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Old July 3rd, 2012 (5:51 AM).
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Renyui! Renyui! is offline
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I was talking to my girlfriend last night and i just felt the need to throw down. This is an edit of what was originally sent, as there were some rough mistakes here and there.

i don't think what to say
i'm confronted by an ocean of feelings
dancing through the cavities of my mind,
the deep abyss of emotions
one shining familiar beams through
one shining familiar memory of love

that thought chills me to the very tip of my toes
waves from this ocean of emotions surge through my body
crashing on the rocky safe haven of my heart
where you sit, in calm content
your gaze unbroken

your love unwavered

come to my soul

nothing lasts forever anymore
but you don't believe a word
because he says what she means
so take care of the good boy
but he meets your loving smile
and he falls over his own heart
can't you figure it out?
cheap champagne pours
it's in your eyes
you show the fixtures for

the lines you amend
that waver through crevices of feeling
i wanna thank you
for the good in everyone
for everything i've done wrong
i am the cancer
to which you cure

and it's seems so heavy
it's all something you've known
but you must welcome this
it is an old friend
found in a new form
and you can't help but question
'will i belong?'

If I've overlooked any mistakes, do tell. i didn't mind this piece and would refine it further. peace out.
playin': Don't Starve, Injustice: Gods Among Us
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