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[Question] Constructive criticism on Virtue city descriptions?

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  • Some constructive criticism might be appreciated on these like anything else i should add to them because i feel like i shouldve added more to these but these are what i got so far

    Teiso City (Chasity)
    Teiso city is a city where families of all different races and sexual orientation come together with their children that are seen running round.Equal love vibes are seen throughout here as no-one is deceitful to each other or their family as well as the encouragement of dating with consent so that people understand the good moral of love and passion. Pokemon like gardevoir and gothitelle are often seen with women (both birth and trans) to show appreciation of this city. Clampearls are often seen in gardens like ponds as a luvdisc and gorebyss fountain is found in the center of the city.

    Umerenost City (Temperance)
    Umerenost have only functional decorations and flowers - buildings are purely functional and samey. It's a normal looking city however it is located in a dangerous volcanic field. People tend to have small rivers or fountains that resemble rivers in their garden despite the dangerous area they live in. Some people are seen meditating to keep their calm and some often listen to zen like music. They praise azelf for its temperance as a legendary pokemon. Some also keep the regional variant of drowzee as well as its evolution within this city as well as water pokemon that often love their rivers.

    Gyeomson City (Humility)
    Gyeomson is a city where people refuse to offer those who are greedy money and are happy with what they have as they have learnt to appreciate what they have and use what they have to help themselves. They do not appreciate those who are greedy for land or any other purpose as it defies what their virtue is and they do not like how people can be so prideful of themselves either as they consider each member of the city like a family and try to treat one another with respect and consider each other's feelings. Gallades,meditites and medicham often help them with this as they try and get to help each other's feelings whilst lucario is a highly respected pokemon for its own humility to other pokemon.

    Karità City (Charity)
    Karità city is a place filled with charity shops that aim to help raise money for different pokemon causes that can help make the region a better world. There's options to give homeless people money as well as helping others by donating to greater causes, mostly endangered Pokémon protection and Pokémon disease research.Chanseys often will help carry pokemon eggs to several pokemon ranches in order to care for them if the trainer is away as well as miltank often giving out like it's milk to not just trainers but also other pokemon as well. Delibird is also handy as it gives out presents to those who don't have one no matter their status and pelipper and wingulls help to deliver packages and mail to far away people in different pokemon regions.

    Obacnosty City (Diligence)
    Obacnosty city is a Very busy city that has many business buildings and people working however they do take power naps within the facility and stay hydrated with a healthy routing for their day. There is also some police force as luxray and arcanine are often patrolling to keep the city in peace though they seem a little restless. Inside the buildings - machoke and machamp help out with those moving into or moving out of the city as people might need help carrying really heavy things. Bibarel often helps out by building new houses or even cabins out of log wood as it often tries to do the best it can.

    Nài xīn City (Patience)
    Nài xīn City is a medium city built across ancient trees using holy branches of sorts whilst people are waiting for people to move on finished bridges as they wait for the other unfinished bridges to be done as they are patient and take their time. They are the most calm and patient as everyone is patient even if there are inconveniences. fighting types can be seen wandering around training in patient styles of combat including yoga to help keep their calm as some have come from the humility or temperance city to train in patience. Shuckle often moves quite slow so it requires patience so that it can be happy as well as wobbuffet who is known for being the patient pokemon and regigigas is a praised pokemon as it was known to be the most patient pokemon out of the legendary Pokémon.

    Bonté City (Kindness)
    Bontè city is a city with a Legendary Dragon as its protector. It was once vicious and terrified but the city's people showed kindness towards it like they did to all other Pokemon, feeding it and making sure it didn't get hurt - but still protecting themselves from their wrath all the same. Eventually, the dragon mellowed out and returned that kindness. Everyone is kind and curious towards each other. grass type pokemon can be seen wandering around enjoying the calm and kind atmosphere. If this atmosphere is disturbed the grass types (who can learn the move) will use aromatherapy to quell the aggressive tone. Blissey are often seen,wanting to help those who have traveled to this city to heal their pokemon after a long trip as well as audino as they are both willing to heal the trainer and their Pokèmon .
     
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