Avegaille
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Since no one here in PC has reviewed the old one, here's a revised edition!
Okay, so I'm currently down with teh story plot of my last fanfic of the same title, so I have to revise everything right from the beginning! So, here it is!
Um, uh? welcome to another segment, of? what was this fanfic is supposed to be about? ?.. oh, yeah, the reversion of FFTANB! Okay, let?s get started, starting from chapter 1!
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Four Friends To A New Beginning (revised edition) by: bunnyp69
Chapter 1: Four Friends Meet?
It may seem that time had passed as one trainer is about to start her journey in the Hoenn Region of the Pok?mon world. Avegaille Amethyst, a Pok?mon trainer in the making, is about to find out things more than what she knows now. She had short black hair and wore an orange T-shirt, a white hooded jacket and a black skirt. Apparently, they had moved to the Hoenn region a few days ago from Kanto. Today is the day Avegaille is going to leave for her Pok?mon journey, but right now there is something in her mind. She was currently in her room, sitting on her bed.
?Maybe I should have been something else than being a Pok?mon trainer,? Avegaille said to herself as she held a Pok?ball with a Pok?mon inside in her hands. It was a Pok?mon given to her by her father on her tenth birthday.
?Avegaille!? a voice hollered out from outside Avegaille?s room.
?Huh?? Avegaille turned to the door as she saw her mother entering her room.
?I thought you already left,? Mrs. Amethyst said to Avegaille as she went near her. ?By the way, if you want to go with someone on your journey, you can introduce yourself to the new neighbors next door.?
?But I thought we were the new neighbors,? Avegaille protested as she looked at her mother in confusion.
?The Maples is moving in here today, you should go over by their house and introduce yourself,? Mrs. Amethyst explained to Avegaille.
?Well, okay, then,? Avegaille murmured out as she stood up. ?I?ll see you some other time then.?
?Well, good luck in your journey,? Mrs. Amethyst said as Avegaille left her room.
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Moving on? literally! Anyway, a moving truck just stopped by an empty house next to Avegaille?s. Avegaille just got out of the house as she saw a girl with brown hair wearing a red bandana with a Pok?ball symbol, a red shirt with a black shaded circle around her collar, a white mini skirt topping her biker shorts and running shoes. She was also wearing trainer gloves and had a hip bag hanging loosely on her waist. She looked very irritated when she got out of the moving truck.
?Whose idea was it to put me inside a moving truck?!? the girl trainer exclaimed out furiously.
?May, honey.? A woman who also had brown hair, wearing an orange and white dress, just came out of the house and approached her daughter. ?You should calm down for a while.?
?But mom, do you know how stuffy it is inside that truck!? May exclaimed out furiously.
?Just come inside the house for a while to see your new room and to start packing for your journey here in Hoenn,? Mrs. Maple said to her daughter as both of them entered the house behind them.
?Okay, that was not very?normal?? Avegaille said to herself after May and Mrs. Maple entered the house. She walked over in front of their house, but is having a bit of a doubt. ?Should I just enter in their house??
After minutes of thinking to herself, she finally decided to turn the doorknob. But it was too late. The door was opening as May came out from the house.
?Okay, mom, see you soon!? May exclaimed out as she turned around. She was very shocked as she saw Avegaille standing in front of her. ?Latias, you scared the daylights out of me!?
?I?m not Latias,? Avegaille protested out as she sweat-dropped. ?My name is Avegaille Amethyst.?
?Oh, okay. Then, my name is May Maple,? May said back in return. ?You?re the first trainer that I met here in Hoenn. I?m going to introduce myself to the other neighbors next door. Want to come with me??
?Well, I?m not doing anything right now and I?m also looking for someone to come with me on my Pok?mon journey,? Avegaille replied out.
?I was also thinking the same,? May said happily. ?Maybe we can travel together after we met the neighbors!?
?That would be a wonderful idea,? Avegaille said in return as both of them walked to the other house next to Avegaille?s.
May and Avegaille went in front of the door of the house, in which is the Birch?s residence. May kept on knocking on the door.
?Hello? Is anyone in here?? May called out as she continued to knock on the door.
Avegaille sweat-dropped as she opened the door and went inside. May felt a bit annoyed as she followed Avegaille to the living room of the house. Then, both of them saw a woman approaching them.
?Don?t you kids these days know how to knock?!? the woman demanded.
?But I just knocked at your door,? May explained nervously.
?So sorry about that, I was a bit confused there, anyway, I?m Mrs. Birch,? she introduced. ?My husband is currently somewhere else, but we have a son the same age as yours. You should go upstairs and meet him.?
?Okay then,? Avegaille murmured out as she and May went off upstairs.
As the two of them headed upstairs, they saw a boy with white hair wearing a black headband with a Pok?ball symbol in it. He was also wearing a long sleeved shirt with the Hoenn colors in it and black pants to add it. He was wearing yellow trainer gloves as he started to pack something in his strap bag.
?You distract him!? May exclaimed out.
?Why would I do that?? Avegaille asked confusedly as she sweat-dropped.
?Well, there has got to be something that will get his attention,? May murmured out as she looked around. She saw a bookshelf besides her and took out a book.
?You wouldn?t dare?? Avegaille murmured out as she knew what May was going to do with it.
May went besides the trainer as she tapped his shoulder and held up the book with her arms, ready to whack the trainer boy.
?Hey, what are you going to do with that?? he asked out surprisingly as he saw May holding up the book high.
?Well, I was planning to whack this at you, but since you already saw us?? May started to explained. She held the book down and tossed it behind her, almost hitting Avegaille.
?Hey! You almost smacked my face with that book!? Avegaille exclaimed out to May.
?Oops, sorry,? May apologized as she turned around.
?Oh? You must be the new neighbors that moved in here this week,? he said as he stood up. ?The name?s Brendan Birch, pleased to meet you.?
?Yeah, I?m May and this is Avegaille,? May replied back.
?Anyway, do you ladies have your own Pok?mon already?? Brendan asked to them. Then, he thought of something. ?Darn it, I forgot, I was suppose to help my dad today and his field work, see ya!? he stood up as he took his bag and went out of his room.
?He seemed cute,? May said to herself as she turned to Avegaille.
?Um, whatever?? Avegaille murmured to herself as the two of them went out of the room.
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As Avegaille and May got out of the Birch?s house, they heard someone screaming loudly from their spots. They were planning to go to the professor?s lab right now, but they decided to find out what is going on. They went out of Littleroot Town and saw a man with a white lab coat, hanging to a tree. He was currently being attacked by more than one Zigzagoon. On the other hand, they saw a boy trainer with brown hair, wearing a red cap, a gray T-shirt with a blue jacket and also jeans. He was already helping out the professor with the Pok?mon he sent out, which is a Treecko.
?This is not good enough,? the professor murmured to himself. He noticed the two girl trainers behind the boy trainer. ?You two! Help out! In my bag, there?s a Pok?ball.?
?A what?? May asked out, very confused.
?He wants us to help him,? Avegaille explained as both of them quickly went near the bag lying on the ground.
Both of them saw that there is only one Pok?ball left inside the bag. May took it as she released out the Pok?mon inside. She was bit worried that Avegaille didn?t have any Pok?mon to sue to help the professor.
?How are you going to help out the professor?? May asked as she looked at Avegaille.
?Don?t worry, I already have my starter Pok?mon,? Avegaille exclaimed out as she took the Pok?ball from her bag and tossed it out. ?Go! Charmander!?
?Charmander!? the lizard Pok?mon exclaimed out as it looked at Avegaille. ?Char??
?Um, what Pok?mon name is mine?? May asked to Avegaille as she looked at her confused.
?Torchic!? the orange furry chick exclaimed out. ?Toorchic!?
?Call out one of it attacks!? the professor exclaimed to May.
?Well? um, okay, Torchic, use Ember on that zigzagy Pok?mon!? May exclaimed out as the Torchic understood the command and did an Ember on one of the Zigzagoons.
?Charmander, Fire Spin!? Avegaille commanded out to the Charmander.
The fire surrounding the Zigzagoons scared them off as they jumped above the fire and ran off. Then, the professor came down from the tree as the flames slowly died down. He approached the trainers who help him out.
?Well, I really thank you all a lot, I was conducting an experiment on the fields when I was attacked,? the professor said to them. ?Well, this is not a good place to talk, so come by later on my lab, okay??
May and the boy trainer gave back the Pok?balls that holds Torchic and Treecko as Prof. Birch sent them back in their balls. The professor took his bag lying on the ground and went back to Littleroot town.
?Pardon me, ladies, I never got the chance to introduce myself,? the boy trainer said to them as May and Avegaille were about to leave. ?I?m Philip Beryl but everyone calls me Phil.?
?Oh? Um, my name?s Avegaille and this is my friend May,? Avegaille introduced out as her Charmander went near her. Avegaille blushed a little as Phil smiled at her.
?Well, now, we should go to the professor?s lab,? May interrupted as she went in front of Avegaille.
?Um, yeah, of course,? Avegaille said nervously as she saw May in front of her.
?I?ll come with you two,? Phil added as he went near them.
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End of Chapter 1
Um, well? anyway, that is the concluding things for chapter 1, I don?t know what was revised, but oh, well, read for yourselves as I try to get into chapter 2 very soon!
Okay, so I'm currently down with teh story plot of my last fanfic of the same title, so I have to revise everything right from the beginning! So, here it is!
Um, uh? welcome to another segment, of? what was this fanfic is supposed to be about? ?.. oh, yeah, the reversion of FFTANB! Okay, let?s get started, starting from chapter 1!
--------
Four Friends To A New Beginning (revised edition) by: bunnyp69
Chapter 1: Four Friends Meet?
It may seem that time had passed as one trainer is about to start her journey in the Hoenn Region of the Pok?mon world. Avegaille Amethyst, a Pok?mon trainer in the making, is about to find out things more than what she knows now. She had short black hair and wore an orange T-shirt, a white hooded jacket and a black skirt. Apparently, they had moved to the Hoenn region a few days ago from Kanto. Today is the day Avegaille is going to leave for her Pok?mon journey, but right now there is something in her mind. She was currently in her room, sitting on her bed.
?Maybe I should have been something else than being a Pok?mon trainer,? Avegaille said to herself as she held a Pok?ball with a Pok?mon inside in her hands. It was a Pok?mon given to her by her father on her tenth birthday.
?Avegaille!? a voice hollered out from outside Avegaille?s room.
?Huh?? Avegaille turned to the door as she saw her mother entering her room.
?I thought you already left,? Mrs. Amethyst said to Avegaille as she went near her. ?By the way, if you want to go with someone on your journey, you can introduce yourself to the new neighbors next door.?
?But I thought we were the new neighbors,? Avegaille protested as she looked at her mother in confusion.
?The Maples is moving in here today, you should go over by their house and introduce yourself,? Mrs. Amethyst explained to Avegaille.
?Well, okay, then,? Avegaille murmured out as she stood up. ?I?ll see you some other time then.?
?Well, good luck in your journey,? Mrs. Amethyst said as Avegaille left her room.
----------
Moving on? literally! Anyway, a moving truck just stopped by an empty house next to Avegaille?s. Avegaille just got out of the house as she saw a girl with brown hair wearing a red bandana with a Pok?ball symbol, a red shirt with a black shaded circle around her collar, a white mini skirt topping her biker shorts and running shoes. She was also wearing trainer gloves and had a hip bag hanging loosely on her waist. She looked very irritated when she got out of the moving truck.
?Whose idea was it to put me inside a moving truck?!? the girl trainer exclaimed out furiously.
?May, honey.? A woman who also had brown hair, wearing an orange and white dress, just came out of the house and approached her daughter. ?You should calm down for a while.?
?But mom, do you know how stuffy it is inside that truck!? May exclaimed out furiously.
?Just come inside the house for a while to see your new room and to start packing for your journey here in Hoenn,? Mrs. Maple said to her daughter as both of them entered the house behind them.
?Okay, that was not very?normal?? Avegaille said to herself after May and Mrs. Maple entered the house. She walked over in front of their house, but is having a bit of a doubt. ?Should I just enter in their house??
After minutes of thinking to herself, she finally decided to turn the doorknob. But it was too late. The door was opening as May came out from the house.
?Okay, mom, see you soon!? May exclaimed out as she turned around. She was very shocked as she saw Avegaille standing in front of her. ?Latias, you scared the daylights out of me!?
?I?m not Latias,? Avegaille protested out as she sweat-dropped. ?My name is Avegaille Amethyst.?
?Oh, okay. Then, my name is May Maple,? May said back in return. ?You?re the first trainer that I met here in Hoenn. I?m going to introduce myself to the other neighbors next door. Want to come with me??
?Well, I?m not doing anything right now and I?m also looking for someone to come with me on my Pok?mon journey,? Avegaille replied out.
?I was also thinking the same,? May said happily. ?Maybe we can travel together after we met the neighbors!?
?That would be a wonderful idea,? Avegaille said in return as both of them walked to the other house next to Avegaille?s.
May and Avegaille went in front of the door of the house, in which is the Birch?s residence. May kept on knocking on the door.
?Hello? Is anyone in here?? May called out as she continued to knock on the door.
Avegaille sweat-dropped as she opened the door and went inside. May felt a bit annoyed as she followed Avegaille to the living room of the house. Then, both of them saw a woman approaching them.
?Don?t you kids these days know how to knock?!? the woman demanded.
?But I just knocked at your door,? May explained nervously.
?So sorry about that, I was a bit confused there, anyway, I?m Mrs. Birch,? she introduced. ?My husband is currently somewhere else, but we have a son the same age as yours. You should go upstairs and meet him.?
?Okay then,? Avegaille murmured out as she and May went off upstairs.
As the two of them headed upstairs, they saw a boy with white hair wearing a black headband with a Pok?ball symbol in it. He was also wearing a long sleeved shirt with the Hoenn colors in it and black pants to add it. He was wearing yellow trainer gloves as he started to pack something in his strap bag.
?You distract him!? May exclaimed out.
?Why would I do that?? Avegaille asked confusedly as she sweat-dropped.
?Well, there has got to be something that will get his attention,? May murmured out as she looked around. She saw a bookshelf besides her and took out a book.
?You wouldn?t dare?? Avegaille murmured out as she knew what May was going to do with it.
May went besides the trainer as she tapped his shoulder and held up the book with her arms, ready to whack the trainer boy.
?Hey, what are you going to do with that?? he asked out surprisingly as he saw May holding up the book high.
?Well, I was planning to whack this at you, but since you already saw us?? May started to explained. She held the book down and tossed it behind her, almost hitting Avegaille.
?Hey! You almost smacked my face with that book!? Avegaille exclaimed out to May.
?Oops, sorry,? May apologized as she turned around.
?Oh? You must be the new neighbors that moved in here this week,? he said as he stood up. ?The name?s Brendan Birch, pleased to meet you.?
?Yeah, I?m May and this is Avegaille,? May replied back.
?Anyway, do you ladies have your own Pok?mon already?? Brendan asked to them. Then, he thought of something. ?Darn it, I forgot, I was suppose to help my dad today and his field work, see ya!? he stood up as he took his bag and went out of his room.
?He seemed cute,? May said to herself as she turned to Avegaille.
?Um, whatever?? Avegaille murmured to herself as the two of them went out of the room.
----------
As Avegaille and May got out of the Birch?s house, they heard someone screaming loudly from their spots. They were planning to go to the professor?s lab right now, but they decided to find out what is going on. They went out of Littleroot Town and saw a man with a white lab coat, hanging to a tree. He was currently being attacked by more than one Zigzagoon. On the other hand, they saw a boy trainer with brown hair, wearing a red cap, a gray T-shirt with a blue jacket and also jeans. He was already helping out the professor with the Pok?mon he sent out, which is a Treecko.
?This is not good enough,? the professor murmured to himself. He noticed the two girl trainers behind the boy trainer. ?You two! Help out! In my bag, there?s a Pok?ball.?
?A what?? May asked out, very confused.
?He wants us to help him,? Avegaille explained as both of them quickly went near the bag lying on the ground.
Both of them saw that there is only one Pok?ball left inside the bag. May took it as she released out the Pok?mon inside. She was bit worried that Avegaille didn?t have any Pok?mon to sue to help the professor.
?How are you going to help out the professor?? May asked as she looked at Avegaille.
?Don?t worry, I already have my starter Pok?mon,? Avegaille exclaimed out as she took the Pok?ball from her bag and tossed it out. ?Go! Charmander!?
?Charmander!? the lizard Pok?mon exclaimed out as it looked at Avegaille. ?Char??
?Um, what Pok?mon name is mine?? May asked to Avegaille as she looked at her confused.
?Torchic!? the orange furry chick exclaimed out. ?Toorchic!?
?Call out one of it attacks!? the professor exclaimed to May.
?Well? um, okay, Torchic, use Ember on that zigzagy Pok?mon!? May exclaimed out as the Torchic understood the command and did an Ember on one of the Zigzagoons.
?Charmander, Fire Spin!? Avegaille commanded out to the Charmander.
The fire surrounding the Zigzagoons scared them off as they jumped above the fire and ran off. Then, the professor came down from the tree as the flames slowly died down. He approached the trainers who help him out.
?Well, I really thank you all a lot, I was conducting an experiment on the fields when I was attacked,? the professor said to them. ?Well, this is not a good place to talk, so come by later on my lab, okay??
May and the boy trainer gave back the Pok?balls that holds Torchic and Treecko as Prof. Birch sent them back in their balls. The professor took his bag lying on the ground and went back to Littleroot town.
?Pardon me, ladies, I never got the chance to introduce myself,? the boy trainer said to them as May and Avegaille were about to leave. ?I?m Philip Beryl but everyone calls me Phil.?
?Oh? Um, my name?s Avegaille and this is my friend May,? Avegaille introduced out as her Charmander went near her. Avegaille blushed a little as Phil smiled at her.
?Well, now, we should go to the professor?s lab,? May interrupted as she went in front of Avegaille.
?Um, yeah, of course,? Avegaille said nervously as she saw May in front of her.
?I?ll come with you two,? Phil added as he went near them.
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End of Chapter 1
Um, well? anyway, that is the concluding things for chapter 1, I don?t know what was revised, but oh, well, read for yourselves as I try to get into chapter 2 very soon!