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Old July 26th, 2010 (5:24 AM). Edited August 1st, 2010 by Nytkoi.
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    Contents


    Introduction - Team -Story - Media - Bugs - Region - Pokedex - Credits - Downloads

    Introduction


    Hello everyone, you may know me as a graphic deisgner, game maker from RMXP and Hacking. Well, I've come back to hacking, then RMXP, and so on and so forth, but right now I'm back here and I plan to stay this time. So I hope enjoy my newest game - Pokemon Copper Version!

    Team


    Team Leader(s):
    Owner - Nytkoi (Everything)
    Co-owner - Apple Juice (Mapper, Graphic Designer, Scripter)

    Members:
    -Link- - Spriter

    Story


    this is the storyline for my previous game; pokemon moonlight. a great amount of my fans enjoyed this story so i decided to not fix what isn't broken
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    PART 1
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    In the year 20x1, you are a seven year old pokemon fanatic. You have
    dreams of becoming a pokemon master of the Jinju Region once you turn 10.
    You live on the peacful and small town of Elderford. Your father works
    at the lighthouse. Your best friend, April/Colin's father works there
    too. But, on November 3rd, 20x1, something tragic happened to your
    family, making your father enraged.
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    PART 2
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    Your father is working at the Lighthouse with April/Colin's father,
    working to fix a small problem. At your house, your mother is treating
    your little sister, who has been ill for weeks. This makes it hard for
    your father to go to work. He does not want to leave his sick child.
    Your mother makes sure everyone is calm and it's just like any other
    sickness, but Inside, she is worried as well.
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    PART 3
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    A week after that day, your mother calls the Doctor from Neicawave
    City to check on her daughter, a.k.a your little sister.
    After a few hours of testing and catscans, your little sister, Daisy,
    is diagnosed with... PokeRus.
    Your mother is in complete shock. She stammers, saying that is a pokemon
    disease. The doctor agrees, but explains something tragic happening in the
    human world. The only reason your mother is shocked it becuase Elderford
    is far away from big Citys in the Jinju Region, and they do not hear much.
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    PART 4
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    The Doctor that came to Elderford Island on a special ship to get
    there as quickly as possible explained to your family about PokeRus,
    except your father is not home. He is working at the LightHouse, not knowing
    that his little daughter has just been diagnosed with the most newly discovered
    cancer.
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    PART 5
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    PokeRus mysteriously became a disease for humans as well as Pokemon on
    September 12, 20x0. An old women named Agatha was diagnosed and died
    that very same month. As the year of 20x0 went by, houndreds of people
    in the Jinju region were diagnosed of PokeRus, which stunned scientists.
    They had no idea what this disease was and how it became a human disease,
    and why it affects humans worse then pokemon. They called the year 20x0 the
    Tragic Mystery.
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    PART 6
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    Now, your mother is even more shocked. By the end of the day, when
    your father comes back from the LightHouse, it was time for the Doctor
    to leave. Your mother quickly explains everything to your father. Before
    he can even pull himself together with shock, the Doctor tells them that
    he needs to take their daughter away from them to the Hospital in the bigger
    parts of the Jinju region. The Doctor then takes the seriously ill child to the special
    ship. Your father runs after the Doctor yelling that it wasn't right to take their
    daughter, but it was too late. Your mother and father's daughter had been taken
    away from them.
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    PART 7
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    As a result, when your father came back, he took the old boat from the garage
    of the house and rowed after the ship that carried his daughter. Now, your
    family has lost two members, not knowing where they were or if they were alright.
    Now, in 20x4, you are 10, and going to getting your first pokemon at the
    Sunshine City pokemon center. Your mother only lets you leave the island becuase
    she wants you to find that hospital, and find out if your father is there and
    if your little sister is alright. At the Sunshine City Center, there is a small
    lab where you get your first pokemon. Then, you set out on a journey, not to become
    a pokemon master like you had dreamed of on the year after the tragic year, but
    to find out the mystery of what became of your father and your little sister.

    Media




    Bugs


    None yet

    Region


    this was imported from my old game as well
    The Jinju Region


    Pokedex


    #001 - Vinnid - The Tarantula Pokemon - Grass/Psychic
    #002 - ??? - The Furry Pokemon - Grass/Psychic
    #003 - ??? - The Agility Pokemon - Grass/Psychic
    #004 - Embeal - The Ferret Pokemon - Fire/Dark
    #005 - ??? - The Slick Pokemon - Fire/Dark
    #006 - ??? - The Burning Fur Pokemon - Fire/Dark
    #007 - Narfin - The Spearfish Pokemon - Water
    #008 - Seawhal - The Ocean Pokemon - Water/Fighting
    #009 - Brawcean - The Narwhal Pokemon - Water/Fighting


    Credits

    • -Link- - Being a great support
    • Sena - A good irl friend of mine who helped w/ the pokedex

    Downloads


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    Old August 1st, 2010 (3:46 AM).
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      Mini Update!



      Yay. Teaser screen to show that I'm actually working on this~
      (I would show a scrn of the event but I need to get FR/LG OWs first :P)


      The nex few things on my list of to dos, is
      Get FR/LG OW
      Get D/P/Pt battle stuff
      Get the D/P/Pt windowskin in
      ETC. :3
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      Old August 1st, 2010 (9:51 AM).
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        um...I don't really love the story to be honest, I just can't imagine a kid getting affected by Pokerus and your sister and father didn't really dissapear so it doesn't scream MYSTERY, and what is up with this whole 20x thing?
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        Old August 1st, 2010 (2:48 PM).
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          um...I don't really love the story to be honest, I just can't imagine a kid getting affected by Pokerus and your sister and father didn't really dissapear so it doesn't scream MYSTERY, and what is up with this whole 20x thing?
          ...

          It's unique way of labeling years I came up with.
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          Old August 1st, 2010 (2:53 PM).
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          I Like the Idea... Seems a bit "Graphic" for a pokemon game :S,
          But it's your game, Good Luck

          P.s I Could'nt think of another word than Graphic :)
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          Old August 1st, 2010 (6:21 PM).
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            Thanks ^_^

            I worked on some errors and put in the 3 starters. Took awhile but its cool I guess. Working on some customizing the game.
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            Old August 3rd, 2010 (4:59 PM).
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              Mini Update #2



              No screenshot today but like I said, working on customizing everything. I def. need trainer spriters (from scraatch please) so if you're interested and talented PM me. Also, I'm working on fixing some weird errors I currently have in the game. Once that's done, I'll be able to produce a scrn.

              Sorry about no screen :/
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              Old August 6th, 2010 (12:41 PM).
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              So, we finally inserted an HG/SS windowskin and Nytkoi will post with a screenshot to show.

              Soon we will have a battle screen and some event screens so stay tuned.
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              Old August 10th, 2010 (12:59 PM).
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                looks very good. would very much like to play this
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                Old August 12th, 2010 (2:02 AM).
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                  I might be reading it wrong, but I'm still unsure of how it went from 20x1 to 20x0 between Parts 1 and 4.
                  Overall the idea has its merit, and room to grow.
                  I won't exactly say its the kind of eye catching mind blowing piece of work for a generation, but it does show potential if its written the right way.
                  I suggest organizing the ideas a bit more, merging things instead of leaving it simply to just parts and creating it more in the way of a chapter sequence to better catch attention.
                  Some parts are sketchy and need more detail to make it better understandable as well.
                  And for the 20x idea, to be flat its an old idea, no offense mind you.
                  The idea of saying "20x" or more accurately "20xx" was introduced in the Megaman Battle Network series.
                  To say its an original idea doesn't hold much ground when their game came before yours, if you catch my drift.
                  I'll keep my eye on this though, and be happy to provide ideas and creative criticism if you prefer.
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                  Old September 18th, 2010 (3:33 AM).
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                  的なインターネッ の最高級!
                     
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                    Sounds like an awesome game!Can't wait to Play It!
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                    pretty much explains how I felt. I know a bunch of people that have better Events than me like the Lv. 100 Arceus or Celebi etc.
                    but it's still my first event and it has a special place in my heart.
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