Okay this may come across as blunt and rude, but that is how I am so deal with it or you are a n00b/newb;
The overall maps are squarish, try to sprice them up a little more and try to show us an event view with sprites or point them out to us and I found a lot of misspellings in the main info about it and you should develop a more detailed storyline so readers can want to play the game more to find out about all of the twists and turns and cool things that could happen, like why is Giovanni back, what happened to Kanto to make the places redone and some of the main things like is Misty still the leader and what kind of pokemon are found and is this going to have towns that were only in the anime and not just in the origianl game and are there different connections and gym orders and types and people and all of that good stuff, but most of all pretty good idea.
