :P
 

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Ok. As far as I know, you did say that at least one of those was true...
Watch out, oh two towering midgets!

[EDIT:] Is this by any chance a Doctor Who crossover? Because then Giratina would be able to be compressed into the inside of a person's skin... The person would have to be rather fat, though.
 
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I said at least one of the silly spoilers had an element of truth. None of them are totally true.

And there were more than those three. XD
 
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