Pokemon - Chosen Destiny

Thanks for the congratulations! XD
That's a great map but I noticed a few errors. They're too hard to explain so I've circled them in the attachment instead. It's mainly with the rock formation, areas of it just look unnatural or incomplete.
There's also a faint square on the grass by the cave entrance, I'm not sure what that is...

phoenix316 said:

Thanks for the congratulations! XD
That's a great map but I noticed a few errors. They're too hard to explain so I've circled them in the attachment instead. It's mainly with the rock formation, areas of it just look unnatural or incomplete.
There's also a faint square on the grass by the cave entrance, I'm not sure what that is...

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that faint square is an event(rmxp) ;)

As -virtual- said, the faint boxes are events and I've done something for those unnatural ledges:

nice i like that one peekimon

I like it as well. Good re-editing, Peekimon! Maybe add a few light grass patches or even some flowers could spice it up a bit. ;)

~Jeff

The waterfall doesn't look natural. Fix that and it should be perfect! :)

PKMN_Sage said:

The waterfall doesn't look natural. Fix that and it should be perfect! :)

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Unfortunately, that's how waterfalls look in Fr/Lg. The only way around it would be to custom make the waterfalls.

I had some spare time.. What do you think?

That looks way better, Krazy! I guess small changes do make a big difference.

Umm, Krazy, may I ask what's the difference from my map and your map?
BTW, Good job recreating Route Joh 2!

Peekimon - the difference is the waterfall, it isn't as wide as the original and doesn't stick out much and looks a bit more natural.

Oh, Ok, thanks for the explanation.

I'd do anything to help ;). It's not a massive difference anyway, and if Nintendo can get away with using that waterfall I don't think you'll get criticised for doing the same.

You're right.
This isn't really an update, but I'm starting to create the events of Joh Island, in other words:
Palbark town > Palbark forest > Virigrove City > Route Joh 2 > Crystal Caves > Route Joh 3 > Pewtiolet City > Sea Route Joh 4 > Ceruliteak City.

That would take a while :)
By the way, Palbark forest is really a link to Virigrove City and Route Joh 1.

Pewtiolet? That sounds funny in so many ways XD. I see how you've got the Town names and it's a pretty creative idea. ;)

I know what you mean XD, it really came from Pewter + Violet
^_^;
It needs a name change.....uh any suggestions?

Pewtlet? Pewtolet? Just try to come up with a name combo that you like the sound of.

How's Pewviol sound? Or Pewvilet?

--Edit--
I'm in need of a scripter, any one?

Sorry to double post but I'd like to make two kinds of announcements:
1 > Pewtiolet is now officially known as Pewtviol City (It is subject to change)
( 2 )
Here are the towns/cities/routes etc. planned for Johkan.
(ignore the dots)
Joh Island
|-Palbark Town
|-Palbark Forest - Route Joh 1
|- Virigrove City - |- Cave of Secrets
|- Route Joh 2
|- Crystal Caves
|- Route Joh 3
|- Pewtviol City
|- Pewtviol Port/ Harbour (need suggestion which to keep)
|- Sea Route 1
|- Ceruliteak City
|- Sea Route 2

Johkan Mainland:
|-Cirtcele Town
|- Route JML 1
|-Grand Forest
|- Route JML 2 / Route JML 3 / Route JML 4
|-Lamron City / Vermilirod City / Granrock City
.....................|-Route JML 5 / Route JML 6,7,8
.....................|-Johkan Lighthouse/ Research Center- Shoalbay Port - Unknown


Johkan Islands
|-Route JKS 1
|-Inter Island Resort
|- Route JKS 2 / Route JKS 3
|- Bordera - Johto : Route BJ 1 > Bordera- Johto City / Route JKS 4 > Kryken Resort > Route JKS 5 > Kryken Cave

And many more!
You'll notice that there's an Unknown. It's a unique city/town which I need some suggestions and the best name will be that name and the founder will be the one who gave the name!

Sweet! So, most of these you mapped out?