My Sprite Comic Gallery

Here are all my sprite comics:
Season 1 The Beginning
Comic 1 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite1.bmp
Comic 2 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite2.bmp
Comic 3 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite3.bmp
Comic 4 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite4.bmp
Comic 5 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite5.bmp
Comic 6 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite6.bmp
Comic 7 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite7.bmp
Comic 8 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite8.bmp
Comic 9 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite9.bmp
Comic 10 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite10.bmp
Comic 11 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite11.bmp
Comic 12 - https://www.amnesiahacker.500megs.info/Croc055/Sprite12.bmp
Season 2 Pewter City
Comic 13 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2013.bmp
Comic 14 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2014.bmp
Comic 15 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2015.bmp
Comic 16 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2016.bmp
Comic 17 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2017.bmp
Comic 18 - https://www.freewebs.com/croc055/Sprite%20Comic%2018.bmp



All comments are welcome.If anyone wants to offer sprites I will use them and I'll put them on my avatar.

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Sunflorazumarill
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You might want to draw lines to the person who says it... or give a character there own text colour.

Yeah I think I will do that

Seems okay for a start, but... um... Punctuation? Hello? The grammar seems a little off. Plus, I'd reccommend using panels instead of the whole town, especially when you only use one speech bubble. You could probably put a lot more story in if you broke it up into smaller bits.

If you understood a word of that, congrats!

I can do what I like ZephryPlusle

I odn't like the thickness of the text.

episodes 6-12 now added!!!

Hmm... Pretty Good For Beginner... But There Is Some Problems. What Is The Plot? And Text Is Too Big. Make It Smaller. And In Comic 10 There Is Some Black Stuff Around The Speech Bubbles. You Also Used Default Paint Colors To Make Effects. Make Your Own Colors.

4/10

Umm...Croc, please actually try listenign to the advice of others. You are using the whole town for a comic, try making them to panel. Also get better font and speech bubbles. Make mroe screens other than one.

6/10

I've been wondering about how to get panels, can someone tell me how to make them.

You don't get them you make them.

I'm not going to make panels it takes to long

well it's alright i guess but you really shoud do pannels it shows a bit of lazyness if you don't. Oh and just so ou know the fie you save in (BMP) takes quite a long time to load so maybe save in PNG

I cant say that i hate this because its ok.
But im annoying at the following:
The button in your sig- Did u ask Shadowburn to use that? Cause it looks like mine alot.

lol they are graet but you need some rondom stuff

Does anyone want to be in this

I got a character you can put in the comic!



Her name is Sunflorazumarill. She can use any attack that either Sunflora or Azumarill can know. She also has the power to split into a regular Sunflora and Azumarill; like this:



You should have a comic where she does that.



And here's her overworld and backsprites.



Here's a set of Sunflorazumarill overworlds amydamuffinlady did.



Here's an alternate Sunkarill (Sunflorazumarill's prevolution) sprite.

It's in and Comics 13-18 are added

Croc055 said:

I can do what I like ZephryPlusle

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People do actually give you criticism to help you look back on the flaws stated and help you improve on them. So I'd suggest you take ZephyrPlusle's critic on your work to consideration and use it to help you in anyway possible.