PokeCommunity Review Exchange Page 2

Started by Bay September 17th, 2018 8:50 PM
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Vragon2.0

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Took in Stairway to Heaven (chs. 4, I1, 5 and 6 I think?) featuring the cutest Nido I swear, and this is the resulting commentary.

As per usual, I take input on any of my stories, though this time I'll give a preference to Playfield despite its age, or to As They Were.
With As They Were being viewed and now Reviewed Because apparently rhyming constitutes a chuckle nowadays I'd like to request a review on as many chapters of Shattered Crests book 1 as you want. Of course, keeping in mind I'd prefer newer chapters reviewed, but eh I'm not picky. Though, if SC doesn't tickle your fancy you can do a review of The Snow I Miss and add more to the Nido Line Lovin'.

Thanks!

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Darkinium Z

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With As They Were being viewed and now Reviewed Because apparently rhyming constitutes a chuckle nowadays I'd like to request a review on as many chapters of Shattered Crests book 1 as you want. Of course, keeping in mind I'd prefer newer chapters reviewed, but eh I'm not picky. Though, if SC doesn't tickle your fancy you can do a review of The Snow I Miss and add more to the Nido Line Lovin'.

Thanks!
You requested just in time as I've reviewed the latest SC chapter!

As for me, Foul Play as usual. I would prefer the latest chapter, but any/where you left off is good. I'm also cool with a review for the short fic Shark Bite!

Foul Play
[Chapter Nine up!]

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As for me, Foul Play as usual. I would prefer the latest chapter, but any/where you left off is good. I'm also cool with a review for the short fic Shark Bite!
Better late than never - I've given Shark Bite a lil review!

On my end, I wouldn't mind a cheeky review of my new fic, Fresher Meat. Thanks!
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Better late than never - I've given Shark Bite a lil review!

On my end, I wouldn't mind a cheeky review of my new fic, Fresher Meat. Thanks!
Review for Fresher Meat: The Hangover Effect of reviewing a drinking chapter

Now, once more, I'd like a review of any chapter in Shattered Crests Book #1 or my one-shot The Snow I Miss

Thanks!

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Reviewed Chapter Four of Shattered Crests here.

I'm still looking for more reviews on The Stairway to Heaven, please.
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Reviewed Chapter Four of Shattered Crests here.

I'm still looking for more reviews on The Stairway to Heaven, please.
Kept forgetting to mention this, but did a review for the last three chapters of Stairway to Heaven!

As usual, looking for reviews for Foul Play or Shark Bite!

Foul Play
[Chapter Nine up!]

gimmepie

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Kept forgetting to mention this, but did a review for the last three chapters of Stairway to Heaven!

As usual, looking for reviews for Foul Play or Shark Bite!
As promised, I reviewed Chapter Six.

Still looking for more reviews on The Stairway to Heaven.
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As promised, I reviewed Chapter Six.

Still looking for more reviews on The Stairway to Heaven.
So got Chapter 7 of The Escalator to NidoFans Heaven reviewed.

As per the usual.
One review of any chapter from Shattered Crests Book 1 with preferences aimed for latters but any accepted. Or if you want a little bit of Nido laidbackness for the review time, check out The Snow I Miss since I'm looking for reviews on that too.

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gimmepie

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Reviewed Shattered Crests Chapter 5.

Looking for more reviews on The Stairway to Heaven.
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Darkinium Z

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Went and reviewed the most recent chapters of Stairway to Heaven!

As usual, looking for more reviews of Foul Play!

Foul Play
[Chapter Nine up!]

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So I went and reviewed Foul Play after reading like, half of it. Man, I should probably read more of it later.

So, ah... anyone mind giving Effects of a Brief Therapy a review?
Review made for chapter 3 of Effects of Gen 5 music Therapy

Alrighty, you all know the drill.
A review on any chapter(s) of Shattered Crests Book 1
or a review of the SC one-shot The Snow I Miss with currently 2 nido-points to its name.

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gimmepie

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Reviewed Chapter 6 here.
Looking for reviews on The Stairway to Heaven.
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Darkinium Z

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Reviewed the last three chapters of Stairway to Heaven.

Looking for reviews on Foul Play!

Foul Play
[Chapter Nine up!]

Vragon2.0

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I reviewed Foul Play.

Looking for reviews on Galar's Darkest Hour.
Bada Bing, Bada Review

Before, I submit my request.
Glad to have found folks working on their own version of fan fic? I'm a beginner still in the "contemplative" stages of writing fan fic.
Nice, though I think you might not know what this thread is. This is the Review Exchange thread that's basically a thread where you post a review on the last person to post's story and then you request which story you want to have reviewed. For example, I just posted a review of "Galar's Darkest hour" by Skalesgon, who's right above you. I'm not going to be elementary and do a request myself. So this isn't exactly a chatty thread, but more a "I review and then request post" kind of thread. No problem though, you are new and all so tis fine at least in my book. Hope this clears some things up.

Now, on with the main act,
I'd like a review of at least one chapter from, Shattered Crests. I would prefer it to be one of the newer ones, but it's long and pretty bad I'm not picky. Pick whichever chapter, or you agree with me and it's long and bad, you can instead do a review of The Snow I miss, a one-shot that I'm not sure if it's better or not when it comes to my older writing stuff.

Either way, hope the read is enjoyable.

“A friend is someone who understands your past, believes in your future, and accepts you just the way you are.”
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