Pok?mon: Destiny Arrived

Pok骯n: Destiny Arrived

Hi folks! This is my first comic so be as harsh as you need be.
Will be more descriprive when i get the chance to write more.
My creidt page is attached. It will grow bigger as time goes.

Rule for this thread , IF YOU LOOK AT MY COMIC THEN POST!!!
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Characters

Kinsley- The main character. Will play a big role in what is to come. Is now deciding on which Pok骯n team to pick, after meeting with Brandon and Ash. Wants to defeat every trainer for his mom( and for the fact he is 16 and jsut now getting his first Pok骯n) Now that a fight is coming, he may not have a chance to run away.

Ash- A famous trianer that Kinsley meets. May play a major role in what is about to come.

Brandon- A famous trianer that Kinsley meets. May play a major role in what is about to come

Alyssa- Came from Lavender Town. Her only family is Gandpa. Well she is very jolly and sort of emotional sometimes.She used to hate Pokemon but when she was given one she found out their importance and became a vey good trainer.

Zigfreid- German, so not many people understand him. Not much else is known.

Agent 47- A ruthless assasian. Has many outfits to change his guise.


Mace- Mace is a great triner he lives in saffron and in mauville. He has a strange likeing of electric pokemon and won't let anyone get in his way to become the world's great electric pokemon trainer!


Dash- Dash was abandoned when he was very young. His parents were taken by the rockets, he fended for himself untill he was 12 when he found out that his parents were rocket deserters. Cowards. Abandoners. He has refrained from all contact with them ever since. Nowadays he trains the Electric mouse type Pok骯n. He has over 200 Pikachu at his ranch and many other electric mice.

Evil Omega Latios- Wants to control this dimension by all means nessecary.

Omegal Latios- From the same dimension as E.OL but wants to stop him at all costs.
Secondary Characters
Prof. Cherry- Prof. In this comic. Is a male. The twin brother of Birch. But got hsi name changed to Cherry. Helped in gene splicing
Mom- MAin Characters mom
Shirlena- cahnnel 6 reporter. Noone likes her. You will eventually see why.
Grandpa- Alyssa's only family
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Comics
SEASON 1: Born to help.
Episode 1: Meeting Hero
Episode 2: About to Choose
Episode 3: Alyssa's birth
Episode 4: Predator and Prey show
Episode 5: First Battle P.1 || First Battle P.2
Episode 6: Dash's Arrival
Episode 7: Evil Omega Latios' Plans
Episode 8: Alyssa's 3 years
Episode 9: People Divide
Episode 10: Battle for Status
Episode 11: Fated Battle?
Episode 12: Tied Down
Episode 13: Traitor in the Ranks?

Season 2: Ready for anything
Episode 1: Recap

Special Comics
Season 1
Phone Call

Fan Comics
TPH #1: Goku waits

Holiday Comics
#1 V-Day
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Requests for Reserve
Sprites:
Name:
Story:
Team: Good(Omega Latios)-NO SPOTS LEFT!! Bad ( Evil Omega Latios)- only three spots
Pokemon:
ANything else you wanna add to help me:
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Credit
Attachment and soem will be here

Badassbill for Oldman sprites
https://raichu.s41.xrea.com/poke/charset/trainer.html for various sprites
Omega Latios for sprites and ?ƒ€?ƒƒ?'??ƒ? for Dash sprites 9with help of Avatar)

nice start, I like the font you chose. very neat XD
theres some spelling mistakes but nothing major.
keep up the good work. that was funny: "there is ash and brandon OMG they are hot" XD

i like it too. but, my eailer post got deleted.

Yeah, did you liek where Shirlena faked to getting captured by Team Rocket. I did that because i could find celadon mansion maps.
Also i have a poll here for you guys. I know i messed up on words but hey almost everyone does.

WHAT SHOULD THE THREE GROUPS BE?
Choice one
An original Fire Pok?mon w/ a fire/flying fusion and fire/ground fusion
An original Water Pok?mon w/ water/psychic and a water/shadow
An original Grass Pok?mon w/ grass/rock and grass/normal

or Choice 2
Origian Shadow(includes eveelutions) shadow/flying and shadow fire
Original Light( eveelotuions included) light/ground and light water
Original psychic w/ psychic/grass and psychic/ice

Even though you messed up on the words its nothing that makes the comic not make sense so its ok.

and I dont understand that fusion thingie o_o

Ohh you mean my coices?
It means that the other tow pokemo nmon will be a fire and another flying type fusins. Like arcanine and pigeot. that help?

coreystranick said:

Ohh you mean my coices?
It means that the other tow pokemo nmon will be a fire and another flying type fusins. Like arcanine and pigeot. that help?

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yeah that helps. i like choice 1 better

ALright..i neeed foru more people to answer before i start to make my next comic.

So right now it is
choice 1 -1
Choice 2 -0

Hey decepticon you think you could get some people here to see my comic

choice two for mey. it;s like better for some reason. im gunna change my name in here probably.

Alright

choice 1 -1
choice 2- 1

i need at least two more people and in the cse of a tie a fifth. If you visit this thread and atleast look at the comics PLEASE POST

This is a good comic overall. What text do u use?
I wont join so dont bug me pls.

verenda i think, also i don't care if you don't wanna join,i won't bug you. Also what do you think of the choices?

Choice 1 or 2?

coreystranick said:

verenda i think, also i don't care if you don't wanna join,i won't bug you. Also what do you think of the choices?

Choice 1 or 2?

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Choice 1 i think will be cool.

Alright.. I decided to let others vote. If you care to take the vote come one and vote

um do you now the carvanha fused with the 3 dogs
can i join *** that pkmn it can talk
carvanhadog
thanks

Carvahna Dragon. PM me your overworlds and sprites. Also do you mean you pokemon will be the carvahan dog and it can talk? Explain that in the PM

New comic should be out today, but i am not sure becaue i have to go do a lacrosse thing. I'll get ti out as soon as i can

AAk! The typos the typos..! aAAgh!

Okay aside from the typos i likey.
"there is ash and brandon OMG they are hot" <=== I love this line...!

Wooo hooo choice #1
personally i would of gone with #2 >>
But that's just me... heh Yeah! Keep it up!

YOu know, i did say that i needed altelst four poepl. Hmm... anyone else care to vote, i havn't made the comic yet. But that is because i jsut saw my freind get into a caraccident and she is in critical condition.........
yeah
Anyway i know there are typos. I'll proof read the next comics

Ooh i like this comic he he,
you should focus a bit on spelling however it makes the comic look alot neater if you spell correctly. And as for the choices ermmmm.... id choose choice 1.
Also id like to join if you dont mind he he...
Bio:

Name: Dash
Occupation: Electric Mouse Trainer
Sprites:
Bio: Dash was abandoned when he was very young. His parents were taken by the rockets, he fended for himself untill he was 12 when he found out that his parents were rocket deserters. Cowards. Abandoners. He has refrained from all contact with them ever since. Nowadays he trains the Electric mouse type Pok?mon. He has over 200 Pikachu at his ranch and many other electric mice. (I can make some sprites of his ranch if you would like me to)
Credit: Avatar: The base sprites for the Dash overworlds
(I cant remember who made the back sprite if the person who made it reads this please contact me XD)

Well thats about it i hope you can put me in :)

I'll put you in, yeah i wa srushing also.
Gusy i wont make anycomics this week, my freind jsut died in a caracciden. And i saw it happen. Sorry if this disapoints soem of you