The World Without Pokémon (SUs Now Accepted!)[Rated G] OOC + Signup Thread

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    The World Without Pokémon (SUs Closed)[Rated G] OOC + Signup Thread

    This is the OOC thread for The World Without Pokémon. All OOC (Out Of Character) posts and signups are to be posted here.

    Rules: Mostly the same as the other thread.

    - Follow the Roleplay rules: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=156071
    - Only post OOC stuff in this thread.
    - Posts must be in detail.
    - Keep this thread G-rated. That means, no swear words, no sexual themes, no drug themes, nothing like that.
    - No having anime/game/manga/whatever characters. I feel that would just be too awkward.
    - No more trainers can be accepted as we have already begun the RP.
    - You must all be 11, 12, or 13 (the right age for 7th Grade)
    - No Pokémon are available now, with Cyndaquil taken by me, Totodile taken by iPrincess, Pikachu taken by Jazmine Marie, Charmander taken by Proddit, Squirtle taken by fire woven, Bulbasaur taken by Key'd, and Chikorita taken by patch.
    - Please state how you know Diego Johansen (me) in your SUs; after all, you couldn't have a sleepover at a house of someone you've never met before!
    - Whatever I say GOES, no matter what!
    - No shiny Pokémon or legendarys of ANY form unless I say so!
    - Signups must be long and must follow the guidelines from this example:
    Spoiler:
     
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    Okay, here it is. reserve me Totodile please, I'll see what I can do. :D
     
    Here's the finished SU!

    Name:
    Clara St. James
    Age: 12
    Gender: Female
    Preferred Pokémon: Pikachu

    Personality:
    [FONT=&quot]Curious by nature, Clara St. James appears to be more cat than human [not literally, of course]. Clara is fairly absent-minded, and usually has trouble concentrating on one thing/task for any long length of time. She has been labeled as 'ADD' by her classmates and teachers, but Clara doesn't listen to their so called 'diagnosis'. Full of energy and a lack of common sense, she spends her time doing things that most people consider weird, like: hanging upside down from tree branches, dancing on top of garbage cans, asking random people if they like cheese, and etc. She also spends a lot of time napping, much to her teachers' and parents' enjoyment. Clara is forever an optimist, always able to find something good or funny in any situation.[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Sadly though, Clara is usually unable to keep very many friends because she is too 'different' or 'crazy' for them to handle. Clara doesn't usually mind this because she considers her mother's Pokémon to be her friends. When confronted by a mean or rude individual, Clara tends to ignore them and walk away, not really caring what the person might say about her. She also happens to be a fairly good artist, although she rarely finishes any pieces because she becomes bored with them and gets new ideas rather rapidly. On a more random note; Clara gets cold very easily, so she is very good at finding the warmest area in a room.[/FONT]

    Appearance:
    [FONT=&quot]As the daughter of the renowned model Elizabeth St. James, Clara has indeed received a fair share of her mother's genes. Already standing at around 5'6", Clara is much taller than the average seventh grader, and is expected to grow to around 5'11" once mature. Since Clara weighs in at only 90 pounds, she is extraordinarily skinny for her height and is often compared to a twig. Flowing black locks cascade down past her shoulders, contrasting greatly with her naturally pale complexion. Her eyes are a piercing, penetrating blue color that causes people to look away when they catch her eye. Even though Clara is so underweight, she does have some muscle and strength from all of her running around.[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]As she is such a hyper girl, Clara's clothes are naturally just as crazy. Black shorts adorn her legs and are accessorized with bright belts, stickers, and/or boas. A neon colored t-shirt or tank top covers her torso and is covered by a silver jacket. Multiple beaded necklaces, bangles, plastic rings that you get from cupcakes, and tiaras are just some of the other accessories that Clara wears on a normal basis. When the weather gets bad, Clara wears black leggings underneath her shorts, bright yellow rubber boots, and carries a pink polk-a-dot umbrella.[/FONT]

    History:
    [FONT=&quot]Clara grew up in the bustling city of [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Goldenrod[/FONT][FONT=&quot] with her mother Elizabeth and her younger sister Lauren. Her father left the family before she was born, so of course, she pesters her mother for information about him constantly. Because her mother was a model, Clara and Lauren were home alone for most of the week. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Elizabeth[/FONT][FONT=&quot] didn't like leaving her children alone like that, but she needed to keep working in order to provide for them. While spending time at home, Clara and Lauren played with their mother's Delcatty, pretending that she was their own Pokémon and that they were going to be Pokémon masters. This is where Clara got the idea to become a Pokémon trainer.[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]When she started attending elementary school, Clara was surprised to learn that she was required to wear a uniform. So, in rebellion of conformity, Clara began dressing like she does in the present day. People gawked at her extremely bright and bizarre clothes, and her teacher was forced to send her to the principles office many times, but Clara still dressed in her crazy way. When she turned ten years old, Clara began counting down the days to when her mother would let her start her own Pokémon journey. Clara was avid about exploring every nook and cranny that the world had to offer. She wanted to learn all she could about the things that interested her. Most of all, Clara wanted to do all these things with Pokémon at her side.[/FONT]

    Post Sample: Click Here!
     
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    Accepted: Jazmine Marie for a very well done signup, and you do get Pikachu.

    Waiting: iPrincess, please get your SU in soon, please.

    As soon as we have all four other members here, we will begin the roleplay.
     
    Name: Daniel Harris


    Age: 13


    Gender: Male


    Preferred Pokémon: Squirtle


    Personality: Dan is a geek. He loves video games and computers. He is a neat person but not some things like his backpack. He loves water and fire Pokémon. He is a great learner but his skills in mathematics are very bad. He knows how to make a database, video game, animation, and anything else really on a computer. He is also very optimistic and cheerful, but he hates his vision impairment and that gets him upset when it really affects him. He tries to not be mean but his competitive side gets the better of him sometiimes. He is not someone who will be teased for his vision and can be angered easily by offences about it.

    Appearance: Dan is fairly short (5') and is very skinny (96"). He is never hot because he is skinny so he wears jeans even in the summer. He will not wear a long sleeve shirt however. He has short cut light blonde hair. His eyes are a pale green as the contacts are colored. He wears a platinum watch on his left arm he got from his dad. He has a scar on his left arm. It goes up from his elbow to his shirt sleeve. It is not that big but it is noticeable. He sometimes squint's his right eye when he looks at a far away object as his left eye is dominant. He wears a dark blue backpack that has four pockets and a pen pouch.


    History: Dan was born without pupils and many other problems of the eye and with numerous surgeries He can see fairly well. He has awaited his Pokémon for many years but did not believe it when he got him. With Dan's eye problems he could not play sports so he is a nerd at heart. He was a very stubborn child and he has learned not to be that way unless he thinks it is important. If anyone tries to hurt him he would know not to try and fight to hard because he does not want to be injured.

    Sample: Dan walked down the corridors remembering the day's events...

    Dan stood at the door to his apartment waiting for something.
    Dan: "Well squirtle are you ready to go"?
    Squirtle nodded obviously understand him.
    Dan: "good".

    As Dan aproached the prison a security guard stopped him.
    Guard: "Halt! State your business"
    Dan: "I am Erif Nevow I came for my appointment".
    Guard: "Ah OK go along".
    Dan: "Thank you"

    As Dan entered the building he was greeted by some people and other guards stopped him. He did as the man on the phone told him to.

    When he finally reached the room labeled "KSA staff only" he opened the door and entered a few others sitting down at the table. When the meeting was over and he was accepted he walked into the lounge and sat down at the table with the rest of his squad his life dram fulfilled he was an officer of the law.
    Dan: hello everyone I'm Dan codename Erif Nevow after my ancestor. Call me Erif for short
     
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    First of all, never write RPs in script format. Meaning:
    Dan: Hi.
    Dan: This is how I write.
    Dan: Don't write like this!
    You also have some runon sentences, like:
    He is also very optimistic and cheerful but he hates his vision impairment but he lives with it.
    A better way to write that would be:
    He is very optimistic and cheerful. He hates his vision impairment, but he can live with it.
    In the first place, the 'vision impairment' stuff and things like that should be in the History section, not Personality.
    Also, your grammar in some places is horrible. Like this:
    Dan: hello everyone I'm Dan codename Erif Nevow after my ancestor. Call me Erif for short
    Should be something like this:
    Hello, everyone. I'm Erif Nevow. Call me Erif for short.
    Yes, I do know that I changed a lot around, but most of it was unnecessary.
    Your SU has been set to the Waiting status for the above reasons. Please correct them and I will decide.
     
    Sorry, it'll be done by Friday, at the latest. xP
     
    Aww no Eevee. Oh well, I'd like to reserve a spot with Charmander please.
    Sure thing. Make sure to send it in soon.
    Sorry, it'll be done by Friday, at the latest. xP
    Okay, thanks. Only three more people needed! (Two if fire woven fixes his SU) :)

    I'm now setting a reserved spot time limit, starting at this post's date, 10/7/09.
    A person with a reserved spot has one week to post their SU, except for iPrincess and Proddit, whose one week begins today. If you still haven't posted your SU after a week, I will de-reserve your Pokémon.
     
    First of all, never write RPs in script format. Meaning:
    Dan: Hi.
    Dan: This is how I write.
    Dan: Don't write like this!
    You also have some runon sentences, like:A better way to write that would be:In the first place, the 'vision impairment' stuff and things like that should be in the History section, not Personality.
    Also, your grammar in some places is horrible. Like this:Should be something like this:Yes, I do know that I changed a lot around, but most of it was unnecessary.
    Your SU has been set to the Waiting status for the above reasons. Please correct them and I will decide.

    give me a few minutes to get it up and I will be done. Oh and BTW I DO NOT use script format it was an old habit I kicked when I came to this forum site. I will fix it after I eat my dinner but I will get it started now.

    (Sorry but I can not change the RP sample right now. I have others I can show if neeeded but just so you know.)
     
    give me a few minutes to get it up and I will be done. Oh and BTW I DO NOT use script format it was an old habit I kicked when I came to this forum site. I will fix it after I eat my dinner but I will get it started now.

    (Sorry but I can not change the RP sample right now. I have others I can show if neeeded but just so you know.)
    Yes, please show an RP sample that has better grammar and no script format and fix the various errors, and then I might accept it.
     
    I'd like to reserve a spot please. Whatever is left over is fine with me ^.^ It took me a while to decide if I wanted to join or not ^.^'
    Well, you can choose between Chikorita, Bulbasaur, and Squirtle.
     
    Name: Jason Barry King
    Age: 13
    Gender: Male
    Preferred Starter: Totodile

    Appearance: Jason is a bit tall for his age, standing at five and a half feet tall. He is rather skinny, and because of this he is a fast runner. He has thin eyebrows, and dark brown hair, which is pretty short and curves around his ears, spiked in the front. His eyes are both a very bright emerald green. His normal outfit is a green t-shirt with a faded white peace symbol on it, under a dark blue hoodie, and battered blue-jeans. His tennis shoes are solid white.

    Personality: Jason is a rather outgoing person, and finds himself comfortable around most people his age, even girls. However, around people older, he stays quiet. He is a kind person, but can be a bit sarcastic at times. His know-it-all-ish attitude can get annoying sometimes, and he is quite good at school work, taking notes, getting work done, and paying attention. Although he is bright, he isn't the best at sports that require catching, or throwing a ball. Jason fears death, and is afraid of losing someone he's close to. Jason is a good leader, and is generally on top of things. He can be serious if need be, but can be an overall fun person to be around.

    History: Jason was born and raised in the Hoenn region, in the floating town of Pacifidog. His parents both worked with water: His mom studied some kind of water (Jason never understood), while his dad trained water type Pokemon. Only about twenty kids lived in the town, and they all attended Aquifer Academy, a small building in the middle of the town. Jason was one of the brightest children at the school, and made friends with all the other kids. Then, in the year of Jason's seventh birthday, everything went wrong. His best friend, Maddie Sandlohov moved away to the Johto region. But that wasn't all. That same year, Jason's dad went to explore the nearby Sky Pillar. And he never returned. Jason was hurt, torn apart. His best friend and his own father had left, and only one of them was even half there, in letters and e-mails. But life moved on. Slowly, Jason patched himself up, put himself together. One day, a letter arrived for Jason. It was from Maddie- inviting him to a massive party in Johto. He begged, pleaded, did whatever he could to convince his mom to let him. And in the end, she did. And so, on the morning of Jason's thirteenth birthday, Jason kissed his mom good-bye, and boarded the S. S. Seaslug—un-aware of the happenings soon to take place!


    RP Sample:

    Spoiler:



    This, to tell the truth, is NOT my best SU ever. However, it's only about a sentence shorter that yours(i measured :P), so it should cut it. :D
     
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    Accepted: Proddit, and iPrincess if (s?)he gets her RP sample in. I almost would have accepted it without the RP sample. :D

    Declined: fire woven for trying to correct his grammar mistakes and making more in the process. If you can correct them before Key'd posts his SU, you get the spot. Also, you must show proper grammar in your other posts THE FIRST TIME.

    Reserved: Key'd, you have Squirtle reserved until 10/14/09 CST, unless fire woven proves he knows what good grammar is before you post a GOOD signup. :P

    It's a battle for Squirtle, unless somebody would like Chikorita or Bulbasaur...
    I know, I don't like Grass types either unless I'm battling them! :)
     
    Accepted: fire woven for correcting his grammar mistakes. Thanks a bunch! :D

    Unknown: Key'd, you've just been kicked out of having Squirtle, sorry. Would you like Chikorita or Bulbasaur instead?

    This is excellent! We only need one more person if Key'd decides to change Pokémon! Also, I'd like to know how you know Diego Johansen (me) in your SUs; after all, you couldn't have a sleepover at a house of someone you've never met before!
    (BTW, there CAN be girls at Diego's house, they'll just go into another room at bedtime.)
     
    Accepted: fire woven for correcting his grammar mistakes. Thanks a bunch! :D

    Unknown: Key'd, you've just been kicked out of having Squirtle, sorry. Would you like Chikorita or Bulbasaur instead?

    This is excellent! We only need one more person if Key'd decides to change Pokémon! Also, I'd like to know how you know Diego Johansen (me) in your SUs; after all, you couldn't have a sleepover at a house of someone you've never met before!
    (BTW, there CAN be girls at Diego's house, they'll just go into another room at bedtime.)

    Ah shoot D: The really vexing part is, had my computer been in healthy condition instead of sniffing computer aids, I would've had my sign-up posted before post #17, where you declined fire woven a second time, which would've made it a fairer competition. Then I got pulled into a football game right as I was making progress.

    Regardless, nicely won, fire woven :D

    Anyways, Bulbasaur please?
     
    Ah shoot D: The really vexing part is, had my computer been in healthy condition instead of sniffing computer aids, I would've had my sign-up posted before post #17, where you declined fire woven a second time, which would've made it a fairer competition. Then I got pulled into a football game right as I was making progress.

    Regardless, nicely won, fire woven :D

    Anyways, Bulbasaur please?
    Sure! Just get your SU up before a week is up.

    Only one more person needed to start the RP! :D
    LET'S GET SIGNING UP, PEOPLE!!
     
    OKay, finished! :D

    So, can't wait to start!

    But, isn't Ic3b3rgZ reserved for the last spot? Or did he count as one?

    And...um...by 'sexual(l) themes', does that mean no romance at all? Because...well..you see...:D
     
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