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Achar's Plot: Search for the Time Traveler

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Alana

I still love this world...
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  • If this goes well there will be a sequel.

    Long before there were humans, long before there were Pokemon, long before they were legends, there were Ferors. Ferors were only six in number, each representing something different. Tu, bringer of land, Inna, lord of water, Ilmatar, singer of winds, Xipil, noble of flames, Dusa, the soul, and Shachar, life. Together, these six beasts brought to the world everything that made it a world. First, Tu created the land; hills, mountains, plains, stretched out as far as the eye could see. Next Inna stepped up, bringing rain and oceans, rivers, lakes, and ponds. Then Ilmatar gave the world winds and air, which blew the rain across the land and gave later creatures flight. Then Xipil gave fire, a force to destroy but also a force to create, fire renewed the land. Then finally, Shachar stepped forth and brought life to the world, but it was empty life, so Dusa provided the creatures with a soul, from the greatest of legends to the smallest of insects, life received eyes to see by, a soul to guide it.

    And with their tasks complete, the six Feror left the world, never to return. Where they went is unknown. Perhaps their spirits wander space, perhaps they passed away, or perhaps they travel from world to world, bringing life to the places they touch. It is unknown, but their names and deeds live on in the legends of Pokemon, providing entertainment to youngsters, and a topic worthy of deep thought to elders.

    The date is only fifty years from the present day, and the legend that has been passed down for so many ages is about to play a major part in the world as it is known. But the events that will take place will be unknown to the people and Pokemon of the current world. The only ones who will know of them will be a greedy legend named Achar, seven kids brought by fate, their Pokemon, and the six beasts that gave the world its start.

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    A young and rash Celebi named Achar has long grown bored with its task of guardian. He wants more. He knows the legend of the six Feror by heart and he longs for their power. But getting it seems almost impossible. Beasts powerful enough to create the world will not be defeated by a simple Celebi. However, Achar is smart. He comes up with a plan that will give him the power of a Feror, only one, but one is enough. He plans to take the power of the Dusa, the Feror who gave life its soul. With this power he can control anyone he pleases as well as hold the threat of a punishment worse than death over his enemies.

    It will take him a long time to reach the time of the Feror. Although he has the power to travel back in time, his powers can only take him so far. It will take him ten jumps to make it to the time of the Feror. He will have to recover for at least two weeks before he can make the next jump through time. For safety, he waits for two weeks to prepare for the first jump.

    The day has finally come. He is ready. But just as he begins his travel, seven young trainers, drawn by the sound and light of time travel, appear on the scene and are caught in the jump. The time travel transports them over so many decades that they fall into a kind of coma. When they finally awaken, they are countless decades away from their time.

    Achar took them halfway on his journey, his anger at them coming with him on his first jump led him to drag them to an age where no humans exist and an unknown war is raging. He left them with the knowledge of his plans and of their location. He also gave one of them the ability to sense when he jumps through time. He does this to force the humans to suffer while he moves forward with his plans to gain power.

    The seven trainers and their Pokemon must travel through a land unknown to them, and a land full of creatures to which they are unknown. They must find some way to stop Achar from achieving his goal, and the first step is to find a way to travel through time. But in this time of war, finding a legend willing to help strange creatures that have never been seen before, will be almost impossible.


    Members
    Rataki Emera, 15; Played by Alana
    Ryan Lockson, 16; Played by Key
    AJ Valentine, 17; Played by Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
    Chelsea Mellis, 14; Played by Phanima
    Rudy Verity, 15; Played by Random_Fan
    Daniel Larson, 15; Played by Danny-Boy
    One position left


    Rules
    1. No flaming, no spamming, no power playing, no godmodding.
    2. Do not try to steer the RP in a different direction. You can create minor events, but let the person who knows where this RP is supposed to go control the major events.
    3. Only six people can join.
    4. Try to have at least 4+ lines per post.
    5. You can have a maximum of two Pokemon, no legends, no made ups.
    6. Only one person can sense when Achar makes a jump through time and that person is me. No exceptions.
    7. Have fun. ^_^


    Form
    Name: (First and last)
    Age: (12-17)
    Gender: (Male or female)
    Pokemon: (Only two, no legends. Choose carefully.)
    Description: (What your character looks like, at least four lines.)
    Personality: (How your character acts, at least four lines.)
    RP Sample: (A sample of your Role-playing skills.)
    Other: Anything else that doesn't fit into one of the above categories.


    Mine
    Name: Rataki Emera

    Age: 15

    Gender: Female

    Pokemon:
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    Arcanine, female, Azar
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    Flygon, male, Niyol

    Description: Rataki is slightly taller than average for her age with rather tanned skin from her long exposure to the sun. Her long hair is brown with a streak of green in her bangs. Her sharp eyes are bright crimson with a small patch of electric blue in the right one. Her outfit consists of a red bandanna tied around her head, dusty looking jeans with an embroidered belt that holds two Pokeballs, and a black t-shirt with a Ho-oh rising from flames on the back along with plain black wristbands. She carries a simple red backpack slung over her shoulder and around her neck is a thin black cord with a cracked Pokeball hanging from it.

    Personality: Rataki is very energetic and loves to have fun. She is usually pretty levelheaded but sometimes acts rashly, especially when she's angry. She doesn't usually get angry, or at least she doesn't appear to, and only snaps on rare occasions, usually when she is very stressed. The knowledge of her situation has changed her personality a bit. She's jumpy and she hates sitting still for too long. She paces a lot but works hard to keep a calm appearance while around others but occasionally snaps and becomes very agitated. She tries to comfort those who are suffering while fighting to hide her own emotions at the same time.

    Other: Rataki can sense when Achar is making a jump through time.
     
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    .Bastion

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  • Name: Ryan Lockson

    Age: 16

    Gender: Male

    Pokemon:
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    Skarmory
    Male
    Nickname: Skarm

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    Swampert
    Female
    Nickname: None

    Description: Ryan Lockson can be described as a good looking guy. He has jet black hair that almost has a blue streak to it that is brushed forward where bangs rest just on top of his matching black eyebrows. His eyes are a deep blue color that goes well with his silky hair. His body type is rather slim yet his legs are rather stocky and strong. He likes to wear a green sleevless shirt that has a triangle printed on the front. Within the triangle is the word 'Go' in black. He wears khaki cargo pants and comfortable tennis shoes. His black backpack has one large opening where he places everything from potions to flashlights.

    Personality: Ryan is a happy go lucky person. He tries to remain positive in all situations so he can give others the support they need. His optimism and charm grant him many friendships and a good connection of people. However, if too much pressure is placed on him, he can crack under the pressure. Usually his "glass half full" outlook keeps him from losing his constant cool, but if something extremely huge is at stake there's a huge possibility it will not end in his favor. He's rather flexible and doesn't settle until everyone has made a compromise.

    RP Sample:
    All he could remember was the horror.
    His eyes showed him everything, but his brain was stuck in a complete stupor. Even when he tried to move, the shackles binding his wrists defied him of his wish. Every part of his being, his very soul wanted to break loose; but to no avail. He could stand the scene no longer. He closed his eyes and wept at his horrible captive state.

    The situation that Ryan was forced to watch was a gruesome one at best. Both of his pokemon: Skarm and Swampert were strapped down to a table while being whipped horribly by two masked thugs. They were technically poachers, but in Ryan's eyes, they were murderers. The Poachers had captured Skarm with their eyes set on his valuble armor. Ryan tried to fight back with Swampert, but they were forced into captivity as well saying that they couldn't guarantee what would happen to Skarm. When they reached the poacher's headquarters, they commanded Skarm to get in a vehicle but he absolutely refused. Skarm was strapped down as were Swampert and Ryan who were trying to struggle out of this horrible mess. They both started to get whipped until Skarm or Ryan gave in; and it was working. Their iron wills were breaking as the pains of the whip struck Skarm and Ryan was just forced to watch.

    Ryan was just about to give in as he yelled at the Poachers to stop. They turned looking at Ryan with faces filled with greed and a malevolent grin. Quite unexpectedly, Skarmory filled the room with a screeching echo. The men both covered their ears to halt the assault at their ear drums. Swampert took the opportunity of the moment and performed a powerful Earthquake that caused the men to collapse as well as the tables binding them. Swampert then continued by slamming the two poachers to the ground. Skarm flew swiftly where Ryan was held hostage by the shackles and cut them easily with his razor sharp beak. Ryan was suprised at the quick turn of events but quickly returned to his normal self.

    "Nice job Skarm! You too Swampert. Now let's get out of here! Skarm, blow a hole in the wall with Hyper Beam!"

    Orbs of energy began to gather around Skarmory's mouth. Enough energy had clustered together until it formed a powerful blast which broke the wall with almost no difficulty at all. They ran out of the opening together, with Swampert swiftly at their heels.

    "Together now! Hyper Beam and Hydro Pump!"

    His two comrades obliged and blasted their beams towards the building. After a few moments after the powerful impact, the building crumbled with the Poachers trapped underneath the rubble. "Their poaching days are over." added Ryan to his two partners.

    Other: N/A
     

    Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses

    The one you hate to love. :P
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    Alana, If Rulio ( Prevo of Lucario) Considered a legend?

    Sign up:

    Name: AJ Valentine
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male


    Pokemon:

    Togepi:
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    Nickname: Sunny
    Male


    Glaceon:
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    Nickname: Star
    Male
    Other: Due to being the only fight worthy pokemon on his team at the moment, Glaceon is a bit stronger then other glaceons... It's them special wheat thins! ;)


    Description: is a medium sized Hispanic teen, He's about Five Foot four and weighs around 130 something pounds. His eye's are a Cloudy blue that seems to reflect innocence, frailness yet his eyes are very deceiving and his teeth are nice and pearly, He is wearing an earing in his left ear, It's in the shape of... well a cross, a golden one with some rhinestones on them and has a tattoo of the cross on his forehead, it's a eerily white tattoo making it look strange, but still well fitting. He wears tight Black leather pants that seem to shine slightly and a black shirt with a white cross and the words 'Judgment Day' on it. He wears onyx black boots with iron soles that seem to be good for kicking people. He wears a long white trench coat that goes down to just above his ankles with another cross on it, this time black. His hair is grayish white and styled in a medium sized ponytail.

    Personality: AJ has a fixed personality, he is serious and strict in a situation but will also have a sense of humor to lighten up all the tense moments. Averagely he is a layed back calm kinda of guy, real outgoing. Even if you get on his nerves he will be willing to help you but if you really Piss him off your going to regret it, big time. AJ sounds like your average everyday teen and doesn't care what anyone thinks, so he's never really depressed. So overall he's a layed back humorous yet strict and serious kind of guy, Don't get on his nerves and your fine and that concludes are little segment on his personality.

    RP Sample: Misty stayed alert while sneaking upon the random buildings of Pallet, she saw some spell driven cultist. " Try to divert attention" She mumbled to her group as she kept going, keeping low and quiet and then Snap! "Sh|t" Misty curses as she stepped on a large twig, and as if it was an alert about twelve cultist started to surround them, almost moaning as they sluggishly raised large metal rods or bats. Misty nodded at her team and pulled out her Thompson , she pulled the trigger and almost dropped the machine gun as it unleashed an unholy spray of bullets onto the targets in front of her. Ratatatatatata the sound was deafening and her ears were starting to ache as the figures flew back, blood dribbling from several bullet holes in each one as they crumpled. Misty pulled her finger off the trigger and the sound instantly stopped, Thank god she thought to herself as she looked at the big ass pile of bodies.

    "Move out!" Misty yelled as she kept going, while she was running she switched the magizines out for her Thompson . This was going to be a long night.

    Arcana Tower

    Dillon rubbed an orb made of crystal, and smiled. " Aww yes... Cain and Sol have made it to the destination, though it looks like Cain isn't coping as well as I thought as he would." He mumbled deeply and then grimaced, My children are dying though but his grimace was replaced with a bitterly sweet smile, They're indispensable though. He thought to himself slightly chuckling. " Master, you shouldn't have sent a boy for a mans job" a dark voice interrupting Dillon's thought. " Do not worry Lord James. They are indispensable , no great loss." Dillon said, his voice was smoothly sour.

    The door burst open without warning as medium sized Caucasian bust through, obviously excited about something. Dillon frowned at the interruption , " Lord Dillon! The Magician wishes to send you a mess-" Dillon cut the man off. " Did I say you could come in? Did you knock? Obvious such manners can't be accepted." Dillon grumbled as he clenched his fist-
    and the mans right eye exploded. Blood started to dribble down his face as he screeched in pain, " Shut up!" James yelled as he ripped the man throat out, cartilage and the gleaming shine of bone as his throat exposed, the man gave a final blood filled cough as he fell to the ground. Dillon smiled at James " Thank you. I'll dispose of this nuisance ." Dillon said grinning as the body and blood disappeared . " We have business to attend to." Dillon said his voice fading.

    AJ was waiting for the answer he wanted, the reason for the mans appearance when he remembered something. " Barry, where is that Sandslash ?" He asked anxious, Barry replied with a shrug . " Damn, where'd he go." AJ mumbled looking around.


    Other: Can play the violen
     
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    Alana

    I still love this world...
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  • There are some people who say it is and some who say it isn't but I consider it to be a legend.
     

    typeZERO

    Great Ninja, Uria!
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  • I'll post a sign up later but I'm just going to say , even if you believe otherwise , that Rioru and Rukario are not legendaries , even if Rukario was the main pokemon in the move they are still not legendaries. Proof is that Legendaries cannot evolve. And they also cannot breed except Manaphy. But manaphy's egg form , Phione (or fione) still can't evolve into Manaphy because it's a legendary.
     

    Alana

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  • *shrugs* If Manaphy is a legendary and can breed, then Lucario can be a legendary and evolve. I still consider it a legend and always will. He's just too cool to toss aside. *hugs Lucario*
     

    Phanima

    That servant of the evil one
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    Name: Chelsea Mellis

    Age: Fourteen (14)

    Gender: Female

    Pokemon:

    Dragonair (Female)
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    Clamperl (Male)
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    Description: Chelsea has long brown hair that is often tied in circular braids that hang above her ears. Her hair is tied back across her head into each braid, leaving a loose fringe over her forehead. Each braid is tied by small cylindrical clips which hold the braids in place across the sides of her head.
    Chelsea wears an open short-sleeve red jacket that reaches just above her naval. It is embroiled with a golden trimming that lines the borders of the jacket's body, sleeves and collar. Underneath the jacket, she wears a tight black top that also cuts across her abdomen, exposing her stomach. A paw print logo is also printed across the front of the top in a bright red scheme.
    Chelsea also sports a ceremonial red cummerbund that she ties around her waist, covering the top of her pants. Her pants are a matching black to her top and end right above her shins. Two red bands line the side of each leg and tie to the ends of her trousers' hemline. The hemline of each trouser leg is also tied across each calf.
    Chelsea also adorns a pair of traditional Chinese martial art slip-on shoes. The shoes are black in colour, matching her top and pants, but are lined around the base above the sole, in a red and gold trimming. The height of the foot-hole reaches just below the ankle bone.
    Chelsea's favourite accessories are her golden bangles. She wears two bangles on each arm and has never removed them.

    Personality: Chelsea is a very open person who will speak her mind regardless of the situation. Because of this, she often gets into arguments and can become very stubborn if opposed. She will fight for what she truly believes in and will not concede defeat on any level until she has been proven wrong.
    Despite her upfront and brash nature at first, Chelsea is a very kind and fun-loving person, underneath all the fluff. She enjoys being with her friends and family and supports them whenever necessary, as they do for her. However, partly due to her comfortable upbringing and lifestyle, Chelsea has become slightly spoiled and unnecessarily sarcastic. This tends to annoy those associated with her, as it tends to provoke her initial stubborn attitude.

    RP Sample: Two figures dressed in long ceremonial robes, stood high upon the embankment that lined the great Yuudai River. The first stood with arms crossed as he stared over the river and its path. The second had taken a seat upon the ground and appeared much more relaxed than her suiting partner. Both figures gazed into the river's current in silence. The river itself, lined the outer wall of a small country village known as Yuudai, the village of the 'Great Hero'. The village was also the two figures' next target.

    "I'm bored Hiroshi," the second figure began, breaking the sullen silence. "She must be in there by now."
    The first figure known as Hiroshi remained silent. His eyes narrowed over his exuberant partner, causing her to retreat from the argument.
    "I was just saying…" she continued, giving her sombre partner a playful wave. "It's just so boring waiting, that's all."
    Hiroshi returned his sights to the river as his partner fell back against the ground. Seeing her casual attitude preceding their mission irritated him. She had been assigned to him under their leader's orders, but he had serious doubts that she would be able to assist him in any situation, let alone a mission of such a calibre.
    "Oh, is that her, Hiroshi?" the second figure piped, quickly sitting up and pointing to a young girl entering the village. Much to his displeasure, Hiroshi looked up to see that his partner had indeed identified their next target. Heaving a sigh, he nodded and stretched out his arms, before creating a path through the river. "Yes, that's her. Let's go, Kaede."
    Smiling, the second figure known as Kaede, leapt to her feet and followed her partner through the Bent river.

    Striding through the village's gate, Chiharu entered Yuudai's bustling marketplace, renowned across the Earth Kingdom for its valuable antiques and accessories. It was also rumoured that the Avatar had visited Yuudai's market during the One-hundred Year War, to purchase an assortment of items and knickknacks. Chiharu however, had decided to travel to Yuudai for the experience and not for the rumours, despite how much she was involved with the story of the Avatar. And this was her next destination, the village of the 'Great Hero'.

    High across the outer wall, two figures stood side by side overlooking the village. Both dressed in long ceremonial robes that covered their individual uniforms, the two figures entered the marketplace through the traffic of the crowds.
    "Find her and secure her," Hiroshi breathed to his partner, as the two strode through the crowd. "She cannot be harmed."
    "I know, I know," Kaede cheered, giving her partner another wave. "I know what to do."
    "Do not get distracted, Kaede." The first figure finished his sentence before turning his back and disappearing into the crowd, leaving his partner in the centre of the marketplace.
    Pouting, the second figure continued along her path until she saw her target, the teenage Firebender, Chiharu.

    Other: Nothing
     
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    Alana

    I still love this world...
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  • Very nice, Toomi. You put much more effort into your description than I did. *ish lazy* ^^; I also know that you are a good role-player so you are definitely Accepted. :D
     
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  • I feel so dumb being the only one who doesn't know how to use sprites. >_<

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    Name: Rudy Verity

    Age: 15

    Gender: Male

    Pokemon:
    Sandslash
    Male
    Rave

    Charizard
    Male
    Fazer


    Description: Rudy is an average looking teen, complete with short hair, a small shag he needs to shave off, and sometimes just a bit too much deodorant. He has green eyes and a bit of a broken lip from a previous fight in town not involving Pokemon that had gone horribly wrong. To go with his looks comes his brown long-sleeve and jeans; even boots that he should not have bought due to the fact that he is now regretting it from the pain of just walking around the house. He won't show his pain though; even in the moments when he really needs to, making people make up things about him that are not true such as the bad "he is a mean person" and the compliment "he takes it like a man."

    Personality: Rudy's personality is almost a complete match to his description. Really, it all depends on the light you see him in. He can sometimes act like an idiot without knowing it, even sometimes taking it to being a real pain. He isn't the kind that knows when he crosses the line, but when it is pointed out, he will back off. He isn't afraid to say he is sorry, and knows when he has to say it. Sometimes, raw emotions really tick him off. He won't say it aloud to everyone; he'll keep it within himself. After all, you never know when he's going to be in a situation when he needs someone to hold on to.

    RP Sample: It was very simple; go, and come back. That's all I had promised; I promised I'd return. Never, I had said. I had said I'd never go on a journey. My father made it clear he didn't want me to go. I planned on following through. Unfortunately, the time came when everyone but my sister was gone; they had all just gone and promised to come back. It was me and my sis. Then she got sick; very sick.

    Why wasn't I paying attention? Why didn't I see her leave the house? We were out in the secluded area; there were no other houses near ours. I should have kept an eye on her. But I failed, and now because of that, she is sick with a very dangerous poison. My parents? I don't know when they're coming back. I could phone the hospital, maybe! No, wait, I forgot we just moved here. Why was that a problem again? It was because I didn't know the address yet; I never bothered to learn it the very first week, and figured I would by the third. It was the second week, and I knew nothing. I had to help my sister.

    Who was to accompany me to get the medication, cure, or even help for my sis? There was no one but my Dad's two remaining Pokemon he had left behind; the Charizard and the Sandslash.

    Quickly, I snatched the balls from their protective shelves, then went to my sister's room. "I'll be back with some help; don't move," I said. I didn't show that I was scared; I showed that I was determined. I planned to stay that way as I got help.

    The hard thing to do though was to get my Dad's Pokemon to listen to me. I didn't have any experience with them. At all. I had to somehow ride my Dad's Charizard, Fazer to the town miles away, and get help. So why did I still take Rave, the Sandslash? I had no clue; maybe I should have left him; after all, what if there was a break in? As unlikely as that sounded, my Dad had always told me never to rule out what could be unlikely; it just may be the one thing that could happen.

    But no; I just brushed it off. Fazer was out; now I just had to calm him enough to take me to town. How was I going to do this? Ah, who cares, as long as I got there!

    I assumed that since I was the Charizard's Trainer's son, that he would let me ride him. This proved to be wrong. And very difficult. Finally, I was able to get on him. I pleaded with him, as much as I didn't like to plead. It was all I could do at the moment. And then sympathy seemed to come from the Pokemon. He let me get a good grip. That was the good part.

    Now if only he hadn't freaked me out with the force of the winds that hit my face as we began our flight.

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    Other: Nothing other than what has already been said.
     

    typeZERO

    Great Ninja, Uria!
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  • Name: Sasuke Hiruta (last name)

    Age: 15

    Gender: male

    Pokemon:
    Umbreon , male
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    Espeon , female
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    Description: He is a black haired teen with pure white teeth and a great smile. He has a light skin color and wears a white and gold vest that obviously has pure , real gold trimmings on it and wears a white t-shirt underneath. He has blue eyes and has gold markings on the sides of his arms. He also wears a small chain around his neck that has the symbol of Omega and one of Alpha. He also has these marks burned onto his back somehow (freaky huh?). Sasuke wears beige cargo pants and wears white and blue Addidas (Note that he's not really a big Christian but he loves how it has a kind of cliche in Omega and Alpha. You know , how Omega is the end and Alpha is the beginning?). His hair is frumpy and he wears a circlet on his head too.

    Personality: Smart;energetic,active and has a lot of love for his Pokemon. He always vows to never give up and is cool with the fact that they're in a game. He always tries to do the unthinkable and the unexplainable when nobody is looking. He is very smart mouthed. When he was young he saw a Gyarados kill his best friend and his brother , so he became scared of gyarados' and he has an obvious tint of hatred burning inside him. He hates to be wrong and hates everything that reminds hims of his best friend's and brother's deaths. He'll go berserk when he sees something that reminds him of that time. He is very sensitive in the case of his mother's death because it wasn't a murder scene , it wasn't an accident , she had cancer , a heart attack , and a stroke , which killed her in the next 24 hours. He will break down about that moment if someone reminds him about it.

    RP Sample: "Lancer what the heck are you doing!? Don't go .... You'll die saving her!" Lancer's sister said. ".......Then I'll die trying............." He jumped into the pit that was called the underworld , but was really nothing but lava , that's why he had to save her or she , the one that he loves , Shi , will die and he would not be able to bear it ...... That's when he saw her still falling."SHIIIIIIIIII!" he yelled. He had sent out his Salamence to save her. When it caught her though , it missed Lancer...... and that's when hope was about to be lost.

    Lancer woke up in a hospital bed , all wrapped up with bandages and chanseys and blisseys trying to heal him. They told him he had burns on his right arm and was seen hitting boulders while he was falling.Thirty minutes later he was let out and saw Shi there. "....Shi" he said with tears swelled up in his eyes. "I will never leave you again , I promise." "Thank you , Lancer-kun" then they had a passionate long kiss that made Lancer feel happy again.

    But that was 2 years ago ..... Shi was dead now , and he would avenge her death by doing what the murderer did to her , kill him , and he knew who it was it was..., "Lance......I.....WILL.....KILL YOU!!!!" he shouted angrily and crazily. He decided , he wouldn't kill him , no, he will take the place as champion back ...... and then he'll have granted the wish that Shi wished for , for him to become Champion.

    Other: He hates wasabi and loves cake!
     
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    Alana

    I still love this world...
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  • ash jr., Good sign up, you're Accepted.

    Random_Fan, very nice RP sample and character. Accepted.

    Lightning Rider, it's not bad but you need to work on your grammar. The extra spaces and lack of spaces make your sentences hard to read. As of now, Pending.

    Only two more people can join.
     

    Gulpin

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    My Sign-Up

    Name: Andrew Pali
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Pokemon:
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    Gallade, Male, Mooñ (moon-ya')
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    Gardevoir, Female, Suñ (sun-ya')
    Description:Andrew has shiny black, short hair. His eyes are a sparkling, sapphire blue. He has a thin, lanky figure with a strong upper and lower body. He has a black under shirt with a comfy, loose, wite shirt. On the back of his shirt he has the symbol of Shima Island, which is a whirlpool. On the front of his shirt there is a picture of his favorite Pokèmon, Lapras. He has blue pants that match is glowing eyes. He has sparkling clean, white running shoes. He stands tall at 6'3". He has a thin, confident, face.
    Personality:Andrew is very outgoing and makes millions of friends. He has friends of all ages. He is a very competitive trainer and will never give up. He has always been helpful. He is loving towards all of his Pokemon old, and new. He isn't a sore loser or sore winner. Andrew is very smart. He usually has a smile on his face. Andrew is very energetic and active. He is obedient and very observent. He doesn't get mad too often. He always thinks before he acts. Most people think he is fun to be with. At first he appears to be a know-it-all, shy kid. But when people get to know him (which almost everyone does), they find that it isn't true. At times, he tends to get stressed. He always acts calm, no matter what. He is definately and optimist.
    RP Sample: http://pkmncommunity.com/showthread.php?t=76923 Read my posts and it will make since. the posts less than 4 lines were when I just started RPing...Gees I was bad at it at first...

    I can't think of anything... Can the above link be one?

    Here a Pokèmon battle done in my RP. I play all of the charactors in the post, just to let you know.

    "Chimchar! Use ember on Minun!" yelled Luther.
    "Turtwig! Use razor leaf on Plusle!" yelled Robert.
    Chimchar breathed embers on Minun. Minun dodged most of them, but did get hit. Turtwig's leaves on his sprout turned white, and started duplicating. Then Turtwig started shaking his head, sending the duplicated leaves flying toward Plusle. Like Minun, Plusle dodged most of them, but still got hit.
    "Minun! Plusle! Use spark!"
    The two pokemon held hands. They closed their eyes and generated electricity. Then all of a sudden they yelled,"Mine!Plus!" and let out sparks of electricity.
    The sparks hit perfectly on target, but Chimchar and Turtwig didn't faint.
    "Okay! Turtwig, use razor leaf on Minun!"
    Turtwig went through the same process again. Minun had used a lot of energy to use the spark attack, so it wasn't ready to dodge the attack. He used little walls of electricity to block the first couple of leaves, but then was too tired. He let the leaves pound on him, and finally fainted. Lee sent out Luxray, getting more serious now.
    Turtwigs whole body then turned white, and started to transform. He was evolving into a Grotle.
    "Chimchar! Use ember on Plusle!"
    Chimchar used ember on Plusle, and Plusle was also weak. Plusle was weaker than Minun, and just let the embers pelt on him. He fainted, too, like Minun. Lee swithced it out with Ampharos.
    Chimchar aslo started to evolve. Now, a Monferno, it is mutch stronger.
    "Okay, kids, it's time to get serious. Luxray, hyper beam! Ampharos, thunder."
    Both Pokemon used their attacks at the same time. The hyper beam and the thunder mixed, and created an electric hyper beam. The attack hit hard, and made both Monferno and Grotle faint.
    Robert and Luther had just lost their main powerhouses. But the battle still was happening. Robert decided on Pachisiru, and Luther decided on Magby.
    "Magby! Use flamethrower!"
    "Pachisiru! Use super fang on Luxray!"
    Magby blew his flamethrower towards Ampharos. It was impossible for her to dodge it, so it hit her hard.
    Pachisiru started runing towards Luxray at full speed and bit it. Luxray lost exactly half of it's HP.
    "Luxray! Ampharos! Use discharge!"
    Both Pokemon used the attack at the same time. Magby survived it barely, and Pachisiru regained health by getting hit.
    Luther gave Magby a super potion.
    "Pachisiru! Use spark on Ampharos!"
    The Pokemon tackled Ampharos, but with a jolt of electricity. Amphoros almost had no HP left, and Lee didn't have any potions.
    "Amphoros! Return!" Lee held out her luxary ball. In a beam of red light Amphoros was gone. This counted as a loss.
    "Come on out Manetric!" yelled Lee, "Luxray! Manetric! Use discharge on Magby."
    The two Pokemon did the horrifying attack, leaving Magy fainted.
    "Ruturn!" yelled Luther," Come on out Duskul! Duskul! Use shadow ball!"
    "Pachirisu! Use treasure on Manectric!"
    Duskul threw a shadow ball at Luxray. Luxray has just a little HP left and can't continue.
    "Ruturn Luxray! Good job!" Luxray returned into his Pokeball, while Lee sent out Pachirisu.
    Pachirisu used the treasure attack on Manectric. Manetric still has a lot of HP left.
    "Manectric! Use thunder on Duskull!"
    "Pachirisu! Use charm on Pachirisu!"
    Manetric sent a jolt of electricity through Duskull fainting it.
    Lee's Pachirisu made a sweet look on its face to the other Pachirisu and Robert's Pachirisu fell in love. Robert's Pachirisu refused to attack anyone on the other team.
    "Come on out Mankey!" yelled Robert,"Pachisiru, seeing as you won't attack the other team, return!" It counted as a loss.
    "Mankey use cross chop on Pachirisu!"
    Mankey used cross chop, and fainted Pachirisu. Mankey stood no chance against Manectric.
    "Manectric! Use thunder to finish this off!"
    Manectric used thuder, and electricuted Mankey.
    Lee had one a battle.

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    Alana

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  • Your characters personality is more a list of things he likes to do than how he acts and your RP sample needs to be longer. Work on those things but for now you're Declined.
     

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    okay, it's edited. I'm not too good with RP samples, but I need an Idea... but I'm good with RolePlaying
     

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  • Name: Cain Ritham

    Age: 15

    Gender: Male

    Pokemon:
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    Crocanaw
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    Grovyle

    Description: Cain's hair is black and is so long he keeps it in a braid that goes down to his sholders. Cain's clothing consists of

    One red hat which is set to the front of his head

    One dark red leather Jacket complete with inner pockets.

    One pair of dark jeans complete with a chain and smaller pockets down near the knees

    2 Sneakers on both feet with black laces.

    Cain's pigmentation is pale yet still retain's some tan. He is 5"4 with 150 pounds. His body build up is slim

    Personality: Cain rarely talks to people about his problems. He is usualy talkative but he usualy forgets what he is talking about and keeps changing the subject. The only one who doesnt get annoyed with him is his pokemon. He feels that his pokemon is the one thing he can relait to. He loves to talk to his pokemon about how his day was or how he could beat the next trainer. His basic personality traites are bold, adament and hasty. Yet Cain does show his cowardly side occasionaly. But mostly he is either planning something or charging in head first not knowing of the things ahead

    RP Sample: (This is the roleplay sample I used when I joined The star in the sky if thats okay)

    The clock's red numbers changed from 2:40 to 2:41. It was AM and Cain was tired. His mom had told him to study as much as he could. But he didnt think he should study this late. It was 2:41 AM and he was searching up infomation on rock pokemon. Let me see Geodude evolves into Graveler. Graveler can evolve into Golem. The picture on the next page had a picture of a Golem in a battle ready stance. He yawned for a very long time and continued to read. Golem one of the strongest rock pokemon has a very good fire resistance. It can resist even a Charizard's strongest breath and still continue to fight. Cain then closed the book that had the title "Encyclopedia of rock pokemon". He put it down and took the book "Encyclopedia of Fire pokemon." He looked at the heading Torchic. Torchic is chick pokemon. Because of its size it stays close to its trainer and fears most pokemon. However upon command Torchic can and will fight bravely. Once its relationship grows Torchic creates a bond between its trainer and may evolve. Then the page said See next page Combusken. Cain closed the Encyclopedia and started to think. Torchic, the pokemon I asked Professer Oak for. He said that Professer Birch may have one and would ask for one. That was one week ago and maybe he will have it today. I hope that I can be a good trainer for it.

    The next day however Cain walked over to Professer Oak's house. He went to the professer and asked "I would like a pokemon Professer". He turned around with a grim look on his face. "Im sorry Cain but something has happened. For absolutly no reason all the pokemon in the world have... passed on." Cain looked very dumbfounded. "WHAT???" Professer Oak went over to his computer. "look i got an email from professers all over the world. Their pokemon have vanished from the face of the world." Cain was still looking dumbfounded. But he knew this would not stop him. "Wait you mean the Torchic I requested is... gone?" Professer Oak answered "Yes im sorry". Cain then ran back to his house. His dream was shattered into a million pecies. But this would not stop him from traveling through Kanto. He went up to his room and put on his brown jacket. He zipped it up with the hood down. Then he went towards the Jeans he had placed on his chair the night before. He took off his sweat pants and put the Jeans on. With the belt all ready he went to his backpack. He placed a spare change of clothes and a few other possesions. Then he went to his dresser and took a bandana off it. It was a black bandana that he occasionaly wore on his head. But now he decided it was time for a change. He put the Bandana on his neck and tied it on the back of his neck. Okay, I do not have any pokemon. But I wonder if there are pokemon still alive out there.. Then he took off his white socks and placed his black ones on. Then he took off the boots he put on and placed on his old sneakers. He had these sneakers for a month now and they were worn and broken in. After putting this all on he went to the 2nd floor stairs and started to walk down them.


    Other: Anything else that doesn't fit into one of the above categories.
     
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    Alana

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  • Wooper, your personality is still a jump of things he likes and your RPing skills, while good, still need some work. Maybe next time. Declined.

    Lightning Rider, you still need to work on your spacing. Your personality is also more of a short history and your RP sample leaves much to be desired. As of now, Declined.

    Grim, hmm. Well, I know you're pretty good though you need to make a new paragraph when you change speakers. Also, I wasn't really planning on a Ranger...though there's nothing against it. I can just see too many ways the powers can be used to godmod in a way. ^^; I'll have to think a bit before deciding whether or not to accept you. Pending.

    Still two spots open.
     

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  • Wooper, your personality is still a jump of things he likes and your RPing skills, while good, still need some work. Maybe next time. Declined.

    Lightning Rider, you still need to work on your spacing. Your personality is also more of a short history and your RP sample leaves much to be desired. As of now, Declined.

    Grim, hmm. Well, I know you're pretty good though you need to make a new paragraph when you change speakers. Also, I wasn't really planning on a Ranger...though there's nothing against it. I can just see too many ways the powers can be used to godmod in a way. ^^; I'll have to think a bit before deciding whether or not to accept you. Pending.

    Still two spots open.

    (Note: I wish you would include History on the signup. But my character is a former pokemon ranger. He still wears the uniform however but the only advantage is that he has some basic pokemon training from pokemon ranging)
     
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