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Old July 3rd, 2012 (5:51 AM).
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    I was talking to my girlfriend last night and i just felt the need to throw down. This is an edit of what was originally sent, as there were some rough mistakes here and there.


    i don't think what to say
    i'm confronted by an ocean of feelings
    dancing through the cavities of my mind,
    the deep abyss of emotions
    one shining familiar beams through
    one shining familiar memory of love





    that thought chills me to the very tip of my toes
    waves from this ocean of emotions surge through my body
    crashing on the rocky safe haven of my heart
    where you sit, in calm content
    your gaze unbroken



    your love unwavered



    please
    please
    come to my soul




    nothing lasts forever anymore
    but you don't believe a word
    because he says what she means
    so take care of the good boy
    but he meets your loving smile
    and he falls over his own heart
    can't you figure it out?
    cheap champagne pours
    it's in your eyes
    you show the fixtures for



    the lines you amend
    that waver through crevices of feeling
    i wanna thank you
    for the good in everyone
    for everything i've done wrong
    i am the cancer
    to which you cure



    and it's seems so heavy
    it's all something you've known
    but you must welcome this
    it is an old friend
    found in a new form
    and you can't help but question
    'will i belong?'



    If I've overlooked any mistakes, do tell. i didn't mind this piece and would refine it further. peace out.
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