Vragon
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So we all have stories we love and some we love even though we know their flaws. So I'd like to ask, if you had the writing pen what series would you fix and how would you go about it. (The latter is optional or you can generalize).
For me, I'd probably fix the Kingdom Hearts series.
Anyways, so what about all of you? It can be from anything you want that has a story.
For me, I'd probably fix the Kingdom Hearts series.
Spoiler:
I'd follow up till DDD and fix it with an alternative to having the return of older villains. For example, instead of having 12 other Xheonorts, I would have played Xeonort coming back do to the whole nobody/heartless mechanic. And use that for him to gather the pieces for the keyblade war from behind the strings. Considering how he convinced Maleficent and has the power of the keyblade, he could grant the power to wield such a weapon to peeps that would join him along with probably taking over some if needed. That way you could avoid time travel duck tape and show he's not a complete genius in everything.
I'd also prevent Sora from being a perfect little plot convenience. I wouldn't have the organizations members come back since it would make sense that they couldn't. I would keep Roxas in Sora due to Ventus's influence being a big part of that (Since I could incorporate Ventus influence into Roxas).
One last thing I'd fix in BBB I'd give Trio more backstory as well as talk about Ventus' origins. As well as having Aqua in darkness however, I would have terra/Xeohnort actually stay dead. One last thing I'd fix would be 358/2 days in changing Xion as a puppet to one similar to Puppet Riku. Have her pretend this under Saix orders to deliberately gather power from Roxas. Let then those memories affect her and as a result cause her confusion. Have then Xemnas try to close the project due to its unsafety and therefore destroy Xion, but have the result put doubt into Roxas's head. Make her tell him her manipulation of him and as a result having him leave. Have Axel play the part of the out of knowledge friend that doesn't understand and Roxas not wanting him involved.
I'd also prevent Sora from being a perfect little plot convenience. I wouldn't have the organizations members come back since it would make sense that they couldn't. I would keep Roxas in Sora due to Ventus's influence being a big part of that (Since I could incorporate Ventus influence into Roxas).
One last thing I'd fix in BBB I'd give Trio more backstory as well as talk about Ventus' origins. As well as having Aqua in darkness however, I would have terra/Xeohnort actually stay dead. One last thing I'd fix would be 358/2 days in changing Xion as a puppet to one similar to Puppet Riku. Have her pretend this under Saix orders to deliberately gather power from Roxas. Let then those memories affect her and as a result cause her confusion. Have then Xemnas try to close the project due to its unsafety and therefore destroy Xion, but have the result put doubt into Roxas's head. Make her tell him her manipulation of him and as a result having him leave. Have Axel play the part of the out of knowledge friend that doesn't understand and Roxas not wanting him involved.
Anyways, so what about all of you? It can be from anything you want that has a story.