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Hello, fellow users of Pokécommunity. I have started writing a story called "Pokémon Anthology". I want it to be a five part series (perhaps six). Like the title suggests I want it to be more mature than most things in Pokémon. I think I have some good ideas to help achieve this goal, but would like some advice on how I could do that better.
As a side note, I submitted an RP called Arcaea Chronicles, which will take place in the first region of Anthology. I think at this point it'll count as a prequel to the story, taking place a few years before. There are a lot of things I added to this version of the Pokémon World, which I've called Arcaea.
If you want to read about the things I've added, you can go here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Qg...Z_Q_S2FEutA_fA
If you want to see a map of the first region of the story, you can go here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5w...FmRWt3YnM/view
And I guess that if you're interested in the Arcaea Chronicles RP, you can go here: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=362688
I've posted a thread, asking for help in forming a team to make this story into a manga. For anyone interested, please go to this thread: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=9178859#9178859
I hope you'll be able to help me accomplish my goal of making a more mature Pokémon story that's enjoyable to read.
Here is the first chapter of the first part of Pokémon Anthology, and the over all first chapter.
Chapter 1: The Journey Begins!
The world of Pokémon, called Arcaea by those who walks across its green earth, is a large and wonderful place. Far and wide, Pokémon roam, the kings of the earth. For millennia, humans and Pokémon have lived together in harmony, playing together, working together, and battling together. Starting at the tender age of ten, people are allowed to begin journeying around the world with a Pokémon at their side. For some, their goal is to simply travel and see the world, while others seek for glory through Pokémon Contests and their regional Pokémon League. Being side by side like this helps Pokémon and their trainers grow into better individuals, the best examples being Top Coordinators and Pokémon League Champions.
Kinsei is one of the five regions in the world, with the others being Monteir, Regulus, Natura and Heiwa. From the small town of Mira, in southern Kinsei, hails the champion of the Heiwa League, Tison Mathers. In the coastal town, his thirteen year old son, York, is preparing to set out on his own Pokémon journey, inspired by his father's actions.
In the Mathers family's beachside house, the teenager stood in front of his mirror, looking over himself. He stood in black jeans and a red short sleeved shirt. On the dresser that was next to the mirror lay a two tone white and blue vest as well as black fingerless gloves. A belt with a single Pokéball latched to it was there as well. He slipped them all on and nodded contently. He reached down and picked up a pair of black and blue boots, sitting down on his bed before putting them on.
The door swung open slowly. A Pawniard hung on the knob, and hopped off once the door was fully open. It happily cried at York and ran over to him. It began excitedly pointing at the open door, and was met with a slightly quizzical look. It groaned and shook its head.
"What's the matter, Colonel?" He asked, head tilted.
A girl a few years younger than York walked into the doorway. "Bro, Sydney's here! And she's not happy."
York stood and ruffled his dirty blonde hair. "What is she upset about this time?"
"You're late. it's 4:30 now. You were supposed to meet her at noon." The girl looked at him with disappointment.
"What?!" He quickly turned towards his clock, which indeed read 4:30 PM. "Why didn't she call me?!" He grabbed a blue and black one strap backpack off of his bed and ran past her, down the stairs with his Pawniard following closely behind.
"Your Pokégear is broken and you never told her about it! She couldn't get in touch with you!" Called his sister.
He reached the ground floor of his house and saw his mother standing with a girl of his age in the dining room. The girl's hands were stuffed in the pockets of a black zip up hoodie. Her blonde hair was tied in a ponytail and underneath a baseball cap. A Pink Pokégear was peeking out of the pocket of her blue shorts.
Upon hearing his footsteps, the girl turned and glared at him. "There you are, you idiot. What took you so long?"
"I'm sorry." He meekly said. "I didn't mean to get so sidetracked. Why'd it take you four hours to come check up on me?"
"Our rendezvous point was an hour away from our houses. I got on the bus but the like, fifteen minute ride, turned out to be nearly three hours because of a stupid accident and a huge traffic jam!" She stomped over to him and grabbed his collar. "I lost so much of my time because of you! You'd better be ready to make up for it one day!"
"Y-yeah, I'll make it up to you!" He told her. She let him go. "So, you're ready to go?"
She took a red and white messenger bag off of a chair in the dining room and slung it over her shoulder. "Of course I'm ready, you idiot! Because of you, we might not make it to Emeras City before we're forced to book a hotel room! I wanted to look around the city a bit." She walked to her door and put her hand on the doorknob. "Hurry up!"
He followed after her and his mother tossed a wallet over to him. "Be safe, honey!" She called. "If Nancy gets upset again, I'll be sure to calm her down, so don't worry!"
"Thanks, mom!" He caught the wallet and put it in his pocket. He took the Pokéball off of his belt and pointed it towards Colonel. The red beam of light enveloped the small Pokémon, storing it inside of the capsule. York followed Sydney out of the door and closed it after himself. Sydney was waiting for him on the sidewalk, tapping her foot impatiently. "I'm really sorry about that, Syd! I meant to get there on time, I swear!"
"Whatever." She continued to walk as soon as he reached her. "I don't know what else I was expecting. After all of these years, I should've known you'd be late. You're never on time, ever."
He sped in front of her and turned around to face her. "I know, I know! There's just so much other stuff going on and I get too excited to pay attention to the time!"
"That's the same excuse you always give me," She said, punching his arm and walking ahead of him. "You'd better change that, or else you'll die alone. You're not likely to find a girl that won't hate that about you."
He rubbed his pained arm. "Since when did you care about my love life?" He asked, jokingly.
"I won't be able to babysit you forever. Your mom can't, either. If you can't find a woman to help you later in life, I'm almost afraid to imagine what would happen. Almost." Her voice was flat and uninterested. "And one more thing." She looked over her shoulder. "This is going to be the last time in a while I ride a bus, so just shut up and let me enjoy it."
"Yeah, sure. You sure you didn't forget anything?"
Sydney nodded. "I got all of my clothes, money, and tech. Brush and Copy are more than ready, and I have my equipment as well."
York stared at her messenger bag in wonder. "You fit all of that in there?"
She groaned and remained silent for a moment. "I sent it ahead to the Emeras Pokémon Center. I'm picking it up when we arrive. Did you find us a hotel?"
He nodded. "The Emerald Sky Hotel is one of the most popular in Southeastern Kinsei! Some of the reviews compare it to the ones in Dawnseal!"
"Impressive." Sydney chuckled. "Now, assuming that you get all eight badges before the next Kinsei League Conference, you might be able to confirm that. Will the place bleed us dry?"
York's eyes widened and he chuckled nervously, rubbing the back of his neck. Sydney stopped and faced him, causing him to stop in his tracks as well. "York? How expensive is this place?" She was glaring daggers at him.
"A one night room is about 20,000 Pokédollars." He answered nervously. When Sydney didn't answer he gulped and stepped towards her. "Syd…?"
The girl was breathing heavily and clenched her fists. She lowered the brim of her hat over her eyes. "You're lucky you're my best friend. Or else I'd sock you again. That's a decent chunk of our supply fund."
"Don't worry, Syd!" He said, full of energy in an attempt to cheer her up. "It's ancient tradition for trainers to reward the victor of a battle! I'll make up for that in no time!"
"There are a few holes in your plan. I'm not pointing them out for you." She continued walking and he lagged behind, sorry for angering her.
The streets were crowded with beachgoers and tourists. The congested streeted slowed the two down a bit, and they eventually reached the Houndoom Bus Station, a national bus service. The pair boarded the 5:30 PM bus and sat next to each other. Sydney looked outside of the window, while York sat in silence, looking down at his cupped hands.
"Are you nervous at all?" Sydney spoke once the bus had left Mira Town. "About going on this journey."
"To be honest, I am a little bit. Leaving home for so long to go all over the place seems a little crazy, but we'll get used to it."
"Even if we do, there are still all sorts of things that could go wrong. We could get lost in the woods, mauled by a Pokémon, scooped up by some creep in a city…"
"It's not like you to get so worried about something, Syd. What's up?"
"I've already had to leave behind one home. It's a little tough to do it again." She sighed.
"Y'know, you don't have to stick with me the entire time." York's father had traveled through five regions before he became the champion of Heiwa. He had planned to do the same. Sydney volunteered to go along with him.
"I'm going to!" She said forcefully. "Like I said, you need someone watching you or else you'd probably just walk into a pit! Besides, when else would I get the opportunity to travel the world? There are so many photographers that want to do that but just can't!"
"You're actually worried about me, aren't you, Syd?" York teased. "That's why you're sticking with me."
She blushed faintly and lowered her hat over her face. "I said to let me enjoy this last bus ride in peace! Just shut up already!"
York laughed to himself and reclined in his seat.
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Darkness had fell upon Emeras City when the Houndoom Bus pulled into the station. It was now 11:30 at night, and the passengers began to file out through the doors. Sydney vigorously shook York, who had fallen asleep.
He stood slowly and followed her off of the bus, rubbing his eyes. "We're finally here." He looked at Sydney, who was frowning. "What's wrong?"
"It's nothing. I might be able to take a few pictures before we leave tomorrow, but I'm not sure." She began to leave the station. "Come on, you're the one who knows how to get to the hotel."
The streets of the biggest city in Southeastern Kinsei were lit by black decorative street lamps. The streets were mainly empty, with only a few people wandering them. Emerald green lights were emanating from one of the buildings, signaling the Emerald Sky Hotel. Sydney looked up at it and sighed in relief. York joined her and did the same.
She took a step towards her, but York grabbed her wrist. "What's your problem, York! We're finally here! And check in time is nearly over!"
"I just thought I heard a scream." He told her. He gestured to across the street, near an alleyway. "Let's check it out quick."
She ripped her hand free from his grip. "You can go! Just hurry up! I'll tell them I'm waiting for you. Be sure to tell that that you're York Mathers and that you came with Sydney Collins, alright?"
"I'll be sure to do that." He ran across the street, leaving his friend to enter the hotel. He found a woman on the ground, motionless. "Hey!" He called. "Are you okay?"
The woman moaned and looked up at him. "Who…?"
"What happened?" He asked. "Are you alright?"
She held her head. "Some man robbed me." She pointed to the east. "He went that way."
"I'm on it!" Cried York as he stood. "You can make it to the Emerald Sky on your own, right?" She weakly nodded. "Okay, get them to call the police. I'll be back with the crook soon enough!"
He ran off in the direction she indicated, but the woman called out to him. "Wait!" When he didn't answer, she sighed and stood, using a wall as a support. "What is that kid thinking? I hope he'll be alright." Still holding onto her head she trudged across the street to the Emerald Sky.
York ran east like the woman said and turned the corner, thinking the purse-snatcher would have in hopes of getting out of sight. He sent out Colonel and ordered him to help him search as well. The two silently searched the area, looking into alleyways as well as out in the open. The only sound was that of Kricketot and Kricketune, chirping through the night. It did not take long for the Pawniard to signal his trainer, who rushed to his side. The two saw a man climbing a fence in an alley, a pink purse slung on his shoulder.
York knelt next to Colonel. "Try to knock him down, okay?"
The Pokémon nodded and took off, when he had nearly ran to the end of the alley, he leapt and slashed at the man's arm, knocking it off of the fence and making him lose balance, falling down onto the ground. Colonel ran to the middle of the alley, facing the man.
He got up and cursed. "You stupid little Pokémon!" He saw York standing in the back. "You're its trainer?" He chuckled. "A kid like you? This is weak! Isn't it a little past your bedtime, small fry?"
"Hand over the purse!" York commanded. "If you do, this will go over more smoothly for both of us."
"You think I'll listen to a kid like you?!" He took a Pokéball out of his pocket. "I'd just kick the crap outta you, but on the off chance I get caught, that would make things worse for me. So I'll crush you in a Pokémon Battle instead." He tossed the ball, and a Drowzee emerged. "Alright, Drowzee, let's take this kid out!"
York chuckled. "Normally, I'd be nervous, since this is one of my first actual battles, but I'm fine!"
"And what is that supposed to mean?" Barked the man.
"Unless you taught your Drowzee a T.M, the only moves it can learn that can harm Dark Types, like Colonel, are Pound and Headbutt. It that's all you have, you might as well give up." He sounded quite smug. "So, what're you gonna do?"
"Drowzee, Poison Gas!" The Psychic Type inhaled deeply and exhaled a gaseous purple mist that drifted towards Colonel.
"Just in case it lands a hit, use Iron Defense! Follow it up with Night Slash!" Colonel focused and the metal on it's body began to shine and harden. It then immediately began charging towards Drowzee, going right through the gas.
"Swagger, Drowzee!" The Pokémon began waving it's arm and emitting a hypnotic wave, which caused Pawniard's orange eyes to tint red.
It continued to charge, but ran right past it. Drowzee began to headbutt Pawniard, but York watched from the sidelines, knowing full well the attacks had little effect on Colonel. Eventually the confusion wore off, and while Drowzee was going to attack, it's two blade arms became enveloped in a dark aura and it slashed, dealing massive damage to the psychic type Pokémon, causing it to fall over.
Colonel turned to the man and began walking towards him. He began backing away, until he was against a wall.
"Get Drowzee back in it's Pokéball and come with us." York ordered.
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The police had arrested the purse-snatcher, and the woman thanked York for getting her purse back. Colonel was back inside of his Pokéball resting and York was tired himself. He approached the counter and the young woman working their addressed him.
"Welcome to the Emerald Sky Hotel. Will you be staying with us today, sir?"
"Yes. I'm York Mathers. My friend Sydney Collins stopped by earlier and booked us a room."
"Ah, yes." She handed him a card key. "This is the extra key to your room. You are in #225 on the second floor. Enjoy your stay."
"Thank you."
"I must say, your girlfriend is quite cute."
"Huh? Oh, no, she isn't my girlfriend."
She gestured for him to come closer and she leaned over to him. "Our hotel is quite popular among young couples. There's a secret compartment on the right side of the nightstand that has plenty of T.M17 if you need them!"
York blushed and pushed the up button on the elevator. He proceeded to his room with nothing but sleeping on his mind, doing his best to purge the employee's comment from his mind.
He entered his room to find it pitch black. He walked in without turning on the light and noticed a lump on the right bed. He threw his backpack and vest onto the ground and threw himself onto the left bed, allowing himself to drift into sleep.
As a note, I personally pronounce Arceus "Ar-see-us", but the planet's name, Arcaea is pronounced "Ar-kay-a" with the 'kay' being like 'chaos'.
As a side note, I submitted an RP called Arcaea Chronicles, which will take place in the first region of Anthology. I think at this point it'll count as a prequel to the story, taking place a few years before. There are a lot of things I added to this version of the Pokémon World, which I've called Arcaea.
If you want to read about the things I've added, you can go here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Qg...Z_Q_S2FEutA_fA
If you want to see a map of the first region of the story, you can go here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5w...FmRWt3YnM/view
And I guess that if you're interested in the Arcaea Chronicles RP, you can go here: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=362688
I've posted a thread, asking for help in forming a team to make this story into a manga. For anyone interested, please go to this thread: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=9178859#9178859
I hope you'll be able to help me accomplish my goal of making a more mature Pokémon story that's enjoyable to read.
Here is the first chapter of the first part of Pokémon Anthology, and the over all first chapter.
Chapter 1: The Journey Begins!
The world of Pokémon, called Arcaea by those who walks across its green earth, is a large and wonderful place. Far and wide, Pokémon roam, the kings of the earth. For millennia, humans and Pokémon have lived together in harmony, playing together, working together, and battling together. Starting at the tender age of ten, people are allowed to begin journeying around the world with a Pokémon at their side. For some, their goal is to simply travel and see the world, while others seek for glory through Pokémon Contests and their regional Pokémon League. Being side by side like this helps Pokémon and their trainers grow into better individuals, the best examples being Top Coordinators and Pokémon League Champions.
Kinsei is one of the five regions in the world, with the others being Monteir, Regulus, Natura and Heiwa. From the small town of Mira, in southern Kinsei, hails the champion of the Heiwa League, Tison Mathers. In the coastal town, his thirteen year old son, York, is preparing to set out on his own Pokémon journey, inspired by his father's actions.
In the Mathers family's beachside house, the teenager stood in front of his mirror, looking over himself. He stood in black jeans and a red short sleeved shirt. On the dresser that was next to the mirror lay a two tone white and blue vest as well as black fingerless gloves. A belt with a single Pokéball latched to it was there as well. He slipped them all on and nodded contently. He reached down and picked up a pair of black and blue boots, sitting down on his bed before putting them on.
The door swung open slowly. A Pawniard hung on the knob, and hopped off once the door was fully open. It happily cried at York and ran over to him. It began excitedly pointing at the open door, and was met with a slightly quizzical look. It groaned and shook its head.
"What's the matter, Colonel?" He asked, head tilted.
A girl a few years younger than York walked into the doorway. "Bro, Sydney's here! And she's not happy."
York stood and ruffled his dirty blonde hair. "What is she upset about this time?"
"You're late. it's 4:30 now. You were supposed to meet her at noon." The girl looked at him with disappointment.
"What?!" He quickly turned towards his clock, which indeed read 4:30 PM. "Why didn't she call me?!" He grabbed a blue and black one strap backpack off of his bed and ran past her, down the stairs with his Pawniard following closely behind.
"Your Pokégear is broken and you never told her about it! She couldn't get in touch with you!" Called his sister.
He reached the ground floor of his house and saw his mother standing with a girl of his age in the dining room. The girl's hands were stuffed in the pockets of a black zip up hoodie. Her blonde hair was tied in a ponytail and underneath a baseball cap. A Pink Pokégear was peeking out of the pocket of her blue shorts.
Upon hearing his footsteps, the girl turned and glared at him. "There you are, you idiot. What took you so long?"
"I'm sorry." He meekly said. "I didn't mean to get so sidetracked. Why'd it take you four hours to come check up on me?"
"Our rendezvous point was an hour away from our houses. I got on the bus but the like, fifteen minute ride, turned out to be nearly three hours because of a stupid accident and a huge traffic jam!" She stomped over to him and grabbed his collar. "I lost so much of my time because of you! You'd better be ready to make up for it one day!"
"Y-yeah, I'll make it up to you!" He told her. She let him go. "So, you're ready to go?"
She took a red and white messenger bag off of a chair in the dining room and slung it over her shoulder. "Of course I'm ready, you idiot! Because of you, we might not make it to Emeras City before we're forced to book a hotel room! I wanted to look around the city a bit." She walked to her door and put her hand on the doorknob. "Hurry up!"
He followed after her and his mother tossed a wallet over to him. "Be safe, honey!" She called. "If Nancy gets upset again, I'll be sure to calm her down, so don't worry!"
"Thanks, mom!" He caught the wallet and put it in his pocket. He took the Pokéball off of his belt and pointed it towards Colonel. The red beam of light enveloped the small Pokémon, storing it inside of the capsule. York followed Sydney out of the door and closed it after himself. Sydney was waiting for him on the sidewalk, tapping her foot impatiently. "I'm really sorry about that, Syd! I meant to get there on time, I swear!"
"Whatever." She continued to walk as soon as he reached her. "I don't know what else I was expecting. After all of these years, I should've known you'd be late. You're never on time, ever."
He sped in front of her and turned around to face her. "I know, I know! There's just so much other stuff going on and I get too excited to pay attention to the time!"
"That's the same excuse you always give me," She said, punching his arm and walking ahead of him. "You'd better change that, or else you'll die alone. You're not likely to find a girl that won't hate that about you."
He rubbed his pained arm. "Since when did you care about my love life?" He asked, jokingly.
"I won't be able to babysit you forever. Your mom can't, either. If you can't find a woman to help you later in life, I'm almost afraid to imagine what would happen. Almost." Her voice was flat and uninterested. "And one more thing." She looked over her shoulder. "This is going to be the last time in a while I ride a bus, so just shut up and let me enjoy it."
"Yeah, sure. You sure you didn't forget anything?"
Sydney nodded. "I got all of my clothes, money, and tech. Brush and Copy are more than ready, and I have my equipment as well."
York stared at her messenger bag in wonder. "You fit all of that in there?"
She groaned and remained silent for a moment. "I sent it ahead to the Emeras Pokémon Center. I'm picking it up when we arrive. Did you find us a hotel?"
He nodded. "The Emerald Sky Hotel is one of the most popular in Southeastern Kinsei! Some of the reviews compare it to the ones in Dawnseal!"
"Impressive." Sydney chuckled. "Now, assuming that you get all eight badges before the next Kinsei League Conference, you might be able to confirm that. Will the place bleed us dry?"
York's eyes widened and he chuckled nervously, rubbing the back of his neck. Sydney stopped and faced him, causing him to stop in his tracks as well. "York? How expensive is this place?" She was glaring daggers at him.
"A one night room is about 20,000 Pokédollars." He answered nervously. When Sydney didn't answer he gulped and stepped towards her. "Syd…?"
The girl was breathing heavily and clenched her fists. She lowered the brim of her hat over her eyes. "You're lucky you're my best friend. Or else I'd sock you again. That's a decent chunk of our supply fund."
"Don't worry, Syd!" He said, full of energy in an attempt to cheer her up. "It's ancient tradition for trainers to reward the victor of a battle! I'll make up for that in no time!"
"There are a few holes in your plan. I'm not pointing them out for you." She continued walking and he lagged behind, sorry for angering her.
The streets were crowded with beachgoers and tourists. The congested streeted slowed the two down a bit, and they eventually reached the Houndoom Bus Station, a national bus service. The pair boarded the 5:30 PM bus and sat next to each other. Sydney looked outside of the window, while York sat in silence, looking down at his cupped hands.
"Are you nervous at all?" Sydney spoke once the bus had left Mira Town. "About going on this journey."
"To be honest, I am a little bit. Leaving home for so long to go all over the place seems a little crazy, but we'll get used to it."
"Even if we do, there are still all sorts of things that could go wrong. We could get lost in the woods, mauled by a Pokémon, scooped up by some creep in a city…"
"It's not like you to get so worried about something, Syd. What's up?"
"I've already had to leave behind one home. It's a little tough to do it again." She sighed.
"Y'know, you don't have to stick with me the entire time." York's father had traveled through five regions before he became the champion of Heiwa. He had planned to do the same. Sydney volunteered to go along with him.
"I'm going to!" She said forcefully. "Like I said, you need someone watching you or else you'd probably just walk into a pit! Besides, when else would I get the opportunity to travel the world? There are so many photographers that want to do that but just can't!"
"You're actually worried about me, aren't you, Syd?" York teased. "That's why you're sticking with me."
She blushed faintly and lowered her hat over her face. "I said to let me enjoy this last bus ride in peace! Just shut up already!"
York laughed to himself and reclined in his seat.
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Darkness had fell upon Emeras City when the Houndoom Bus pulled into the station. It was now 11:30 at night, and the passengers began to file out through the doors. Sydney vigorously shook York, who had fallen asleep.
He stood slowly and followed her off of the bus, rubbing his eyes. "We're finally here." He looked at Sydney, who was frowning. "What's wrong?"
"It's nothing. I might be able to take a few pictures before we leave tomorrow, but I'm not sure." She began to leave the station. "Come on, you're the one who knows how to get to the hotel."
The streets of the biggest city in Southeastern Kinsei were lit by black decorative street lamps. The streets were mainly empty, with only a few people wandering them. Emerald green lights were emanating from one of the buildings, signaling the Emerald Sky Hotel. Sydney looked up at it and sighed in relief. York joined her and did the same.
She took a step towards her, but York grabbed her wrist. "What's your problem, York! We're finally here! And check in time is nearly over!"
"I just thought I heard a scream." He told her. He gestured to across the street, near an alleyway. "Let's check it out quick."
She ripped her hand free from his grip. "You can go! Just hurry up! I'll tell them I'm waiting for you. Be sure to tell that that you're York Mathers and that you came with Sydney Collins, alright?"
"I'll be sure to do that." He ran across the street, leaving his friend to enter the hotel. He found a woman on the ground, motionless. "Hey!" He called. "Are you okay?"
The woman moaned and looked up at him. "Who…?"
"What happened?" He asked. "Are you alright?"
She held her head. "Some man robbed me." She pointed to the east. "He went that way."
"I'm on it!" Cried York as he stood. "You can make it to the Emerald Sky on your own, right?" She weakly nodded. "Okay, get them to call the police. I'll be back with the crook soon enough!"
He ran off in the direction she indicated, but the woman called out to him. "Wait!" When he didn't answer, she sighed and stood, using a wall as a support. "What is that kid thinking? I hope he'll be alright." Still holding onto her head she trudged across the street to the Emerald Sky.
York ran east like the woman said and turned the corner, thinking the purse-snatcher would have in hopes of getting out of sight. He sent out Colonel and ordered him to help him search as well. The two silently searched the area, looking into alleyways as well as out in the open. The only sound was that of Kricketot and Kricketune, chirping through the night. It did not take long for the Pawniard to signal his trainer, who rushed to his side. The two saw a man climbing a fence in an alley, a pink purse slung on his shoulder.
York knelt next to Colonel. "Try to knock him down, okay?"
The Pokémon nodded and took off, when he had nearly ran to the end of the alley, he leapt and slashed at the man's arm, knocking it off of the fence and making him lose balance, falling down onto the ground. Colonel ran to the middle of the alley, facing the man.
He got up and cursed. "You stupid little Pokémon!" He saw York standing in the back. "You're its trainer?" He chuckled. "A kid like you? This is weak! Isn't it a little past your bedtime, small fry?"
"Hand over the purse!" York commanded. "If you do, this will go over more smoothly for both of us."
"You think I'll listen to a kid like you?!" He took a Pokéball out of his pocket. "I'd just kick the crap outta you, but on the off chance I get caught, that would make things worse for me. So I'll crush you in a Pokémon Battle instead." He tossed the ball, and a Drowzee emerged. "Alright, Drowzee, let's take this kid out!"
York chuckled. "Normally, I'd be nervous, since this is one of my first actual battles, but I'm fine!"
"And what is that supposed to mean?" Barked the man.
"Unless you taught your Drowzee a T.M, the only moves it can learn that can harm Dark Types, like Colonel, are Pound and Headbutt. It that's all you have, you might as well give up." He sounded quite smug. "So, what're you gonna do?"
"Drowzee, Poison Gas!" The Psychic Type inhaled deeply and exhaled a gaseous purple mist that drifted towards Colonel.
"Just in case it lands a hit, use Iron Defense! Follow it up with Night Slash!" Colonel focused and the metal on it's body began to shine and harden. It then immediately began charging towards Drowzee, going right through the gas.
"Swagger, Drowzee!" The Pokémon began waving it's arm and emitting a hypnotic wave, which caused Pawniard's orange eyes to tint red.
It continued to charge, but ran right past it. Drowzee began to headbutt Pawniard, but York watched from the sidelines, knowing full well the attacks had little effect on Colonel. Eventually the confusion wore off, and while Drowzee was going to attack, it's two blade arms became enveloped in a dark aura and it slashed, dealing massive damage to the psychic type Pokémon, causing it to fall over.
Colonel turned to the man and began walking towards him. He began backing away, until he was against a wall.
"Get Drowzee back in it's Pokéball and come with us." York ordered.
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The police had arrested the purse-snatcher, and the woman thanked York for getting her purse back. Colonel was back inside of his Pokéball resting and York was tired himself. He approached the counter and the young woman working their addressed him.
"Welcome to the Emerald Sky Hotel. Will you be staying with us today, sir?"
"Yes. I'm York Mathers. My friend Sydney Collins stopped by earlier and booked us a room."
"Ah, yes." She handed him a card key. "This is the extra key to your room. You are in #225 on the second floor. Enjoy your stay."
"Thank you."
"I must say, your girlfriend is quite cute."
"Huh? Oh, no, she isn't my girlfriend."
She gestured for him to come closer and she leaned over to him. "Our hotel is quite popular among young couples. There's a secret compartment on the right side of the nightstand that has plenty of T.M17 if you need them!"
York blushed and pushed the up button on the elevator. He proceeded to his room with nothing but sleeping on his mind, doing his best to purge the employee's comment from his mind.
He entered his room to find it pitch black. He walked in without turning on the light and noticed a lump on the right bed. He threw his backpack and vest onto the ground and threw himself onto the left bed, allowing himself to drift into sleep.
As a note, I personally pronounce Arceus "Ar-see-us", but the planet's name, Arcaea is pronounced "Ar-kay-a" with the 'kay' being like 'chaos'.
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