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Old August 29th, 2008 (3:28 PM). Edited July 23rd, 2010 by obLonG.
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    This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
    These comics are rated from G to pg-14

    Title Page

    1: Brendan and Handy.

    2: Not Goodity

    3: Hated Love

    4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole

    5:This is not a Plot Device

    6tupid backpack,love is for kids

    7:Rise of demon may

    8:Beams and Pee

    Filler: Point of view

    9: He looked

    10: They're shiny

    11: Discussing, Disgusting

    12uspense and Crossbreeding

    Filler:Important Generation Rape

    13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13]

    14: The Anti-Heroes [NEW]
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    Old August 29th, 2008 (3:42 PM).
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      I... don't get it. He's on a truck... and that thing is Ping Pong? I'm confused. O___o;;
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      Old August 29th, 2008 (3:46 PM).
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        In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove
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        Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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        Old August 29th, 2008 (4:01 PM).
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          i dont get it either... although my 'comics' never made sense either but i like the hand.. but i dunno why.
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          Old August 29th, 2008 (4:02 PM).
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            He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.
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            Old August 29th, 2008 (8:01 PM).
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              ohhhhhh...i get it now. He's riding in a truck playing ping pong on the computer and with it. So, why did you decide to put the computer as a hand?
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              Old August 29th, 2008 (8:10 PM).
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                The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2
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                You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                Who Am I?
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                Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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                Old August 29th, 2008 (9:39 PM).
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                  Is the hand meant to be master hand from Super Smash Bros/Melee/Brawl? lol I like the last scene in comic 2.
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                  Old August 30th, 2008 (2:43 AM).
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                    Thanks and no its just a normal hand.
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                    Who Am I?
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                    Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



                    My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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                    Old August 30th, 2008 (6:30 PM).
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                      wow, alot of questions about a hand. lol. anyway, haha psycho mudkip. loved that bit.
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                      Old August 30th, 2008 (6:40 PM).
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                        i seriouslt still get it or find it funny... im sorry but i dont and bit with the title is way to messy
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                        Old August 30th, 2008 (7:04 PM). Edited September 3rd, 2008 by obLonG.
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                          The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up
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                          You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                          Who Am I?
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                          Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



                          My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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                          Old September 4th, 2008 (11:11 AM).
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                          I actually love this
                          First I didn't understand, then I got it.
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                          Old September 4th, 2008 (1:45 PM).
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                            Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.
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                            Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

                            You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                            Who Am I?
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                            Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



                            My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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                            Old September 5th, 2008 (11:42 AM).
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                              these are great, i love how its not a total cliche pkmn comic u gotta make more

                              the hand is the one from in your PC when u move pkmn and stuff
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                              Old September 5th, 2008 (12:48 PM). Edited September 5th, 2008 by obLonG.
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                                It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?
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                                Who Am I?
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                                Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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                                Old September 8th, 2008 (12:44 PM).
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                                  i think that supporter banners would be cool
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                                  Old September 8th, 2008 (1:12 PM).
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                                    ... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

                                    Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

                                    #5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

                                    And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.
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                                    Old September 8th, 2008 (9:24 PM).
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                                      Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.
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                                      You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                                      Who Am I?
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                                      Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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                                      Old September 12th, 2008 (11:19 PM).
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                                        thats pretty cool. i suck at those thingies
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                                        Old October 12th, 2008 (3:04 PM).
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                                          This is a pretty awesome comic. It's a good thing I posted before one month was up.
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                                          Old October 13th, 2008 (11:32 AM).
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                                            lol this is well good when you Posting your next one?
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                                            Old October 13th, 2008 (11:56 AM).
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                                              This is a mess. I can't tell what's going on at any point in time and the panels are spread out all over the place. Why not just put them side-by-side?
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                                              Old August 14th, 2009 (8:08 PM).
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                                                A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.
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                                                You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                                                Who Am I?
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                                                Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



                                                My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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                                                Old August 18th, 2009 (3:51 AM).
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                                                  For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
                                                  To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

                                                  So sneak peek #1 away!:
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                                                  You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

                                                  Who Am I?
                                                  I AM


                                                  Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



                                                  My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


                                                  The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT
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