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[Pokémon] Mienfoo/Mienshao Drabbles

bobandbill

7.8/10 too much water
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    My entries for Mienfoo and Mienshao for the Writer's dex. I think I preferred my previous attempts, but here goes!

    Mienfoo's first, as usual.


    Leap of faith


    One after another, a gang of Mienfoo sprang into the air, trying to strike a collection of bright red berries dangling just out of reach. At length they retired for a break, pondering whether it was worth further effort.

    One Mienfoo then stepped up. She rubbed her hands together and started sprinting before leaping up high. The group watched as she sliced through the air and narrowly missed.

    THUNK.

    She slid down the trunk and sighed, expecting to hear taunts and laughter. But only cheers came. She blinked and turned around, greeted by the sight of berries tumbling down.
     
    And Mienshao's entry!


    Whip it good


    She had heard about this wild Pokémon. It danced lightly upon the grass in front of her Pikachu, radiating a quiet power. What an addition it would make!

    It suddenly lashed out and slapped her Pokémon with its arm. The mouse Pokémon cried and stumbled over. Before either trainer or partner could react it continued the assault, flowing from attack to attack by spinning gracefully into the next whipping motion.

    "Stop!" she yelled. It responded by slapping her, before bounding away into the bushes.

    She rubbed her stinging face, gasped, and decided she didn't want to capture the Mienshao anymore.




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