School in Hoenn 2010

Sponsered by Hoenn 2010.
Notice:
Needing teachers.
Battle teacher(Backsprite needed), Status teacher(Ya know, paralise, sleep, frozen ect.), different-types teacher(fire electric, grass ect.), Pokeball teacher(teaches different types of pokeballs and how to catch pokemon), science teacher(teaches about the desert, grassland and sea) and a Head teacher/master.
If you want to say anything bad about the comics, PM me or put them in nicer form not "This comic is poo. 0/10"
Write out like this:

Name:
Age(20 or over):
Sprites:
(I'll decide the pokemon they use)
And that's about it.
More comics will start once people sign up.

Bio's:

William
Age 14
First pokemon Bulbasaur and Torchic
Trying to become a good trainer in the new world of Hoenn. He likes to become friends with everyone over Hoenn and the other regions. Right now he must attend school for learning is always a pulse pounding way to learn about pokemon(And other things)

Shylocke
Age 11
First pokemon Larvitar
Loves training up pokemon but kind of stays out of sticky situations. However when his pokemon evolve he shows off their power. Brother friend lives over in Johto and sees him every few months.

Serenity
Age 14
First pokemon Eevee
Somewhat a Psychic collector and a rare-kind-of-pokemon collector too. Though she had attended school last year, she goes back home to Lilycove on the holidays. She stays at her cousins house at night on the other nights aswell.

Karen
Age 14
First pokemon Pichu
She stays at Serenitys cousins' house on school nights and goes back to her home town, Oldale, when she has time.

Teacher bios coming soon.

In Hoenn, the school in Rustbro is open and I as William have joined, so these are the comics of me at school.
Intro.
Comic 1. Where is he?
Comic 2. Haunter!
Comic 3. The middle of the battle.
Special comic 1. Chrismas death.
Comic 4. The meeting. New!!
The colour of my sprite is the colour of the school clothes.
If a pupil would like to join subscription form is this:

Name:
Age:
Sprites:
Pokemon wanted to bring to school(Not like Deoxys, Jirachi, Mew, Mewtwo ect.):

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Credits
Shylocke, Avatar, Celebi22, Crystal_Lily_Breeze.

Hard to say anything about this... there are three speech bubbles, nothing else -.- And I suggest you come up with your own cast. It makes it look like you actualy put effort into your comic

Alright, the Head teacher is here: Called Kevin.

No offence man but your sprites make my eyes bleed....Most of them go over the lines/have blending issues and are badly shaded...

dash is right they really are quite pathetic the sprites ??

didn't you get this idea of adamski148?

Yeah thats what i was thinking when i first saw this thread...

I'll try making him again but a bit darker then.
I didn't get this idea from adam because the school rooms are different and the clothes are different. There is a teachers r different and they have tours in the desert. I don't have a train and his comic is way different. I f you don't like this comic, stay away from me and my comics!

The idea in general is similar to Adamski's.

But don't worry about it, he doesn't own the idea. I've seen similar ideas scattered about, not on here, but in a lot of places.

You do what you plan to do.

Heres Kevin in a darker shade and combed his hair

Ugh it still looks awful, no shading or anything.

Hm, may I give you two pointers?

1. Don't try saving sprites as .JPG. It kills their quality. Save them as .PNG or .GIF...preferrably .PNG

2. You might want to try adding some shading to the sprite, so it looks more presentable, it looks quite flat.

Well. I await the next episode of your comic.

Signomi, I took your advice and here Kevin is (again)

I tried the shading and it looks much better.

Much better than the older ones. Though I can still see a few things that catch my eyes, it's the hair, basically, it doesn't look right IMO, and you might want to be careful with the colours you may choose...but never the less, this is my opinion.

Also, this thread is about your comic, no? If you want me to go into further detail, then PM me. But otherwise, I anticipate your comic idea, so as I've said before, I await the next episode of your comic. ^_^

hi adwajir... heres Shylocke

First comic is up
Comic 1.

lol not bad... anymore coming our way soon

EDIT: i have a teacher and i'll do over worlds tomorrow
Name: Sora nitashi
Age(20 or over): 20
Sprites:

Credit to Signomi for the pose

Okay squall, Sora is OK.
I'll give credit to Signomi.

yes it is a battle teacher and here are the over worlds

Comic 2 is up!
The funny part is the hanter starts playing a game. Credit for Signomi.