Pokepark Sprite comic

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    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokepark Sprite comic


    THE HIATUS IS OVER!
    IMPORTANT:I am looking for an assistant with the comics.Pm me if you want to sign up.
    This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
    These comics are rated from G to pg-14

    Title Page

    1: Brendan and Handy.

    2: Not Goodity

    3: Hated Love

    4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole

    5:This is not a Plot Device

    6:Stupid backpack,love is for kids

    7:Rise of demon may

    8:Beams and Pee

    Filler: Point of view

    9: He looked

    10: They're shiny

    11: Discussing, Disgusting

    12:Suspense and Crossbreeding

    Filler:Important Generation Rape

    13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13]

    14: The Anti-Heroes [NEW]
     
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    I... don't get it. He's on a truck... and that thing is Ping Pong? I'm confused. O___o;;
     
    In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove
     
    -_- i dont get it either... although my 'comics' never made sense either but i like the hand.. but i dunno why.
     
    He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.
     
    The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2
     
    Thanks and no its just a normal hand.
     
    i seriouslt still get it or find it funny... im sorry but i dont and bit with the title is way to messy
     
    The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up
     
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    Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.
     
    these are great, i love how its not a total cliche pkmn comic u gotta make more

    the hand is the one from in your PC when u move pkmn and stuff
     
    It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?
     
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    ... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

    Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

    #5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

    And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.
     
    Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.
     
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