New Pokemon Master

[Jedite1000]

this is my comic it is about a kid named ace..and he wants to replace ash as the new pokemon master

volume1
Amateur vs champion
part1:https://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8950/volume1pt13ew.png
part2:https://img399.imageshack.us/img399/1397/volume1pt23ao.png
part3:https://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8574/volume1pt34jq.png
part4:https://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3946/volume1pt48yj.png

volume 2
Enemy on route 1
part1:https://img32.imageshack.us/img32/6164/volume2pt15tq.png
part2:https://img32.imageshack.us/img32/2738/volume2pt23ml.png
part3:https://img32.imageshack.us/img32/7784/volume2pt39cc.png
part4:https://img32.imageshack.us/img32/937/volume2pt47by.png

i give credit for the spriters resource website
what do u guys think?

 

[Matt Silver]

I might throw u a bone:

For starters: Amateur not Amuture
You have written Part3 twice.
The odd spelling mistakes, sprites are bad recolours (Paint colours).
Try again.

 

[Jedite1000]

**** i thought i did good i guess i shouldnt make the comic no body likes it

 

[Matt Silver]

Nah. Btw GIVE CREDIT to whomever u gotg sprites off.

 

[Jedite1000]

i got it from a site not a person

 

[Signomi]

Regardless, you should still give credit to the resource you've found the sprites from.

 

[Jedite1000]

but anyway do u like my comics so far

 

[Celebi22]

Yeah your comics are above Average but the main thing that bothers me are the bad spriting colors.Don't use the default colors of MS Paint if you are using that program.Try to use better colors next time.

 

[Jedite1000]

what do i need to do 2 improve or change my comic to look better

 

[Crystal Walrus]

you may want these overworlds they come in handy

 

[Jedite1000]

wow those will come in handy...ur my new best friend now...hehehe

 

[Crystal Walrus]

are you serios?,I only gave you them coz I thought you may need em, if anyone needs em take em they aint mine sum 1 gave me them creditless

 

[Jedite1000]

it was only a joke anyway lol...but thanx for the sprites..i will redo my comic

 

[Jedite1000]

this thread is closed im gonna improve my comic....darn it i spose 2 click edit..but b4 i go does anyone know how 2 put a image on th thread that u can click on..so wen u do a destinatec link will come up???/