I don't know what anyone can criticise really. You seem to really have the DP style down, since your shading and choice of colours are great.
However, the angle that you've drawn May from is incorrect - it's too high up unfortunately.
So yeah, looking forward to seeing more.
Samson, try to post comments of a bit more substance. In addition, let's keep the thread on the topic of sprites, rather than Desgardes perverted signature kk? k ^^