The PokéCommunity Forums Create & Discover Art & Design
Discussion Anubeon: Ghost Type Eeveelution; Feedback Wanted

Art & Design For visual art, photography, and music! Pokémon related or not, showcase or discuss anything related to the visual or musical arts.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1    
Old 3 Days Ago (2:52 AM).
Black Temple Gaurdian Black Temple Gaurdian is offline
 
Join Date: May 2010
Posts: 152
So I've been working on Anubeon, a ghost type eeveelution for about an hour or two now. First off, thoughts? Second off, thoughts about how to make it's hind legs look more natural?



I tried to go for a jackal-like head, the stereotypical egyptian headdress, and a was-staff for the tail.
Probably going to go for a muted gold and purple colour scheme. With bright red eyes of course.
__________________
Reply With Quote

Relevant Advertising!

  #2    
Old 2 Days Ago (12:09 PM).
Nina's Avatar
Nina Nina is offline
striving for life
DSC
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Arkansas
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Nature: Brave
Posts: 2,014
I think you need to make what I assume is your golden headress a little more apparent. Is that just an outline of the shape or is it a thin wire itself?

For the hind legs issue, you need to look at it's position and how it relates to the ground itself. If it's sitting evenly on the ground, the hind legs and front legs should both be level. The back should either curve downwards to show that the hind legs are down in a sitting position like you have them drawn, or the hind legs should be extending, standing up like the front.

While the perspective might not have the legs perfectly even, do you see the difference in hind legs when standing and sitting in these pictures, and how the shape of yours looks like it's in the sitting position?


__________________

See my art here!
Freelance Illustrator
Paired to Captain Ellie
Sister to: Rika & Ana
My sons: Kyle & Zappy
Moderator of Art & Design
The New CrewPC Discord
Reply With Quote
  #3    
Old 1 Day Ago (7:13 AM).
Who's Kiyo?'s Avatar
Who's Kiyo? Who's Kiyo? is offline
puking rainbows
 
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Olivine City
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Nature: Quirky
Posts: 3,193
As for the concept, I like the Egyptian flair you're trying to give it! I think sticking with the gold color for the headdress and tail - possibly adding a few jewels to the design - would make those features stand out.

I do agree with Nina, I think you can do much more with the concept of the headdress. Those ancient Egyptian royals weren't minimalist when it came to style, and there's much more potential in this design to utilize their trademark features.
__________________
Game Master for "Off The Menu," Rhodes in "Journey Optional," and Avatar by AnimaGlacies
-
-
Pair
-
Underground
-
Roleplay Theatre
-
Credits
Reply With Quote
  #4    
Old 16 Hours Ago (9:52 AM).
Black Temple Gaurdian Black Temple Gaurdian is offline
 
Join Date: May 2010
Posts: 152
Currently the headdress is just an outline (that's been redrawn about five times since >:/ ).

For the posture I'm trying to go for that sorta sphinx/playful dog pose, but it's giving me hell.
__________________
Reply With Quote
Reply
Quick Reply

Sponsored Links
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 2:01 AM.