The Kanto/Sevii League

Matt Silver

Who Do You Think?
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    Here is my first comic on PC. enjoy. More come later. Special Comics do effect the storyline and should be viewed by readers.

    PLease review if you read.

    Season 1- Starting the Adventures
    Comic 1:https://tinypic.com/f21028.png
    Comic 2:https://tinypic.com/f210cg.png
    Comic 3: https://tinypic.com/f210d5.png
    Comic 4: https://tinypic.com/f210ex.png
    Comic 5: https://tinypic.com/f210g3.png
    Comic 6: https://tinypic.com/f2j5g2.png
    Comic 7:https://tinypic.com/f21lvk.png
    Special Comic 1:https://tinypic.com/f21lw6.png
    Comic 8:https://tinypic.com/f21lwi.png
    Comic 9:https://tinypic.com/f2kegx.png
    Comic 10: https://tinypic.com/f2kewp.png
    Comic 11: https://tinypic.com/f2kf1y.png
    Comic 12: https://tinypic.com/f2myv5.png
    Comic 13: https://tinypic.com/f2ngb9.png
    Comic 14: https://tinypic.com/f2piti.png
    Comic 15: https://tinypic.com/f3awr4.png
    Comic 16: https://tinypic.com/f3b3x4.png
    Comic 17: https://tinypic.com/f3c5t3.png
    Comic 18: https://tinypic.com/f3c7kh.png

    Season 2- New Friends and New Rivals
    Comic 19: https://tinypic.com/f3cp34.png
    Comic 20: https://tinypic.com/f3dgnp.png
    Comic 21: https://tinypic.com/f3dyu0.png
    Comic 22: https://tinypic.com/f3eveh.png
    Comic 23: https://tinypic.com/f3fksj.png
    Comic 24: https://tinypic.com/f4jr76.png
    Comic 25: https://tinypic.com/f4jpqg.png
    Comic 26: https://tinypic.com/f4jr4k.png
    Comic 27: https://tinypic.com/f4kzkp.png
    Comic 28: https://tinypic.com/f9r42r.png
    Comic 29: https://tinypic.com/f9r477.png
    Comic 30: https://tinypic.com/f9r49i.png
    Comic 31: https://tinypic.com/fcqoae.png
    Comic 32: https://tinypic.com/furq6u.png
    Comic 33: https://tinypic.com/huqfs6.png
    Comic 34: https://tinypic.com/ifzm8p.png
    NEW!!!Comic 35: https://tinypic.com/jgl3ww.png

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    Trainer Cards: (Note: Can contain spoilers!)

    Mac: https://tinypic.com/i50x6v.png
    Allana: https://tinypic.com/f3gdna.png
    Felix: https://tinypic.com/f3fkm8.png

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    Credits:
    Avatar
    VGmaps.com
    SPriters Resource
    Coronis
    Pokesho
    Fusionboy Seth who gave me Skunx!!
    Beco
    Neopolis3
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    Wanna be in the comic?
    No open spots at the moment...
     
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    Really good and Coolmaster is right, its too big.
     
    I also have no problem with the size. I like this comic and it has great potential. The only flaws I see are the cussing and the trainer sprites. The Traienr sprite could be done a little bit better, but I still like them, and also, try to tone down on the s-h-i-t and f-u-c-k. I also learned that cussing isn't that attractive in a comic. an occasionally d-a-m-n or h-e-l-l is alright, but not the biggies, so just tone that down. overall, it is an awesome comic. 9/10
     
    Yeah i better cut down but i like the idea of H-E-L-L.
    hehe.
    BTw which trainer sprites do you mean? The sprites or the overworld?
    Cause i know they ain't very good.

    EDIT: Fresh of the press's is Comic's 9,10 and 11. Read my first post.

    EDIT 2: Woo! 4 stars! Thanks guys

    Edit 3: Come on guys reply!!! Comic 12 is up. more to come.
     
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    Yah nice comic I give it an 8/10 and trust me I've read over 100 comics it's a good grade lol.
     
    Look leave the size as is it's fine, trust me if the size is the only problem in this comic then that's good thing.
     
    Mattthegreat said:
    Your in. You'll appear when i can put u in. Maybe a rival or something. unless u say otherwise.
    Click to expand...
    Can i be on your side,can i plz have a Toddlie PLZ!
     
    Here are the other options for you Rayquaza:
    1. Elite 4 of Dragon
    2. Guy who is out to catch all dragon/legendary pokemon alive in Kanto.
    3. Guy that pops up to fight every now and then.
    4. One of the Elementalis.
     
    {2. Guy who is out to catch all dragon/legendary pokemon alive in Kanto.)PLz,and thank u!And Toddile!WEEEEEEEEE!
     
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