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[Pokémon] Hidden Ties, storyline

Simple question, how's the storyline so far?

  • Fantastic! You're doing a great job!

    Votes: 2 25.0%
  • Good, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Votes: 5 62.5%
  • Mediocre, definitely needs a little work.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Awful. You deserve to be lynched for this revolting piece of garbage.

    Votes: 1 12.5%

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trebornosliw

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    Okay, so this is a storyline for the hack I'm creating, Hidden Ties, that grew into something of a fanfic. I broke the word limit on my hack thread, so I'm posting the storyline on its own here. It's my belief that a hack without a good storyline is...well...absolute crud, so I tried to make an engaging plot. I'd appreciate any comments you all have, and if you'd like to see the thread for the hack itself, just click the banner in my signature.

    Now, without further ado, Pokemon: Hidden Ties.

    Prologue:
    Spoiler:


    Chapters 1-6
    Spoiler:
     

    trebornosliw

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    Thanks! It's taking me awhile to get chapter seven done, because I'm devoting most of my time to the hack itself :\
    I'll try to get it finished by this week though.
     

    trebornosliw

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    Well, it's a bit late, but here's chapter seven. Thanks for your patience!

    Chapters 7-?
    Spoiler:
     

    bobandbill

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  • Firstly, that post there is against the fanfic rules - reviews need to actually say somthing specific on the story besides 'I liked it' or 'amazing' - what did you like, and why? What could be improved, and why? Any mistakes? Etc, etc.

    Secondly, this thread is about eleven months old. =/ Don't bump old threads, please. Going to close then (trebornosliw, in the off-chance you wish to continue, PM me or Astinus to reopen this thread).
     
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